Part 1
Examinador
What is your favourite food?
Candidato
My favorite food is a Punjabi and Chinese.
Examinador
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Candidato
My food is Punjabi and Chinese because of Punjabi this is are very variety of flavours and Chinese is a very delicious food and this this age so many cravings this food and not cravings in Gujarati and.
Examinador
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Candidato
Yes, I eat different food at different times of this year because Gujarati food and many Punjabis are different items and South Indians items are very tasty. But my favorite food was Manchurian and Chinese and Punjabi Thales this year.
Examinador
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, umm, my friend, he, he, he shared that our favorite food change since you're very child. Uh, I am, I am change since, uh, my child age and child age is very smooth and, uh, very precious, but, uh.
What is your favourite food?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Be direct and grammatically correct. State one or two favorite cuisines clearly, use singular/plural correctly, and add a brief reason. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and avoid unnecessary words.
Ejemplo: My favourite foods are Punjabi and Chinese cuisine because I enjoy bold spices in Punjabi dishes and the varied flavours in Chinese food.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence about what you liked as a child, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.
Ejemplo: When I was young I liked Punjabi and Chinese food. I loved Punjabi food for its variety of spices and rich flavours, and Chinese dishes because they were tasty and easy to share with family.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give specific seasonal examples and a brief reason using linking words (for example, because or so). Avoid listing too many items without structure and correct noun forms.
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. In winter I prefer hot Punjabi dishes like sarson ka saag, while in summer I choose lighter South Indian foods such as idli and rasam because they are refreshing.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Puntuación: 25.0Sugerencia: Give a clear yes/no answer and then explain briefly how and why it changed. Use past and present tenses correctly, avoid filler words, and keep to 2–3 coherent sentences.
Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to prefer simple Gujarati snacks, but now I enjoy Punjabi and Chinese dishes because I like stronger flavours and more variety.
× My favorite food is a Punjabi and Chinese.
✓ My favorite foods are Punjabi and Chinese.
The student used an unnecessary article 'a' before 'Punjabi' and mismatched singular/plural. Since two cuisines are named, plural 'foods' and plural verb 'are' are required. Use no article before cuisine names and match number: 'My favorite foods are Punjabi and Chinese.'
× My food is Punjabi and Chinese because of Punjabi this is are very variety of flavours and Chinese is a very delicious food and this this age so many cravings this food and not cravings in Gujarati and.
✓ I like Punjabi and Chinese food because Punjabi cuisine has a great variety of flavors, and Chinese food is very delicious. Recently I have had many cravings for these foods and not for Gujarati food.
Multiple errors: incorrect verb forms ('is are'), wrong article use, awkward pronouns and structure. The sentence needs present simple to express general liking and present perfect/simple for recent cravings. Use 'Punjabi cuisine has' (singular subject with 'has'), 'a great variety of flavors' (correct quantifier and noun), and clarify time expression: 'recently I have had many cravings.' Break into clear clauses to improve coherence.
× Yes, I eat different food at different times of this year because Gujarati food and many Punjabis are different items and South Indians items are very tasty. But my favorite food was Manchurian and Chinese and Punjabi Thales this year.
✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because Gujarati, Punjabi, and South Indian cuisines have different dishes and are very tasty. But my favorite dishes this year have been Manchurian, other Chinese dishes, and Punjabi thali.
Use plural 'foods' when referring generally. Use 'the year' for time period. 'Many Punjabis' is incorrect; use 'Punjabi cuisine' or 'Punjabi dishes.' 'South Indians items' should be 'South Indian dishes.' For current preferences this year, present perfect ('have been') is appropriate. 'Thales' misspelling; correct 'thali.'
× Yes, umm, my friend, he, he, he shared that our favorite food change since you're very child. Uh, I am, I am change since, uh, my child age and child age is very smooth and, uh, very precious, but, uh.
✓ Yes. My friend said that our favorite foods have changed since we were children. I have changed since my childhood; my childhood was smooth and very precious.
Errors include incorrect tense and form: 'shared' vs 'said' is acceptable but 'have changed' (present perfect) expresses change from past to present. 'Since you're very child' is grammatically incorrect; use 'since we were children' or 'since my childhood.' Remove filler words and repeated pronouns. Use 'my childhood' as a noun phrase and simple adjectives 'smooth and precious.'