Part 1
Examinador
What is your favourite food?
Candidato
My favorite food is rice and meat and vegetable. I like eat lunch in my home.
Examinador
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Candidato
Very young. I like the sweet food like Coca-Cola and hamburger and chicken. I like ice cream.
Examinador
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Candidato
Yes, breakfast I like eat hamburger and milk and lunch I like it rice and meat and vegetable I like soup.
Examinador
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Candidato
I like ice cream and chicken and fish. I like sweet food and. Drink water.
What is your favourite food?
Puntuación: 56.0Sugerencia: 回答需要更自然、句子结构更完整,并用连接词把信息组织起来。回答不应重复且尽量具体说明为什么喜欢这些食物(例如口味、营养或习惯)。注意动词形式(如“eat”应为“eating”或“to eat”)和冠词使用。最多控制在3-4句内。
Ejemplo: My favourite food is a simple meal of rice with meat and vegetables because it's comforting and healthy. I usually eat it at home for lunch, where my family prepares fresh vegetables and a flavorful sauce. I prefer this dish because it fills me up without feeling heavy.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答要以完整句子直接回应问题,说明过去喜好的具体内容并用连接词显示对比或原因(例如“when I was young, I preferred… because…”)。避免只列举食品,要补充简短原因或感受。动词时态应使用过去时(liked)。
Ejemplo: When I was young, I liked sweet and fast foods such as Coca‑Cola, hamburgers and ice cream because they tasted exciting and were treats on special occasions. However, I didn't always enjoy vegetables back then.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: 问题是关于季节性变化,但学生回答讲述了日常饮食时间而非季节差异。应先直接回应季节性(Yes/No),然后用连接词解释并给出具体例子(例如夏天吃冷饮、冬天喝汤)。同时注意语法(use present simple, correct verb forms)并组织成2-3句。
Ejemplo: Not really — I don't change my main dishes much by season, but I do adjust some items. For example, in winter I eat more hot soups and stews, while in summer I prefer cold salads and iced drinks. At breakfast I usually have milk and something quick, and lunch is often rice with meat and vegetables.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: 回答没有直接比较现在与童年,且语句不完整。应先用过去与现在对比(My favourite has/has not changed),然后说明具体变化并给出原因(例如健康、口味成熟)。用连词连接观点并注意完整句子和时态一致。
Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since I was a child. I used to prefer very sweet snacks like ice cream and sugary drinks, but now I enjoy chicken, fish and more balanced meals because I care more about health and flavour.
× My favorite food is rice and meat and vegetable.
✓ My favorite foods are rice, meat, and vegetables.
原句存在冠词/可数名词单复数使用错误。这里列举多种食物时应使用复数(vegetables)或不可数名词的正确形式,并且整体上“food”改为“foods”或将列举项用复数更自然。建议使用复数并用逗号分隔项。
× I like eat lunch in my home.
✓ I like eating lunch at my home.
动词短语“like”后需要接动名词(-ing)而不是动词原形,因此应为“like eating”。此外表示地点常用介词“at”或省略,中文建议使用“在我家吃午饭”,故用“At my home”。
× What kind of food did you like when you were young? Student: Very young. I like the sweet food like Coca-Cola and hamburger and chicken. I like ice cream.
✓ When I was very young, I liked sweet foods like Coca-Cola, hamburgers, and chicken. I also liked ice cream.
时态与主谓一致错误:问题是过去时,回答应使用过去时(liked)。另外“food”复数和具体可数名词需用复数(hamburgers)或将其归类为“foods”。句子开头应完整表达时间状语“when I was very young”。
× Yes, breakfast I like eat hamburger and milk and lunch I like it rice and meat and vegetable I like soup.
✓ Yes. For breakfast, I like eating hamburgers and drinking milk; for lunch, I like rice, meat, and vegetables. I also like soup.
同样,“like”后应接动名词(eating/drinking)。句子缺少标点与连贯性,需要重组以清晰表达早餐和午餐的偏好;“hamburger”与“milk”搭配需用动词“drink”表达饮用,且列举名词用复数或并列形式更自然。
× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? Student: I like ice cream and chicken and fish. I like sweet food and. Drink water.
✓ Yes. I like ice cream, chicken, and fish. I also like sweet foods, and I drink water.
问题是现在完成时询问变化,若表述当前喜好应用现在时,但原句断裂且有语法碎片“and. Drink water.”应合并为完整句子。保持现在时使用“like”和“drink”,并将“sweet food”改为复数或可数表达以更自然。