Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 总体回答较为自然且内容相关，但存在重复与句子结构问题。建议：1) 开头用一句主题句直接回答并简洁给出原因；2) 避免重复表达（例如两次说“I think”）；3) 用连接词使句子更连贯，如“because”, “so”, “which”；4) 在细节上更具体（例如描述哪类建筑或给出例子）；5) 将句子控制在最多5句内。

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in a large city. These include high-rise apartment blocks and glass-fronted office towers, which give the area a modern feel. I enjoy walking past them in the evening because their lights make the streets look lively. Overall, the skyline makes the neighborhood feel dynamic and interesting.

Sugerencia: 回答表达清晰但有语法和用词错误，且略显冗长。建议：1) 开头直接回答并给出原因或频率；2) 注意动词用法（例如“take photos of them”，“take photos of buildings”）；3) 使用连接词（for example, when, because）使逻辑更流畅；4) 提供更具体的例子（比如拍摄哪类建筑或用什么设备）；5) 控制在不超过5句。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I visit a new city. For example, I like to photograph old cathedrals and modern skyscrapers because their architecture is fascinating. I usually use my phone and sometimes edit the pictures later, and looking at them afterwards always brings back good memories.

Sugerencia: 回答直接但过于简短且缺乏扩展细节。建议：1) 直接回答并给出明确原因；2) 用连接词扩展理由并给出具体例子（比如喜欢的自然景点或活动）；3) 避免使用模糊或被替换的词，确保用词准确；4) 可补充一两句对比以丰富内容；5) 保持句子数在5句以内。

Ejemplo: Not really — I usually prefer natural places to famous buildings because I find the outdoors more relaxing. For instance, I enjoy hiking in the mountains and swimming at quiet beaches, where I can disconnect from the city. If I had to choose a building, I might visit a small historical museum, but my first choice would still be a nature trip.

× I think this kind of buildings make the area busy and modern.

✓ I think this kind of building makes the area busy and modern.

“this kind of”后面应接单数名词短语或不可数名词，表示“这种……”。原句用复数“buildings”与“this kind of”搭配不规范。此外，主语现在为单数“this kind of building”，谓语应为第三人称单数“makes”。建议多记忆固定搭配“this kind of + singular noun”。

× It makes me relax.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed.

动词短语“make someone + bare infinitive”确实可以用（如“make me laugh”），但“relax”作不带to的不定式时通常用作使人放松，即“make me relax”含义不太自然。更常见和自然的表达是“make me feel relaxed”或“relax me”。同时原句更符合状态用“feel relaxed”。建议使用“make me feel relaxed”以更地道表达。

× Especially when I get to a new place and see some new beautiful buildings, I would like to take photos on them.

✓ Especially when I get to a new place and see some new beautiful buildings, I would like to take photos of them.

动词短语应该是“take photos of something”，表示拍……的照片。原句用“take photos on them”是介词错误（应为of）。该问题属于动词搭配和介词使用类别，按照清单列为“Verb + -ing form”项中也包含动词短语搭配的纠正。建议记住固定搭配“take photos of”。

× Every time I look back to these photos I have took, I feel wonderful.

✓ Every time I look back at these photos I have taken, I feel wonderful.

这里有两处错误：一是介词用法，习惯说“look back at something”而非“look back to”；二是动词时态和形式，完成时的过去分词应为“taken”而非“took”。因此应改为“look back at these photos I have taken”。建议复习look back的搭配以及不规则动词的过去式/过去分词用法。

× Every time I look back to these photos I have took, I feel wonderful.

✓ Every time I look back at these photos I have taken, I feel wonderful.

同上，介词短语“look back at”表示回顾、回想，而“look back to”不符合习惯用法。建议记忆固定搭配“look back at”。

× Every time I look back to these photos I have took, I feel wonderful.

✓ Every time I look back at these photos I have taken, I feel wonderful.

完成时需要过去分词，动词take的过去分词是不规则的“taken”，不是“took”。建议背诵常见不规则动词三态并在完成时态中使用过去分词。

× When I get to a new place and see some new beautiful buildings, I would like to take photos on them.

✓ When I get to a new place and see some new beautiful buildings, I would like to take photos of them.

重复强调：表示“为某物拍照”应使用介词“of”，而不是“on”。建议多注意动词与介词的固定搭配。