Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct small grammar issues (use plural/singular and articles) and use precise vocabulary (e.g. "corn" not "corns").

Ejemplo: My favourite food is white sauce pasta because it’s rich and comforting. For variety, I often add mushrooms and broccoli, which make the dish creamier and more nutritious.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and repetition, and organise your answer: give a clear topic sentence then 1–2 reasons or an anecdote. Use correct word choices and grammar (past tense, avoid unclear words like "aids").

Ejemplo: As a child I loved sweets such as chocolates, candies and cookies because they tasted great and cheered me up after school. I used to save my pocket money to buy them from the corner shop.

Sugerencia: Speak more smoothly and remove filler words. Keep structure: topic sentence + two specific examples with linking words. Use singular/plural agreement and precise adjectives (e.g. "warmer", "more comforting").

Ejemplo: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in winter I prefer root vegetables because they feel warmer and more comforting, whereas in summer I choose fresh fruits and salads because they are lighter and refreshing.

Sugerencia: Be direct and use past vs present contrast clearly. Provide one clear reason and an example of current preferences. Avoid awkward phrases like "healthy diet food" and correct verb agreement.

Ejemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed. I used to prefer sweets like chocolates, but now I focus on healthier options such as vegetables and protein-rich foods because I care more about nutrition and energy.

× I absolutely love eating white sauce pasta. Sometimes I add different kind of veggies inside this pasta such as mushrooms, broccoli, corns which makes this more makes it more. Makes it more creamy and tasty.

✓ I absolutely love eating white sauce pasta. Sometimes I add different kinds of vegetables to this pasta, such as mushrooms, broccoli and corn, which makes it creamier and tastier.

Errors: 'different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' or 'different kinds of'; 'veggies' is informal—use 'vegetables'; 'inside this pasta' is awkward—use 'to this pasta'; 'corns' is uncountable so use 'corn'; repeated phrasing 'which makes this more makes it more. Makes it more' is redundant and ungrammatical; comparative adjectives need '-er' forms ('creamier', 'tastier'). Suggestion: use correct quantifier forms, correct noun forms (uncountable), remove repetition, and use comparative adjectives for improved clarity.

× When I was a child, I, I love eating chocolates, candies, milk, aids, cookies.

✓ When I was a child, I loved eating chocolates, candies, milk and cookies.

Mixed tenses: the clause begins with 'When I was a child' (past time), so the verb should be past tense 'loved' not present 'love'. Also extraneous filler 'I, I' should be removed; 'aids' is likely incorrect word—removed. Suggestion: Match past time expressions with past tense verbs and remove fillers.

× Uh, uh, so I really enjoyed these kinds of foods because of the taste and delicious taste are delicious and gave me in the comfort after school.

✓ So I really enjoyed those kinds of foods because they tasted delicious and gave me comfort after school.

Pronoun and sentence structure errors: 'these kinds of foods' while referring to past should be 'those kinds of foods'; repetition 'the taste and delicious taste are delicious' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'gave me in the comfort' incorrect preposition 'in' should be omitted: 'gave me comfort'. Suggestion: use appropriate demonstrative pronoun for past reference, avoid redundancy, and use correct prepositions.

× And I love to save money to buy all those kinds.

✓ And I loved to save money to buy those treats.

Tense mismatch: previous context is past, so use 'loved' not 'love'. 'All those kinds' is vague; 'treats' or 'sweets' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense and use a clear noun.

× Yes, I often feel uh, eat a different foods, uh, on different times of the year.

✓ Yes, I often eat different foods at different times of the year.

Errors: unnecessary filler 'feel uh,' removed; 'a different foods' mixes singular article with plural noun—use 'different foods'; 'on different times' wrong preposition and number—use 'at different times'. Suggestion: remove fillers, match articles with noun number, and use correct prepositions for time expressions.

× In winter I love to eat root vegetables because it feels more uh, warming and comforting, while in the uh summer I just love to eat fruits and vegetables and salads, which feels lighter.

✓ In winter I love to eat root vegetables because they feel warmer and more comforting, while in summer I prefer to eat fruits, vegetables and salads, which feel lighter.

Agreement and comparative errors: 'it feels' should agree with plural 'root vegetables' so use 'they feel'; 'warming' is adjective but comparative 'warmer' fits contrast; 'the uh summer' unnecessary 'the' and filler removed; 'love to eat' repeated—use 'prefer' for contrast; 'which feels lighter' should be 'which feel lighter' to agree with plural subject. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, choose correct comparative adjectives, and remove fillers.

× Certainly because when I was a child I would love to eat sweet foods like chocolates, candies, etcetera, but now I just want to. I just love to eat healthy diet food such as vegetables, protein rich foods which has proper nutrition so much.

✓ Certainly. When I was a child I loved to eat sweet foods like chocolates and candies, but now I prefer to eat a healthy diet with vegetables and protein-rich foods that provide proper nutrition.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: 'would love' is awkward—use simple past 'loved' to describe past habitual action; 'but now I just want to.' is incomplete and should be connected to present preference; 'I just love to eat healthy diet food' is awkward—use 'prefer to eat a healthy diet'; 'protein rich foods which has' subject-verb agreement wrong—'foods' plural requires 'have' or rephrase to 'that provide'. 'so much' is vague and unnecessary. Suggestion: use clear past vs present phrasing, fix agreement, hyphenate 'protein-rich', and use 'that provide' for clauses describing plural nouns.