Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và trật tự từ; dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng; tránh từ không phù hợp (‘brutal’) và thay bằng từ chính xác; cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn (ví dụ: số tầng, mục đích sử dụng). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu tự nhiên. Ví dụ sửa lỗi: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ‘Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home.’ rồi nêu chi tiết liên kết bằng từ nối như ‘for example’ hoặc ‘mostly’.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. Most of them are apartment blocks about ten to fifteen storeys high. For example, there is a new complex across the street with shops on the ground floor. They mainly house families and students who work or study nearby.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng động từ/ cụm từ chính xác (take photos, not ‘photo’; be interested in, not ‘interesting’). Trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó cho lý do ngắn gọn và một ví dụ nếu cần; dùng liên từ như ‘because’ hoặc ‘however’. Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng. Ví dụ: nói ‘No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings because...’ rồi nêu lí do cụ thể.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I see them every day and they don't seem special to me. However, I sometimes photograph historic or unusual buildings when I visit another city.

Sugerencia: Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g. ‘a residential building’ thay vì ‘a house to people’). Nếu không có địa điểm muốn thăm, giải thích ngắn gọn và gợi ý thay thế như loại công trình bạn muốn thăm. Sử dụng liên từ như ‘because’ hoặc ‘so’ để kết nối ý. Giữ 2–3 câu ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: I don't have a specific building I'd like to visit because most nearby buildings are residential. If I could choose, I would visit a famous landmark or an old cathedral to learn about its history and architecture.

× Yes, they are very many brutal buildings.

✓ Yes, there are very many brutal buildings.

The student used an incorrect verb and word order. Use 'there are' to state existence of plural nouns (There be issue and plural agreement). Replace 'they are' with 'there are'. Also 'very many' is awkward with 'brutal'; consider 'many' or 'a lot of' and use a more appropriate adjective like 'tall' or 'ugly' if intended. Example: 'Yes, there are many tall buildings.'

× Near my home this is a lot of apartment and in my home this also be apartment.

✓ Near my home there are a lot of apartments, and in my building there are apartments too.

Plural nouns require plural agreement: 'apartment' should be 'apartments'. Also use 'there are' for existence. 'This' is incorrect here; use 'there' or 'my building'. Correct sentence structure: 'Near my home there are a lot of apartments.' and 'in my building there are apartments too.'

× No, I don't photo a building because I saw this very much.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings because I have seen them a lot.

'Photo' is a noun; the verb is 'take photos' or 'photograph'. Use present simple 'don't take' for habits. 'Saw' (past) conflicts with present meaning; use present perfect 'have seen' to indicate experience up to now. Also 'this' is incorrect; use 'them'.

× Umm, I'm not interesting about this.

✓ Umm, I'm not interested in this.

'Interesting' is an adjective describing something; to describe a person's feeling use the past participle adjective 'interested'. Also use preposition 'in' after 'interested'. Thus: 'I'm not interested in this.'

× I think it's done the building which I want to visit because it's normally a house to people, not the place to visit.

✓ I don't think there is a building I want to visit because buildings are normally people's homes, not places to visit.

The original sentence misuses passive and word order ('it's done the building'). Use 'I don't think there is a building I want to visit' to express lack of desire. 'Which I want to visit' can be simplified. 'A house to people' is ungrammatical — use 'people's homes' or 'homes'. Also 'not the place to visit' becomes 'not places to visit.'