Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and direct: start with a topic sentence naming a favourite food (or say you have no single favourite), then give one or two specific reasons and a short example. Keep answers concise (max 3–4 sentences) and avoid irrelevant words or hesitations.

Ejemplo: I don't have one favourite food because it depends on my mood, but if I had to choose I would pick home-cooked curry. I like it because the spices feel comforting and it reminds me of family meals. For example, I often eat it after exercising because it restores my energy.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence naming a specific food from childhood, then give concrete details (flavour, texture, occasions) and use a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid unclear words and irrelevant phrases.

Ejemplo: When I was young I loved crispy Chinese-style burgers because they were juicy and full of flavour. I especially liked them after school as a treat, and the crispy texture made them more exciting than regular sandwiches.

Sugerencia: Answer directly (Yes or No) and then explain with specific examples of seasonal foods or traditions. Use linking words (for example, however, during) to make your explanation coherent and provide one short example of a special-occasion dish.

Ejemplo: Yes. On regular days I usually eat simple traditional meals like rice and vegetables, but during festivals I eat special dishes. For example, at New Year we prepare a rich meat curry that we only have once a year.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence saying whether it has changed, then explain reasons for the change with specific examples (health, preferences, cooking skills). Avoid vague philosophical statements and finish with a concise comparison between past and present choices.

Ejemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I ate a lot of chocolate and fast food, but now I prefer homemade meals because I care more about health and flavours. For instance, I often cook grilled fish and vegetables instead of buying snacks.

× Umm, food and radio station for survival and I love each and every foot.

✓ Umm, food is essential for survival and I love almost every kind of food.

Original sentence is disjointed and contains wrong words ('radio station' and 'foot') that do not fit context; this is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Corrected sentence uses a clear subject and verb ('food is'), removes irrelevant phrase, and replaces 'each and every foot' with 'almost every kind of food' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: Keep subject and verb together, choose vocabulary that fits context, and avoid unrelated nouns.

× It's really depend on upon my mood, uh, what I want to like to eat at that time.

✓ It really depends on my mood and what I want to eat at that time.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'It' requires the third person singular verb form 'depends'. Also 'depend on upon' is redundant and 'want to like to eat' is incorrect and wordy. Suggestion: Use 'depends on' and a simple verb phrase 'want to eat'.

× So whenever I start exercise, but I would say if I talk about the.

✓ Whenever I start exercising, I would say that...

The original mixes conjunctions and fragments ('but I would say if I talk about the.') creating an incomplete sentence. Use a single structure: 'Whenever I start exercising, I would say that...' Also change 'start exercise' to the gerund 'start exercising'.

× I'm actually, to be honest, I'm really fooly from my childhood, so I eat a lot of foods when I was young.

✓ To be honest, I have been very gluttonous since my childhood, so I ate a lot of food when I was young.

Multiple issues: repetition of subject and punctuation; misuse of 'fooly' (incorrect word) and incorrect tense sequence. Use 'have been' for a state from past to present, and 'ate' for a completed past action. Also 'food' is uncountable here, so not 'a lot of foods'. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary ('gluttonous' or 'greedy for food'), correct tenses, and avoid repeating the subject.

× It's hard to decide one.

✓ It's hard to decide on one.

Missing preposition: English requires 'decide on one' when choosing a single item. Suggestion: Use 'decide on' or 'choose one'.

× If I had to choose one that we would love to choose a burger, a Chinese burger, which is very crispy and it's full of meatloaf.

✓ If I had to choose one, I would choose a Chinese-style burger that is very crispy and full of meat.

Original mixes conditionals and persons ('we would love to choose') and uses awkward phrases ('Chinese burger', 'meatloaf' likely wrong). Corrected: use conditional 'If I had to choose one, I would choose...', maintain first person, and replace 'meatloaf' with 'meat' or 'meat filling'. Suggestion: Keep consistent subject and verb forms and choose precise vocabulary.

× Yeah, I would say that if I am the regular days, I love to, I love to eat my traditional food.

✓ Yeah, I would say that on regular days I like to eat my traditional food.

Tense and expression: 'if I am the regular days' is incorrect. Use adverbial phrase 'on regular days'. Use 'like to eat' rather than repeated 'I love to, I love to eat'. Suggestion: Use standard time expressions ('on regular days') and avoid repetition.

× And if you have food. The special occasions.

✓ And during special occasions I eat different foods.

Fragmented sentences: 'And if you have food.' and 'The special occasions.' are incomplete. Combine into a full sentence that matches the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use 'during special occasions' and a clear verb phrase.

× Yes, definitely. Aberrations are the part and parcel of our human life.

✓ Yes, definitely. Changes are part and parcel of human life.

Use of 'aberrations' is unusual and likely incorrect in this context; also article use 'the part and parcel of our human life' is awkward. Replace with 'changes are part and parcel of human life' for naturalness. Suggestion: Choose common collocations ('part and parcel') and appropriate nouns ('changes').

× So it's, uh, good for to become a better person.

✓ So it's good for becoming a better person.

Incorrect verb form after 'for': use gerund 'becoming' rather than infinitive 'to become' when following 'good for'. Suggestion: Use 'good for' + noun/gerund, or rephrase 'helps me become a better person'.

× So when I was a child, I really love to eat chocolates as well as burgers, fast food.

✓ When I was a child, I really loved to eat chocolates as well as burgers and fast food.

Tense inconsistency: 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'loved' not present 'love'. Also list punctuation: use 'and' between 'burgers and fast food'. Suggestion: Keep past time markers with past tense verbs.

× So now I prefer a home.

✓ So now I prefer home-cooked food.

'A home' is incorrect and incomplete. The speaker likely means 'home-cooked food' or 'eating at home'. Corrected to 'home-cooked food' for clarity. Suggestion: Use precise noun phrases like 'home-cooked food' or 'to eat at home'.