Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, use correct grammar, and give one clear main idea followed by a specific supporting detail. Avoid vague endings like 'so yeah.' Use linking words to connect ideas and keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is dal bhat tarkari, a traditional Nepali meal of lentils, rice and vegetables. I enjoy it because it is hearty and full of flavour, and it reminds me of home and family meals. However, I also like trying different cuisines when I travel.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence about your childhood preference, then add one or two specific reasons or memories with correct tense and grammar. Use linking words (for example, "because" or "when") to clarify why you liked it.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I usually liked dal bhat because my family ate it every day. Because it was warm and spicy, it made me feel comforted, and I remember my mother cooking it on weekends for the whole family.

Sugerencia: Answer directly about seasonal or occasion-based changes. Use specific examples of seasonal foods or festivals and clear linking words. Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do sometimes. For example, in winter I prefer hot soups and stews, while in summer I choose lighter foods like salads and cold noodles. Also, during festivals I often eat special dishes from home or try new restaurants on weekends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear yes/no or brief statement about change, then support it with one specific reason or example. Use past and present tenses correctly and avoid repeating 'depends on my mood' without explanation.

Ejemplo: My favourite food hasn't changed completely, but my tastes have expanded since childhood. I still enjoy dal bhat, but now I also like sushi and Italian pasta because I try many cuisines when I travel.

× I am from Nepal so I like my favorite food which is Dal batal Curry which was famous for Nepalese food. But I would like to try all different food items so yeah.

✓ I am from Nepal, so my favorite food is Dal Bhat Curry, which is famous in Nepal. However, I would like to try many different foods.

Run-on and awkward phrasing: 'I like my favorite food which is Dal batal Curry which was famous for Nepalese food' is wordy and contains tense and article problems. Use a clear subject-verb structure: 'my favorite food is Dal Bhat Curry'. Use present tense 'is famous in Nepal' rather than 'was'. Replace 'all different food items' with 'many different foods' for naturalness. Use a contrast word 'However' instead of 'But' at the sentence start for formality.

× It's depend on my mood.

✓ It depends on my mood.

Subject-verb agreement: For the third person singular subject 'it', the verb must take the -s ending in present simple: 'depends' not 'depend'.

× Generally I prefer to eat Dal batal kare.

✓ Generally, I prefer to eat Dal Bhat.

Incorrect and misspelled words plus awkward structure: 'Dal batal kare' is incorrect; likely intended 'Dal Bhat'. Also add a comma after 'Generally' and remove unnecessary verb 'to eat' can remain but 'prefer to eat Dal Bhat' is fine; simplified to 'prefer to eat Dal Bhat' for clarity.

× It reminds me whom and I feel enjoy to eat and I like spicy.

✓ It reminds me of home, and I enjoy eating it because I like spicy food.

Multiple issues: incorrect pronoun 'whom' (should be 'home'), incorrect verb construction 'I feel enjoy to eat' (use 'I enjoy eating it'), and 'I like spicy' requires a noun 'spicy food'. Also join ideas with conjunctions and correct preposition 'reminds me of home'.

× Yes, when I am feeding in weekends, I want to try food items in cafe or different restaurants.

✓ Yes, on weekends when I am free, I want to try dishes at cafes or different restaurants.

Incorrect verb 'feeding' (wrong meaning) and wrong preposition 'in weekends'. Use 'on weekends' and replace 'feeding' with 'free' or appropriate adjective. Also use plural 'cafes' and 'dishes' for natural collocation.

× So I like to try different various types of foods.

✓ So I like to try various different types of food.

Redundant quantifiers 'different various' should be one: either 'various' or 'different'. Use 'types of food' (uncountable) rather than 'types of foods' for naturalness.

× Generally it's depend on my mood.

✓ Generally, it depends on my mood.

Same as earlier: present simple required for habitual action; use 'depends' not 'depend', and 'it's' contracted form is unnecessary—better 'it' subject with 'depends'.

× I will try different foods in future.

✓ I will try different foods in the future.

Missing article 'the' before 'future' when speaking about the time period. Also sentence is otherwise grammatically correct for future intent.

× Also I would like to eat various kinds of foods so not favorite what it's depend on my mood.

✓ Also, I would like to eat various kinds of food, so I do not have a single favorite; it depends on my mood.

Run-on and unclear phrasing: 'so not favorite what it's depend on my mood' is ungrammatical. Clarify meaning: 'I do not have a single favorite; it depends on my mood.' Use semicolon or two clauses. Use 'food' instead of 'foods' for general category and correct subject-verb agreement 'it depends'.