Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and concise: state your favourite foods in one clear topic sentence, then give a specific example and brief reason using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, umm) and grammatical errors (e.g. "Which one is" wrong structure).

Ejemplo: I like two kinds of food: spicy dishes and sweet desserts. For example, I often choose spicy chicken when I want strong flavours, but if I prefer something mild I eat desserts like cake or ice cream.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and be specific about reasons. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two detailed supporting points linked by words like "because" or "but". Clarify unclear phrases ("make me feel so tricky" is confusing).

Ejemplo: When I was ten, I liked sweet foods because they made me feel happy. I didn’t like spicy food then, but when I was eighteen I tried it and discovered I enjoy the strong flavors now.

Sugerencia: Answer directly yes/no, use correct tense, and give one specific example or plan. Organise with linking words like "however" or "but" when contrasting. Avoid vague time references and unclear phrases ("how it takes").

Ejemplo: Not really — I usually eat the same kinds of food all year in my country. However, I plan to travel next year and hope to try new dishes, such as sushi in Japan or tacos in Mexico.

Sugerencia: Give a clear comparison using past and present tenses, explain why the change happened with a specific reason, and avoid unclear words ("tricky must"). Keep it concise: one topic sentence and one supporting sentence with linking words like "because" or "now".

Ejemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I loved sweets like candy and ice cream, but now I prefer spicy foods because I enjoy stronger, more complex flavours.

× OK, I like uh, two kinds of food. Which one is spicy food and also sweet things.

✓ OK, I like two kinds of food: spicy food and sweet things.

The original used 'Which one' incorrectly to introduce types. This is a sentence structure/conjunction issue; use a colon or conjunction 'and' without 'Which one' to list categories. Remove filler 'uh' and extra commas for clarity.

× If I don't to eat spicy food like umm Christmas chicken or spicy chicken, I always eat sweet things like dessert.

✓ If I do not eat spicy food, such as Christmas chicken or spicy chicken, I always eat sweet things like dessert.

The phrase 'don't to eat' is incorrect; after 'do not' use base verb 'eat'. This is verb + auxiliary error. Also clarify with 'such as' and remove fillers.

× When I was 10 years old I like uh sweet things because it's can make my day feel so cheerful.

✓ When I was 10 years old I liked sweet things because they could make my days feel cheerful.

Tense consistency: talking about past ('When I was 10') requires past tense 'liked' and 'could' instead of present 'can'. Also 'it's can' is ungrammatical; use 'they could' referring to 'sweet things' (plural).

× First time I don't like a spicy things but in age 18 years old I try and it make me feel so tricky.

✓ At first I did not like spicy things, but at 18 years old I tried them and they made me feel excited.

Multiple issues: use of articles and number ('a spicy things' incorrect), tense ('did not like', 'tried', 'made'), and word choice ('tricky' is incorrect meaning; likely meant 'excited' or 'different'). This correction fixes article use, plural agreement, past tense, and word choice.

× I never eaten a different food in my country because I stay here about 25 years and I hoping I can try in different food in another country maybe next year or next month.

✓ I have never eaten different foods in my country because I have lived here for about 25 years, and I hope I can try different foods in another country maybe next year or next month.

Use present perfect 'have never eaten' for life experiences and 'have lived' for duration up to now. Plural 'foods' fits. Replace 'stay' with 'have lived' and 'I hoping' with 'I hope'. Remove 'in' before 'different food'.

× I really want to try it how it feel and how it takes.

✓ I really want to try them to see how they feel and how they are prepared.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace 'try it how it feel and how it takes' with 'try them to see how they feel and how they are prepared' to convey intent: experience taste and learn preparation. Match plural 'them' to 'foods'.

× Yes, a little different what I like food in my childhood but now when I was childhood I really like a sweet things like candy or ice cream, but for now I think I prefer spicy things to eat because it's so tricky must.

✓ Yes, my tastes are a little different from what I liked in childhood. When I was a child I really liked sweet things like candy or ice cream, but now I prefer spicy foods because they are more interesting.

Multiple article and tense errors: use 'my tastes' and 'different from what I liked', past tense 'liked' for childhood, 'a child' not 'when I was childhood'. 'Sweet things' is plural and needs no 'a'. 'Spicy things' -> 'spicy foods'. 'Tricky must' is incorrect; likely meant 'more interesting' or 'more appealing'. Fixed sentence structure, articles, pluralization and vocabulary.