Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence naming the favourite food, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words (umm, you know) and self-deprecating comments like "I'm a bit foolish." Use correct grammar (e.g., "different kinds of food").

Ejemplo: My favourite food is chocolate. I love its smooth, rich texture and the intense sweetness that lifts my mood. For example, I often have dark chocolate after dinner because it helps me relax and satisfies my sweet tooth.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and add one specific detail. Correct grammar and vocabulary: say what you liked (e.g., "I didn't like proper meals such as vegetables or soups") and give a clear example of preferred foods. Avoid unclear terms ("Lays cursives"). Use linking words like "instead" or "rather".

Ejemplo: When I was young, I didn't like proper meals such as vegetables or soup. Instead, I preferred desserts and snacks, especially potato chips and cookies, because they were more fun to eat and tasted sweeter to me.

Sugerencia: Good structure and relevant content; improve accuracy and specificity. Use correct season references (e.g., strawberries are usually summer in many countries), avoid unclear phrases ("in samurai"), and add one linking phrase. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I prefer seasonal foods because they taste fresher and are cheaper; for example, I eat strawberries in summer and enjoy mangoes in late spring when they are ripe. Therefore, I usually plan my meals around what’s in season.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, complete response: start by stating whether it has changed, then explain why with a specific example. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, sentence endings) and avoid trailing off. Use linking words such as "but" or "however."

Ejemplo: Not really — I still enjoy desserts and snacks, but my attitude has changed. After seeing friends develop health problems from poor diets, I now eat sweets less often and choose healthier alternatives like dark chocolate or fruit as snacks.

× I'm a bit foolish so I'm open to trying different thing, different kind of food in different countries.

✓ I'm a bit foolish so I'm open to trying different things, different kinds of food in different countries.

The noun 'thing' should be plural ('things') because 'different' implies multiple items. Similarly 'kind' should be plural ('kinds') when referring to various types of food. Use plural nouns after 'different' to match meaning and maintain subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: Use 'different things' and 'different kinds of food' when speaking about multiple varieties.

× It's smooth and rich texture really attracts me a lot.

✓ Its smooth, rich texture really attracts me a lot.

The original uses the contraction 'It's' (it is), which creates an incorrect structure: 'it is smooth and rich texture' is ungrammatical. The correct possessive is 'its' to modify 'texture'. Also add a comma between adjectives for clarity. Suggestion: Use the possessive 'its' when indicating a characteristic of something.

× And well, I don't like it. Proper meals such as vegetables or some soups.

✓ And well, I didn't like proper meals such as vegetables or soups.

The original two fragments create sentence structure problems: 'I don't like it.' is present tense while the question asks about childhood. Also 'Proper meals such as vegetables or some soups.' is a fragment lacking a verb. Change to past tense 'didn't like' and combine into one complete sentence. Suggestion: For past habits, use past tense and complete clauses.

× I was far more interested in desserts and snacks like Lays cursives.

✓ I was far more interested in desserts and snacks like Lays crisps.

'Lays cursives' appears to be a mistaken phrase. Likely intended 'Lays crisps' (or 'Lay's' as a brand). The adjective choice 'cursive' is incorrect here. Use the correct noun 'crisps' (British) or 'chips' (American) or the brand name 'Lay's'. Suggestion: Use accurate vocabulary for food items and brand names.

× For example I eat strawberries in winter or tropical food like mangoes when they are the best and like in samurai.

✓ For example, I eat strawberries in winter or tropical fruits like mangoes when they are at their best and in summer.

Several preposition and word choice issues: 'when they are the best' is informal; 'at their best' is idiomatic. 'Like in samurai' is incorrect; likely intended 'in summer'. Also 'tropical food' should be 'tropical fruits' when referring to mangoes. Suggestion: Use 'at their best' and the correct season 'summer' and correct noun 'fruits'.

× So eating seasonally just feel more natural for me.

✓ So eating seasonally just feels more natural to me.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'eating seasonally' is a singular gerund phrase and requires the singular verb 'feels'. Also preposition 'for me' is acceptable but 'to me' is more natural in this context. Suggestion: Match verb form to gerund subject and prefer 'feels... to me'.

× Uh, well, not really my preferences haven't changed that much, I still have a strong link to the desserts or snacks is umm.

✓ Uh, well, not really. My preferences haven't changed that much; I still have a strong liking for desserts and snacks.

Run-on and tense/word-choice issues: original mixes clauses without proper punctuation. 'A strong link to' is incorrect collocation; use 'a strong liking for'. Also separate sentences for clarity. Suggestion: Use proper punctuation, correct collocations, and maintain present perfect for continuing states.

× However, the attitude towards them have defi have totally changed because I saw a lot of people around me get some serious diseases and due to the unhealthy diet so I changed my.

✓ However, my attitude towards them has totally changed because I saw a lot of people around me develop serious illnesses due to unhealthy diets, so I changed mine.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('attitude... has'), redundant/mistyped words ('defi have'), incorrect verb choice ('get some serious diseases' -> 'develop serious illnesses'), and awkward ending 'I changed my.' which lacks an object; corrected to 'I changed mine' referring to 'attitude' or 'diet'. Also 'unhealthy diets' is more natural than 'the unhealthy diet'. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with subject, remove typos, use appropriate verbs and complete pronouns to avoid sentence fragments.