Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (verb tenses, singular/plural), avoid repetition, and add one specific detail. Use a linking phrase for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes. I recently moved to the city, so there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a cluster of modern skyscrapers along the main avenue, and many mixed-use towers with shops and cafes at street level.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and correct grammar: use present habits (do/does) or past consistently, avoid vague phrases, and give a specific reason and one example. Keep to a maximum of 3–4 sentences and use linking words like however or if.

Ejemplo: Not usually. I rarely take photos of buildings in my city because many of them are old and not very attractive. However, if I see a particularly beautiful or unusual building, I would photograph it—for instance, a recently renovated cathedral with detailed stonework.

Sugerencia: Be specific and grammatical: give the building's name clearly, state why you want to visit with specific reasons, and use linking words (because/so) to connect ideas. Keep sentences concise and avoid unclear phrases like “enhance my ability” without specifying ability.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit a building called UPPI, which is next to the hospital and behind the university. I want to go there because it houses a research library and seminar rooms, and I believe studying there would help me improve my professional skills.

× 'Well, right now I move to live in the city, so I would say that there are several building around my home.'

✓ 'Well, right now I have moved to live in the city, so I would say that there are several buildings around my home.'

'move to live' is incorrect for a recent change of residence; use present perfect 'have moved' to show a recent action with present relevance. 'building' is singular but refers to multiple items, so use plural 'buildings'. Suggestion: use present perfect for recent moves and ensure nouns that refer to more than one are plural.'

× 'Actually, it's a city, so that's what it it exists a lot of skyscraper, the large building and even the crowded place where people refer to enjoy their life.'

✓ 'Actually, it’s a city, so there are many skyscrapers, large buildings, and even crowded places where people enjoy their lives.'

'that's what it it exists' is ungrammatical; English uses 'there are' to state existence. 'a lot of' before count nouns should be 'many'; 'skyscraper' and 'building' need plural forms. 'refer to enjoy their life' is wrong — use 'enjoy their lives'. Suggestion: use 'there are' for existence, 'many' with plural countable nouns, and correct noun pluralization and verbs.'

× 'Well, I didn't prefer to take some photo of the building in my city because they seem ancient and it's sometime unattractive for me, so I didn't prefer to take it.'

✓ 'Well, I don't prefer to take photos of the buildings in my city because they seem old and are sometimes unattractive to me, so I usually don't take them.'

'didn't prefer' is past tense and implies a completed past habit; the speaker means a general present preference, so use present simple 'don't prefer' or 'usually don't'. 'some photo' should be 'photos' (plural) and 'building' should be plural. 'ancient' can be used but 'old' is more natural here. 'it's sometime unattractive for me' should be 'are sometimes unattractive to me'. Pronoun 'it' does not match plural 'photos' — use 'them'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual preferences, match plural nouns and pronouns, and correct adverb placement.'

× 'But if that building was actually so good, I mean it's beautiful, so it allowed me, it very attracted me to text.'

✓ 'But if that building were actually so good — I mean if it were beautiful — it would attract me and I would take photos.'

'If that building was' should use the subjunctive 'were' in a hypothetical present conditional. Mixing past/past forms is incorrect; the correct conditional form is 'if ... were ... would ...'. 'it allowed me' is wrong tense and structure; use 'it would attract me' and 'I would take photos' to express hypothetical willingness. 'attracted me to text' is meaningless here; likely intended 'attract me to take photos'. Suggestion: use correct conditional structure for unreal present situations and clarify intended action.'

× 'Yes, I would like to visit a building which it is located next to the hospital and behind a university.'

✓ 'Yes, I would like to visit a building that is located next to the hospital and behind a university.'

'which it is located' is ungrammatical and uses an extra pronoun 'it' unnecessarily. Use a relative clause without the extra pronoun: 'that is located' or 'which is located'. Suggestion: omit the redundant pronoun when forming relative clauses.'

× 'It is called a UPPI would say that place would allow me to build up my knowledge and enhance my ability.'

✓ 'It is called UPPI. I would say that the place would allow me to build my knowledge and enhance my abilities.'

'a UPPI' is incorrect because acronyms that are names do not take an indefinite article; use 'called UPPI'. The original run-on sentence needs to be split. 'build up my knowledge' is acceptable but more natural is 'build my knowledge'. 'enhance my ability' should be plural 'abilities' or more specific (e.g., 'skills'). Suggestion: remove incorrect article before a proper name, split into clearer sentences, and use correct pluralization for general abilities.'}]}