Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は短いが不自然な表現と文法ミスが多いです。まず主語と述語を正しく使い、重複する語（"Yes, yes"）は避けましょう。また「hawkers（屋台商人）」は文脈に合わない可能性があるため、伝えたい内容（高い建物があるか、近くに何があるか）を明確に分けて述べると良いです。具体的には、トピック文で直接質問に答え（"Yes, there are tall buildings near my home."）、その後に短い追加情報をつなぎ言葉（"for example", "also"）で加える練習をしてください。

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a new apartment tower and a glass office building on the main street, which you can see from my window.

Sugerencia: 意味は伝わるが文法が間違っています。否定形は簡潔にし、理由を言うときは正しい時制と接続詞を使いましょう（"I haven't taken photos of tall buildings because..."）。また理由は具体的に述べ、文を5文以内に収めて冗長を避けてください。接続詞（"because", "so", "because of"）を使って論理的につなげる練習をしてください。

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings. I haven't taken pictures of tall buildings because they are so common around my house that they don't seem special to me.

Sugerencia: 建物の名称と所在地に混乱があります（"Azabudi" / "Azadi"）。まず正しい名称を確認して話し、理由を明確に述べましょう。トピック文で訪れたい場所を述べ、その後に理由（店やレストランが多い、雰囲気が良い等）を1–2文で具体的に補足します。人物を指す表現（"as a guy, he's in Tokyo"）は不要で意味が不明瞭なので省いてください。

Ejemplo: I'd like to visit Azabudai Hills in Tokyo. It has many shops and restaurants, and I'm interested in seeing its modern architecture and public spaces.

× Yes, yes they are.

✓ Yes, there are.

The phrase 'they are' is used incorrectly to respond to 'Are there tall buildings near your home?'. Use 'there are' to indicate existence. Say 'Yes, there are' to agree with the question's 'there be' structure.

× They are available hawkers near my home.

✓ There are hawkers near my home.

The sentence mixes 'they are' and 'available' incorrectly. The correct existential construction is 'There are' + plural noun. Remove 'available' unless you mean vendors are available, in which case say 'There are hawkers available near my home.'; ensure subject-verb agreement and proper word order.

× No I don't.

✓ No, I don't.

This sentence mainly needs punctuation: add a comma after 'No'. There is no third-person singular issue here; keep contraction 'don't' for 'do not' with first person.

× Also I don't have taken photo of high buildings because.

✓ Also, I haven't taken photos of tall buildings.

The original incorrectly mixes 'don't have taken'. Use present perfect 'haven't taken' to express experience up to now. Use plural 'photos' and adjective 'tall' for buildings. Remove the trailing 'because' or complete the clause with a reason.

× Buildings has many near my house.

✓ There are many buildings near my house.

'Buildings has' is incorrect: plural noun requires 'have', but better is existential 'There are many buildings near my house.' This fixes subject-verb agreement and natural word order.

× I want to go to Azabudi hills.

✓ I want to go to Azabudai Hills.

Place name likely 'Azabudai Hills' (or 'Azabudai Hills' — ensure correct proper noun spelling). Capitalize and treat as proper noun; include 'the' if commonly used (e.g., 'I want to go to Azabudai Hills').

× Azadi hills has many shop and restaurant as a guy, he's in Tokyo.

✓ Azabudai Hills has many shops and restaurants; it is in Tokyo.

Multiple errors: proper noun spelling, plural nouns need plural verbs: 'has many shops and restaurants'. Replace 'as a guy, he's in Tokyo' (unclear) with 'it is in Tokyo' to state location. Use semicolon or period to separate clauses.