Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 表达要更自然，注意语法和重复。可以用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体理由和举例。注意冠词和词序（例如“I love it cake”应为“I love cake”或“I love it”）。避免重复信息，如“cannot live without sweet things”和“love it cake”传达相同意思。可加入连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: My favourite food is cake. I especially enjoy chocolate cake because its rich, moist texture and bittersweet frosting relax me after a long day. For example, I often have a small slice with tea in the evening to unwind.

Sugerencia: 需要纠正时态和语法，并使表达更清晰具体。使用过去时描述童年（例如“I liked”），说明原因要具体（如味道、营养或家庭习惯），并用连接词表达条件或频率。此外句子不要过长，分成两三句更自然。

Ejemplo: When I was young, I liked eating fish. I enjoyed its delicate flavour and the way my parents prepared it, usually steamed with soy sauce. However, I didn't eat it every day; it was a special treat my parents gave me when I did well at school.

Sugerencia: 回答总体不错，但可用更自然的搭配和连接词使其更流畅。把对比表达更明确（use 'in summer'/'in winter'），并给出更具体的原因或例子。避免直译式短语如“prefer to hot pot”——应说“prefer hot pot”或“prefer to eat hot pot”。

Ejemplo: Yes. In summer I often eat watermelon because it's refreshing and hydrating, while in winter I prefer hot pot since the warm broth and spicy flavours help me stay warm. For example, my family gathers around a hot pot during New Year.

Sugerencia: 回答清楚表达了持续的偏好，但句子可更简洁自然。用过去到现在对比句型（e.g. “It hasn't changed”）并补充具体细节或例子来支持观点。避免冗长结构。

Ejemplo: No, it hasn't changed — I've loved sweets since I was a child, especially cakes. For instance, I still celebrate special occasions with my favourite chocolate cake.

× I like cake most.

✓ I like cake the most.

原句缺少定冠词“the”。在表示“最喜欢”的最高级短语中，常用“the most”。建议在“most”前加“the”。

× I'm the type of person who cannot live without sweet things.

✓ I'm the type of person who cannot live without sweets.

原句中使用了复数名词短语“sweet things”虽然可理解，但更自然的表达是复数名词“sweets”。建议用更常见的名词形式以提高地道性。

× I love it cake.

✓ I love cake.

原句中“it”多余且造成句子结构错误。动词“love”直接加宾语即可，删除“it”。

× It makes me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and happy.

此句语法正确，无需修改。保持原句。

× I loved fish when I were young because I loved it slowly and taste slowly, but I cannot eat fish every day, only when I get a good score in schools.

✓ I loved fish when I was young because I liked its mild taste, but I couldn't eat fish every day — only when I got a good score at school.

1) “were”应为过去式单数“was”。2) 原句“loved it slowly and taste slowly”语义混乱，应改为描述味道的短语，如“liked its mild taste”。3) 时态要一致：描述过去习惯用过去式，因此“cannot”改为“couldn't”，“get”改为过去式“got”。4) “schools”在此处指单一学校，改为单数“school”。建议用更简洁的表达并保持过去时一致性。

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

此问题句语法正确，无需修改。保持原句。

× Yes, I like to eat watermelon in summer but prefer to hot pot in winter because hot pot makes me feel warm when it's cold outside.

✓ Yes, I like to eat watermelon in summer but prefer hot pot in winter because hot pot makes me feel warm when it's cold outside.

“prefer”后不用不定式“to”加动词，若名词为宾语，应直接接名词“prefer hot pot”或用动词不定式“prefer to eat hot pot”。建议去掉“to”或改为“prefer to eat hot pot”。

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

此句为考官提问，语法正确，无需修改。保持原句。

× I'm always the person who cannot live without sweets, so I love cakes from a very young age.

✓ I've always been the kind of person who cannot live without sweets, so I've loved cakes since a very young age.

1) 表示从过去到现在持续的状态，应使用现在完成时“have/has + past participle”，因此“I've always been”和“I've loved”。2) “the person”改为更自然的“the kind of person”。3) “from a very young age”改为更常见的“since a very young age”。建议使用现在完成时以表示持续性。