Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, clarity and relevance. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two clear supporting details. Use correct subject-verb agreement and simple sentence structures. Avoid unrelated words (e.g. “toll”) and keep to a maximum of five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are some tall buildings near my home. For example, a large hospital called Southern Hospital is close by and it is a very tall building. There are also a few apartment blocks nearby, which can be seen from my street.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer and explain reasons with correct tense and word order. Use linking words like "because" correctly and avoid repeating words. Keep sentences concise and logical.

Ejemplo: No, I usually do not take photos of buildings. Because the hospital near my house does not allow photography, I avoid taking pictures there. If I had permission, I would definitely take some photos of the hospital's architecture.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and describe the building with specific details. Fix word order and repetition, and explain why you want to visit using linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Clarify the last idea — "there is not conflict" is unclear; specify if you mean access is restricted or there are safety concerns.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the new stadium in the Chautauqua district. It is a recently built sports stadium with modern design and I am curious about its architecture and facilities. I hope to visit when there are no events, because it will be easier to explore.

× Is there are lots of toll in my home and my home are nearby hospitals so my in southern hospital is very big.

✓ There are lots of tall buildings near my home, and there is a large hospital nearby called Southern Hospital.

The original sentence misused 'is there are' and 'my home are'. Use 'There are' for plural existence (lots of tall buildings) and 'there is' for singular existence (a large hospital). Also 'toll' is incorrect; likely 'tall'. Rearranged for natural word order and clarity. Suggestion: use 'There is/There are' correctly and keep subject number consistent with the verb.

× No, I don't take photos because and it didn't the hospital secretary did not allowed to take a photo of hospital.

✓ No, I don't take photos because the hospital secretary did not allow taking photos in the hospital.

Errors include incorrect auxiliary and verb forms: 'did not allowed' mixes past auxiliary with past participle; after 'did' the base verb 'allow' must be used. Also 'didn't the hospital secretary' is ungrammatical and unnecessary. Use 'did not allow' and a gerund 'allow taking photos' or 'allow us to take photos'. Maintain past simple for a past permission decision.

× If I get a permission then I'll definitely take a photo.

✓ If I get permission, I'll definitely take a photo.

'Get a permission' is incorrect collocation in English; use 'get permission' (uncountable). The conditional structure is fine (first conditional). Remove unnecessary 'then' and add a comma after the if-clause for clarity.

× Yes, I like to is there is a building of stadium, newly newly made stadium in Chautauqua district. I want to visit, but there is not conflict.

✓ Yes, there is a newly built stadium in the Chautauqua district that I would like to visit, but there is no conflict.

The original mixes interrogative 'is there' with a statement and repeats 'newly'. Use 'there is' to state existence. 'Newly made' is awkward; 'newly built' or 'new stadium' is natural. 'There is not conflict' should be 'there is no conflict'. Also adjust word order for clarity and use article 'the' before district name if it is a specific area.