Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct minor grammar mistakes and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail about taste or ingredients using a linking phrase. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and remove repetitions.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is Chicken Mandi, an Arabian dish that is also popular in Kerala. It consists of spiced chicken served with aromatic rice, which I enjoy because of its smoky flavour and rich spices.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer with a clear past preference followed by a reason for change. Use simple past tense correctly and avoid broken sentences. Provide one specific detail about the food you liked as a child and one reason why your taste changed.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I liked biryani because I loved its rich spices and tender meat. However, my preference changed after a family trip to Saudi Arabia, where I tried Chicken Mandi and liked its smoky rice and different spice mix.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly. Remove hesitations and contradictions. Give one clear reason why your diet is consistent and, if relevant, one short example of foods you eat regularly. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I don't change my diet much during the year because I follow a regular meal plan. For example, I usually eat rice, vegetables and chicken throughout the year.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear statement about change, then give a concise reason and one vivid detail about the new favourite. Correct pronunciation/spelling of dish names and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed. I used to prefer biryani as a child, but after visiting my parents abroad I discovered Chicken Mandi and now I love its fragrant, spiced rice and tender chicken.

× My favorite food is called Chicken Mandi.

✓ My favorite food is Chicken Mandi.

The verb 'is called' is unnecessary when naming a favorite food; use the simple copula 'is' with the name. Use 'Chicken Mandi' without 'called' for natural expression.

× It is an Arabian dish but it is very popular in Kerala.

✓ It is an Arabian dish, but it is very popular in Kerala.

The sentence needs a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'but' to join two independent clauses. This is a punctuation/clauses issue that affects readability.

× The the dishes made by chicken and uh it has flavours of rice.

✓ The dish is made with chicken and has flavors of rice.

Problems: repeated 'the', incorrect word order, and mixed singular/plural. Rephrase to subject 'The dish', use correct preposition 'made with', and match verbs 'is made' and 'has' for clear structure.

× I liked when I was child I liked biryani, but later it changed into monthly after visiting Saudi Arabia from in my vacation because my parents were there at that time.

✓ When I was a child, I liked biryani, but my taste changed after I visited Saudi Arabia on vacation because my parents were there.

Errors include missing article before 'child', awkward repetition and incorrect phrase 'changed into monthly' and incorrect prepositions. Use past tense consistently, add 'a' before 'child', and rephrase 'changed after I visited Saudi Arabia on vacation' for clarity.

× So I so when I visited there I taste the.

✓ So when I visited there, I tasted it.

Use past tense 'tasted' to match 'visited' and include the object 'it'. Remove stammering filler words 'So I so' for grammatical sentence structure.

× No, uh, I don't usually like usually I don't usually eat like that.

✓ No, I don't usually eat like that.

Redundant repeated adverbs 'usually' and filler 'uh' create ungrammatical repetition. Keep a single 'usually' for correct, concise speech.

× I have a diet system and I have not diet.

✓ I have a diet plan, and I do not follow a strict diet.

Original has incorrect negative construction 'have not diet' and awkward noun 'diet system'. Use 'do not' for negative and 'diet plan' or 'strict diet' for clarity.

× I usually eat same type of foods throughout the year.

✓ I usually eat the same type of food throughout the year.

Use 'the same type' and singular 'food' or plural 'foods' consistently. 'The same type of food' is the natural collocation.

× When I was so young, I used to like I'm a biryani, but later it changed to Monday after visiting my parents abroad.

✓ When I was very young, I used to like biryani, but later it changed after I visited my parents abroad.

Errors: 'I'm a biryani' is incorrect; 'so young' better as 'very young'; 'changed to Monday' is wrong (likely 'Mandi' intended). Use past tense and correct noun 'Mandi' if referring to Chicken Mandi. Also remove contraction misuse.

× I ate chicken Maundy and the flavors of the uh, that rice really got me.

✓ I ate chicken Mandi, and the flavors of that rice really won me over.

Spelling and word choice: 'Maundy' should be 'Mandi'. 'The flavors of that rice really got me' is informal and unclear; 'won me over' or 'really impressed me' is clearer. Remove filler 'uh' and fix comma placement.