Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak more clearly and directly. Start with a concise topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, umm), correct grammar (e.g., 'there is a tall commercial building near my home called ...'), and limit to a few supporting details. Use linking words if you add another point (for example, 'also' or 'in addition').

Ejemplo: Yes. There is a tall commercial building near my home called the Qi Tower. In addition, there is another high-rise nearby whose name I don't know. Both buildings house offices and shops, so the area is usually busy.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer and then one or two specific reasons with correct vocabulary. Replace vague phrases with precise terms (e.g., 'architectural interest', 'unique exterior design') and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Not often. I only photograph buildings that have interesting architecture or a unique exterior design because I enjoy capturing unusual shapes and decorative details.

Sugerencia: Be concise and accurate. Start with a direct statement naming the building, then give specific reasons using correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'Taipei 101', 'earthquake-resistant design'). Avoid fillers and correct word choice ('building' vs 'bidding').

Ejemplo: I would like to visit Taipei 101 in Taiwan. I am fascinated by its earthquake-resistant engineering and unique design, and I want to see the observation deck for the panoramic city views.

× Yes uh, there's so building, a tall building that near my home recently uh it's kinda commercial building uh it's called the Qi towel and also umm the other building that I don't actually know the name, but uh it's they.

✓ Yes, there is a tall building near my home. Recently a commercial building called the Qitowel was built, and there is another building whose name I do not know.

Multiple singular/plural and article issues: 'there's so building' is incorrect; 'there's' contracts 'there is' which must be followed by a singular noun but 'so building' is invalid. 'kinda commercial building' needs an article 'a commercial building'. 'it's called the Qi towel' likely a proper name needs capitalization and no space: 'Qitowel' (or 'Qi Towel') and past tense 'was built' for a recent construction. 'the other building... it's they' mixes singular/plural and pronouns. Suggested improvements: use 'there is' or 'there are' correctly, include appropriate articles (a/the), and match pronouns to nouns (use 'it' for 'building' and 'whose' to introduce unknown name). Use clearer sentence segmentation to avoid run-ons.

× I rarely take a photo about a building, but only the building that is demonstrate about the architecture or there is unique that they do the the external the industry design or exterior design of the.

✓ I rarely take photos of buildings; I only photograph ones that demonstrate interesting architecture or have unique exterior design.

Preposition and noun form errors: 'take a photo about a building' should be 'take photos of buildings' ('of' is correct preposition and plural for general habit). 'the building that is demonstrate about the architecture' should be 'buildings that demonstrate interesting architecture' (use active verb 'demonstrate' and adjective 'interesting'). 'there is unique that they do the the external the industry design or exterior design of the' is ungrammatical—use 'have unique exterior design'. Suggestions: use 'take photos of', pluralize when speaking generally, prefer active verb constructions ('buildings that demonstrate'), and use 'exterior design' for clarity.

× Umm, basically I would like to visit one building that located in, uh, Taiwan. It's called Building 101. I heard that, umm, that bidding is so, uh, resistant, even though during the earthquake, uh, it's can stand for without shaking.

✓ Basically, I would like to visit a building located in Taiwan called Building 101. I heard that the building is very earthquake-resistant and can withstand earthquakes without much shaking.

Errors with 'there be' and verb forms: 'one building that located in Taiwan' is missing a verb—should be 'a building located in Taiwan' or 'that is located in Taiwan'. 'that bidding is so resistant' uses wrong word 'bidding' and wrong structure; use 'the building is very earthquake-resistant'. 'it's can stand for without shaking' mixes auxiliary verbs incorrectly—correct is 'can withstand earthquakes without much shaking' or 'can stand without shaking'. Suggestions: ensure relative clauses include 'is' when needed ('that is located'), use correct vocabulary ('building' not 'bidding'), and use modal 'can' directly with base verb ('can withstand').