Keys— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Өөрийн хариултдаа илүү энгийн, логик дараалалтай, товч хэлбэр барь. Төвөгтэй үгс, буруу байрлалтай нэр үгсийг засаж, холбоос үгс ашигла. Жишээ нь эхэндээ шууд тоо болон зориулалтаа хэл, дараа дэлгэрэнгүй тайлбарла.

Ejemplo: I usually carry three main keys. One is my car key, another is my office key and the last one is my house key. I keep my office and house keys together on the same keyring, so they are easy to find.

Sugerencia: Хариултаа цэгцтэй болгож, илүү тодорхой жишээ өг. Дахин давтагдсан үг (uh, umm) хэрэглэхгүй байх. Тухай, тоо болон үр дагаврыг тодорхой бич. Мөр бүр 1-2 өгүүлбэртэй байлга.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have lost my keys several times. In one or two cases I managed to find them, but other times I had to visit a locksmith to get a replacement key made.

Sugerencia: Илүү яг утгатай, товч хариулт өг. Өгүүлбэрийн бүтцийг сайжруулж, нөхөрийнхөө жишээг тодруул. Холбоос үг ашиглан шалтгааныг тайлбарла.

Ejemplo: No, that has never happened to me. However, a friend of mine once locked his keys inside his car and had to call roadside assistance to open it for him.

Sugerencia: Иймэрхүү санал дээр давуу болон сул талыг хоёр өгүүлбэрээр тодорхой бич. Тодорхой үг хэрэглэж, буруу үг (rantum) болон дутуу санааг арилга. Дүгнэлтээр нэг энгийн санал нэмж өг.

Ejemplo: Yes, leaving a spare key with a neighbour can be a good idea, especially if you often lose your keys. However, it is best to give it to a trusted neighbour to avoid security risks.

× What myself I take usually three main keys, one is for my car, they're not related to the office and last one is my home key, but both of them are I put together.

✓ I usually take three keys with me: one for my car, one for the office, and one for my home; I keep the last two together.

The student used incorrect reflexive/pronoun order ('What myself I take') and ambiguous pronouns ('they're not related to the office', 'both of them are I put together'). Use 'I usually take' for normal word order, specify each key with 'one for' to be clear, and use 'I keep the last two together' for correct subject-verb structure. Suggestions: remove 'myself' here, follow subject-verb-object order, and name each key clearly. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× Yes, indeed, it happened several times. Uh, in one or two cases I found back my keys that I've lost. But uh, in rest auto cases I had to umm, visit the locksmith to make a copy of the uh, Kiev umm, for me.

✓ Yes, indeed, it happened several times. In one or two cases I found my lost keys. But in the other cases I had to visit a locksmith to have a key made for me.

Problems: 'found back' is nonstandard — use 'found'; 'keys that I've lost' mixes present perfect unnecessarily when simple past fits narrative; 'in rest auto cases' is incorrect wording — use 'in the other cases'; 'make a copy of the Kiev' contains wrong noun and article usage and verb form — use 'have a key made' or 'have a copy made'. Suggestions: use simple past for completed past events, use standard collocations like 'found my keys' and 'have a key made'. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× No, it never happened to me, but uh, one of my friends had the same problem. He locked himself inside the car but the key was out so he had to ask a support. Umm.

✓ No, it has never happened to me, but one of my friends had the same problem. He locked himself out of the car while the key was outside, so he had to ask for help.

Issues: tense consistency — 'No, it never happened to me' is acceptable but 'has never happened to me' is more natural; phrase 'locked himself inside the car but the key was out' is awkward and uses incorrect prepositions — correct is 'locked himself out of the car' and 'the key was outside'; 'ask a support' is incorrect collocation — use 'ask for help'. Suggestions: use correct phrasal verbs ('locked out'), correct prepositions ('out of', 'outside'), and 'ask for help' instead of 'ask a support'. (Grammar problem type ID: 2)

× Yes, it could be one of the best options, especially for people that frequently loses their keys because, umm, anyway, there is a spare rantum, uh, easily to get under any circumstance.

✓ Yes, it can be a good option, especially for people who frequently lose their keys because there is a spare key available that can be accessed easily in many circumstances.

Problems: 'people that frequently loses' has pronoun and subject-verb agreement errors — use 'people who frequently lose' ('people' plural takes 'lose'); 'spare rantum' is incorrect word choice — likely 'spare key'; 'easily to get under any circumstance' is ungrammatical — use 'can be accessed easily in many circumstances'. Suggestions: use 'people who', match verb to plural subject, use correct vocabulary ('spare key'), and use correct passive/active structure to express availability. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)