Part 1
Examinador
What is your favourite food?
Candidato
I have many favorite food but I like milk better because it's healthy for me.
Examinador
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Candidato
I like to eat sweet food when I was young, but now I like it to North Swee.
Examinador
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Candidato
MMM sometimes I can eat. For example in summer I can eat ice cream and drinking, but in winter I can eat. Eat some. Healthy food.
Examinador
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Candidato
No, I like eat milk and chocolate. Until when I am 22 years old.
What is your favourite food?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 1) 语法与用词需更准确:注意名词单复数(favorite foods),以及表达偏好时用更自然的结构(prefer / I like ... best)。2) 答案应更直接并提供一到两句具体理由(例如健康成分或场合)。3) 控制长度在最多5句,避免冗余。练习用衔接词(because, so)使表达更连贯。
Ejemplo: I prefer milk to other drinks because it is nutritious and helps me stay hydrated. For example, I often drink milk in the morning to get calcium and protein.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 1) 时态需一致:谈过去习惯用过去时(I liked)。2) 表达要清晰,避免拼写或不明词汇(North Swee 不明确)。3) 提供具体对比理由并用连接词(but, however)。4) 保持句子简短且有具体细节(喜欢的甜食种类、原因)。
Ejemplo: I liked sweet foods when I was young, especially candies and chocolate, because they tasted fun. However, now I prefer fruit and yogurt because they feel healthier.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 1) 回答要直接并结构清楚(topic sentence + supporting details)。2) 注意句子连贯和完整,避免口头语(MMM)和断裂句。3) 使用季节词汇和具体食物,并用连接词(for example, in summer / in winter)。4) 控制在不超过5句并提供具体例子说明原因(天气影响选择)。
Ejemplo: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I often have ice cream and cold drinks to cool down, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 1) 回答要用清晰的时态和句子(No, my favourite foods haven't changed since I was a child.)。2) 如果要说明时间点或年龄,表达要准确(since / until 用法)。3) 给出少量细节说明持续原因或可能改变的原因。4) 保持简洁,最多5句。
Ejemplo: No, my favourite foods have not changed since childhood; I have always liked milk and chocolate. I still enjoy them because they are comforting and familiar.
× I have many favorite food but I like milk better because it's healthy for me.
✓ I have many favorite foods, but I like milk best because it's healthy for me.
句中“many”修饰可数名词时,名词必须用复数形式,应该是“many favorite foods”。此外,“like ... better”通常用于两个以上比较时不太自然,表示最喜欢应使用“like ... best”。建议:可数名词在被复数量词(many)修饰时必须变为复数;表达“最喜欢”用“best”。
× I like to eat sweet food when I was young, but now I like it to North Swee.
✓ I liked to eat sweet foods when I was young, but now I don't.
句子涉及过去习惯,应使用过去时“liked”。“sweet food”在泛指可数类别时应用复数“sweet foods”。原句后半部分“now I like it to North Swee”语义和结构均错误,推测意图是否已不再喜欢,改为“now I don't.” 更清晰。建议:谈过去习惯用过去时,泛指可数名词用复数,表达否定时用助动词do。
× MMM sometimes I can eat. For example in summer I can eat ice cream and drinking, but in winter I can eat. Eat some. Healthy food.
✓ Sometimes I can eat a lot. For example, in summer I can eat ice cream and drink cold drinks, but in winter I eat healthy food.
原句断句混乱,时态与动词搭配不当。“can eat”若表示能力或可能性可保留,但此处更自然表达习惯时用一般现在时或情态后接不定式/动名词。“eat ice cream and drinking”应为并列动词形式一致:“eat ... and drink ...”。“Eat some. Healthy food.” 是残缺句,需合并为完整句子“but in winter I eat healthy food”。建议:保持句子完整性,确保并列动词形式一致,选择合适时态(习惯用现在时)。
× No, I like eat milk and chocolate. Until when I am 22 years old.
✓ No, I liked drinking milk and eating chocolate until I was 22 years old.
描述过去持续到某个年龄时,应使用过去时“liked”和“was”。动词搭配应为“drink milk”“eat chocolate”,或将“drink”改为“drinking”,保持形式一致。原句“Until when I am 22 years old”时态和连词使用错误,应为“until I was 22 years old”。建议:表示过去持续到过去某点用过去时,注意动词形式一致及从句时态一致。