Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammar issues (e.g. “sweet desserts,” “during the day,” “at night”).

Ejemplo: My favourite food is apple pie. I enjoy it because it combines tart apples with sweet pastry, making it a comforting snack. For example, I often have a slice in the afternoon with tea, or as a light dessert at night.

Sugerencia: Focus on answering the question about childhood clearly; avoid off-topic remarks. Use past tense when referring to the past and improve sentence structure. Limit to a topic sentence plus one or two supporting details with linking words (e.g. “when I was young,” “because,” “for example”).

Ejemplo: When I was young I loved spaghetti, especially fettuccine carbonara. I liked it because it was creamy and filling; for example, my parents often made it for family lunches when I was a child.

Sugerencia: Answer the seasonal question directly and give specific examples tied to seasons. Avoid unrelated travel anecdotes unless linked to seasonal eating. Use clearer vocabulary and correct grammar (e.g. “foods from other countries,” “pho,” “contains”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I prefer light salads and cold noodles, while in winter I choose warm soups such as pho, a Vietnamese beef noodle soup that I enjoy for its comforting flavours.

Sugerencia: State the change clearly with correct tense and concise reasons. Use linking words such as “because” or “now” and give a specific example of what you liked then and what you prefer now. Fix grammar (e.g. “I couldn't eat that as a kid,” “I have a sweet tooth”).

Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I preferred savoury dishes, but now I have developed a sweet tooth and often choose desserts like cookies or cakes. For instance, I now enjoy a cookie with coffee in the afternoon, which I didn’t do when I was younger.

× My favorite food is apple pie, so I really like apple, but I also like sweet dessert, so apple pie will be a comfortable food for me in daytime or even for snacks in the night.

✓ My favorite food is apple pie, so I really like apples, and I also like sweet desserts; apple pie is a convenient food for me during the day or even as a snack at night.

Use plural nouns for general statements (apples, sweet desserts). Use conjunctions correctly (and). Replace 'comfortable food' with 'convenient food' for appropriate meaning. Use 'during the day' and 'at night' for natural time expressions. Use semicolon or period to separate independent clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Well I'm considering myself still young this age because I'm still my in my early 20s.

✓ Well, I consider myself still young because I'm in my early 20s.

Use simple present 'I consider' rather than 'I'm considering' for a general state. Remove redundant words 'this age' and the extra 'my'. Correct word order: 'in my early 20s'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× So my favorite food right now rather than apple pie is spaghetti, especially fettuccine carbonara.

✓ So my favorite food right now, instead of apple pie, is spaghetti, especially fettuccine carbonara.

Use 'instead of' for comparison and insert commas to set off the phrase. The present simple 'is' is correct; only word choice and punctuation were adjusted. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× It's my favorite like heavy food because it's creamy and it's have chicken inside and I always eat it in lunch.

✓ It's my favorite heavy food because it's creamy and it has chicken in it, and I always eat it at lunch.

Remove filler 'like'. Use 'has' (third-person singular) instead of 'have'. Use 'in it' for contents and 'at lunch' for the meal time. Add conjunction 'and' and commas for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I eat various uh food from another countries from Philippines and a couple weeks ago I went to Hanoi, Vietnam and we try PO, the traditional food from Vietnam.

✓ I eat various foods from other countries, for example from the Philippines, and a couple of weeks ago I went to Hanoi, Vietnam, where we tried pho, a traditional Vietnamese dish.

Use plural 'foods' for variety. Use 'other countries' not 'another countries'. Use 'from the Philippines'. Add 'a couple of' and correct past tense 'tried' for a past event. Correct spelling 'pho' and use 'where' to link location to the experience. Use 'dish' rather than 'food' for a particular item. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× It's uh, contains noodles and beef and it's delicious.

✓ It contains noodles and beef, and it is delicious.

For describing the dish in general, use present simple 'contains' and 'is'. If referring to the experience in the past, use 'contained' and 'was'. Here present tense is fine; remove contraction 'it's uh' filler and fix punctuation. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× My favorite food has changed since I was a child because right now I'm more like to explore something that more sweet since I have like sweet tooth like a dessert of cookies or maybe some candies.

✓ My favorite food has changed since I was a child because now I prefer to explore sweeter things since I have a sweet tooth, such as cookies or maybe some candies.

Use 'prefer to' rather than 'more like to'. Use comparative 'sweeter things'. Use 'a sweet tooth' without extra 'like'. Reorder and simplify for natural expression. Maintain present perfect 'has changed' to relate past to present. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× When I was a kid I can't eat that.

✓ When I was a kid, I couldn't eat that.

Referencing the past requires past tense modal: use 'couldn't' (past form of 'can') to indicate inability in the past. Add comma after the subordinate clause for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 5