Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify and organize your response. Start with a clear topic sentence saying whether there are tall buildings, then give one or two specific supporting details (location, purpose, number or example). Use correct grammar (prepositions, articles) and avoid filler words. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a linking phrase if you add a reason or example.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home because I live in the city centre. For example, there is a residential tower and a main office block along the main road, so the area feels quite urban.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, then provide a clear reason and one brief example. Correct common mistakes (use 'honestly', 'I hardly ever take photos of buildings', 'with my eyes' or 'in person', not 'ice'). Avoid fillers and keep sentences concise and natural. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I hardly ever take photos of buildings because I prefer to enjoy them in person. For instance, when I visit a historic street I usually look around and remember the details rather than taking pictures.

Sugerencia: Answer directly whether there is a building you'd like to visit. If you dislike a particular building, say why with specific reasons (function, lack of architectural interest) and, if possible, contrast with a type of building you would prefer to visit. Use clearer vocabulary ('office building', 'apartment', 'ordinary', 'interesting architecture') and avoid hesitations.

Ejemplo: No, there isn't a particular building I want to visit in my area because most of them are ordinary office or apartment blocks without interesting architecture. I would rather visit a historic cathedral or a modern landmark with unique design.

× Yes, there are minutes home building under near my home because it's in a center, uh, city. In fact it in main line.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because it is in the city center. In fact, it is on the main street.

The original sentence has several structural and word-choice problems: 'minutes home building under near' is jumbled and unclear. Replace with 'many tall buildings near my home' to convey plural buildings and correct word order (Subject + Verb + Complement). 'It's in a center, uh, city' should be 'it is in the city center' (correct noun phrase). 'In fact it in main line' lacks a verb and uses wrong nouns; correct to 'In fact, it is on the main street.' Suggestions: keep subject-verb order, use correct noun phrases ('city center', 'main street'), and avoid filler words.

× The honest I hardly take a photo building because I enjoy, uh, looking the building, uh, by my eyes because the ice is the best camera, uh, to serve the good memory, uh, sometimes.

✓ To be honest, I rarely take photos of buildings because I enjoy looking at them with my eyes; sometimes I believe my eyes are the best camera for preserving memories.

Errors include incorrect phrase order and word forms: 'The honest' should be 'To be honest' (fixed idiom). 'Hardly take a photo building' needs plural and preposition: 'rarely take photos of buildings.' Use present simple 'I enjoy looking at them' with correct preposition 'at' and object pronoun 'them.' 'Because the ice is the best camera' is likely 'eyes' not 'ice' and needs verb agreement: 'I believe my eyes are the best camera for preserving memories.' Also improve adverb placement ('rarely' before main verb). Suggestions: use correct idioms, prepositions ('of', 'at'), plural nouns for general statements, and correct word choice ('eyes').

× To be honest, umm, I dislike that building because, uh, this building, uh, just for, uh, just for granted office and apt, I don't see uh, special architecture.

✓ To be honest, I dislike that building because it is just an ordinary office and apartment building; I don't see any special architecture.

Problems: missing verb 'is' after 'this building' and awkward wording 'just for, uh, just for granted office and apt.' Correct to 'it is just an ordinary office and apartment building.' Use 'any' with negative sentences: 'I don't see any special architecture.' Avoid filler words. Suggestions: include necessary verbs (is), use clear adjectives ('ordinary'), expand abbreviations ('apartment'), and use 'any' in negative contexts.