Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and avoid repeated words and incorrect vocabulary. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct word choice (e.g. ‘mussels’ → ‘masses of spice’ or ‘heavy spices’) and remove fillers like ‘uh’. Keep length to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is chicken, especially when it’s cooked with simple ingredients such as garlic, ginger and local chillies. I prefer it lightly spiced rather than heavily seasoned, because that way the natural flavour and juiciness stand out.

Sugerencia: Correct unclear or incorrect words (e.g. ‘rascuals’ or ‘rasculars’ unclear) and avoid overlong explanations. Give a direct topic sentence and one clear supporting detail with a linking phrase. Reduce repetition of reasons and tense errors.

Ejemplo: When I was young I loved sweet foods, especially candies and chocolate. I ate them often at parties and family gatherings because they made me happy.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and unfinished sentences. Use linking words (e.g. ‘in contrast’, ‘while’) and be specific about examples and reasons. Fix grammar (e.g. ‘it makes me it keeps my body warm’ → ‘it keeps me warm’) and finish the final thought.

Ejemplo: Yes. In winter I prefer warm, spicy dishes because they help me stay warm, while in summer I choose cool, hydrating foods such as salads, cucumber and mango to keep me refreshed.

Sugerencia: Use consistent tense and precise vocabulary. State the change directly, then give one clear reason with linking words. Avoid fillers and vague phrases like ‘all these vitamin and proteins’ — say ‘vitamins and protein’.

Ejemplo: Yes. As a child I preferred sweets such as chocolate and candy, but now I choose healthier options like vegetables and lean meat because I want more vitamins and protein to stay fit.

× I love chicken, especially when it it's cooked with, uh, simple ingredients like garlic, ginger, and local chilies.

✓ I love chicken, especially when it is cooked with simple ingredients like garlic, ginger, and local chilies.

The original contains a repeated word 'it it's' which is a typo and disrupts the sentence. Remove the extra 'it' and use 'is' to form the passive 'is cooked'. Also remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary comma before 'simple' for clarity.

× I prefer it slightly lightly spiced rather than with heavy mussels because that way the natural flavor and juiciness stands out.

✓ I prefer it lightly spiced rather than heavily spiced because that way the natural flavor and juiciness stand out.

'Slightly lightly' is redundant; choose one adverb ('lightly'). 'Heavy mussels' seems to be a wrong word; likely 'heavily spiced' is intended. 'Stands' should be 'stand' to agree with the plural subject 'flavor and juiciness'. Use parallel structure 'lightly spiced' vs 'heavily spiced'.

× When I was young, I had a sweet tooth, so I loved candies, chocolates and rasculars.

✓ When I was young, I had a sweet tooth, so I loved candies, chocolates and rascals.

The tense 'When I was young, I had' is correct, but the word 'rasculars' appears to be a misspelling. I corrected it to 'rascals' (or another intended snack name). Ensure correct spelling of nouns.

× I used to eat them very often because I like sweets and it gives me pleasure when I have it, and I mostly have it during parties and family gatherings.

✓ I used to eat them very often because I liked sweets and they gave me pleasure when I had them, and I mostly had them during parties and family gatherings.

This sentence mixes past habitual 'used to' with present tense verbs ('like', 'gives', 'have'). Maintain past tense throughout: 'liked', 'gave', 'had'. Also use consistent plural pronouns: 'them' for candies/ chocolates.

× During winter I prefer warm and spicy food because it makes me it keeps my body warm.

✓ During winter I prefer warm and spicy food because it keeps my body warm.

The original repeats segments 'it makes me it keeps' causing redundancy and ungrammatical structure. Use a single clause 'because it keeps my body warm.'

× While in summer I prefer cool and fresh foods like salad, cucumber and mango to hydrate my body and help me to.

✓ In summer I prefer cool and fresh foods like salad, cucumber and mango to hydrate my body and help me feel refreshed.

'While in summer' is awkward; 'In summer' is simpler. The phrase 'help me to' is incomplete; add an infinitive object such as 'feel refreshed' or 'stay cool.' Also use plural agreement 'foods like salad, cucumber, and mango' is acceptable but consider pluralizing items or using 'such as'.

× Yes, when I was a child, I preferred sweets like chocolates, rasculars, uh, and candy.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I preferred sweets like chocolates, rascals, and candy.

Tense 'preferred' is correct for past. 'Rasculars' is likely a misspelling; corrected to 'rascals'. Remove filler 'uh' for formal clarity.

× But now I preferred healthier foods like vegetables, uh, meat and all these vitamin and proteins to keep my body stay fit and feel better.

✓ But now I prefer healthier foods like vegetables and meat, and I eat foods with vitamins and protein to keep my body fit and feel better.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'preferred' with 'now'; change to present 'prefer'. 'Uh' removed. 'All these vitamin and proteins' is ungrammatical: use 'vitamins and protein' (plural/singular as appropriate) and rephrase to 'I eat foods with vitamins and protein' or 'that provide vitamins and protein'. Remove redundant 'stay' in 'keep my body stay fit' to 'keep my body fit'.