Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition (e.g., 'residential' twice), and fix article usage ('the Egypt's new capital' → 'Egypt's new capital' or 'the new capital'). Add one specific detail about the area to enrich the answer and use a linking word.

Ejemplo: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. The area is mainly low-rise residential housing, and most high-rises are concentrated in Egypt's new capital about 48 kilometres away. For example, my street mostly has two- to three-storey houses, so the skyline is quite low.

Sugerencia: Correct subject–verb agreement and streamline wording. Start with a direct sentence, then add a linked specific example of what you photograph and why. Use linking words like 'however' or 'especially'.

Ejemplo: Not very often. I usually only photograph buildings that are historical or have striking architecture because their details interest me; for example, I took several photos of an old Ottoman mosque last year to capture its intricate tiles.

Sugerencia: Organise your answer: state the building and location (or say you don't recall the name), then give two clear, specific reasons with linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences and repetition. If uncertain about facts, say so clearly and give observable features or impressions.

Ejemplo: I would like to visit a famous cathedral in Germany, although I can't recall its exact name. It looks massive and slightly dark in photos, and I admire its complex Gothic architecture; for example, the ornate stone carvings and stained-glass windows seem to reflect medieval craftsmanship.

Sugerencia: Use a clear topic sentence and balance pros and cons with concise reasons. Fix grammar ('a tall buildings' → 'a tall building', remove repeated 'the'). Add a linking phrase and a specific example of a pro or con to make it concrete.

Ejemplo: I have mixed feelings about living in a tall building. On the one hand, the view of the whole city would be amazing and peaceful; for instance, I could enjoy sunsets from my balcony. On the other hand, elevator delays and deliveries to high floors can be inconvenient, especially during busy hours.

× These kind of buildings only exist in the Egypt's new capital, which is 48 kilometers away from me.

✓ These kinds of buildings only exist in Egypt's new capital, which is 48 kilometers away from me.

'These kind' is incorrect because 'these' is plural and must be followed by plural noun 'kinds'. Also do not use 'the' before 'Egypt's' when indicating the country's possessive; 'Egypt's new capital' is correct. Suggestion: use 'these kinds of' or 'this kind of' with singular noun.

× The urban or district I'm living in is basically low rise resident residential buildings.

✓ The area or district I live in basically has low-rise residential buildings.

Awkward word choice and repetition: 'urban or district' and 'resident residential' are incorrect. Use 'area or district' and adjective 'low-rise' before 'residential buildings'. Also change 'I'm living in' to simple present 'I live in' for general statement.

× Buildings usually doesn't attract me that much unless it's historical buildings or a building that has an amazing architecture or amazing design.

✓ Buildings usually don't attract me that much unless they are historical buildings or a building that has amazing architecture or design.

Subject 'Buildings' is plural so verb must be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also 'it's historical buildings' mixes singular 'it' with plural; use 'they are' for plural or rephrase with singular consistently. 'Amazing architecture' does not need 'an' before 'architecture'.

× These are the kind of buildings that usually strike my attention, but other than that I don't take photos of normal buildings.

✓ These are the kinds of buildings that usually catch my attention, but other than that I don't take photos of ordinary buildings.

'These are the kind' is incorrect; use 'kinds' with plural 'these'. 'Strike my attention' is nonstandard; use 'catch my attention'. 'Normal buildings' is acceptable but 'ordinary buildings' is more natural.

× Yes, I would like to visit a building.

✓ Yes, there is a building I would like to visit.

Original sentence is grammatical but vague. The question asks 'Is there a building you would like to visit?' so respond with 'There is a building I would like to visit.' This matches 'there be' structure expected in the context.

× I don't actually remember its name, but it's located in Germany.

✓ I don't actually remember its name, but it is located in Germany.

Contraction 'it's' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity use 'it is'. No major grammatical error; this correction is stylistic to maintain formality and clarity.

× It's very huge, very dark, very mesmerizing and everyone goes there.

✓ It is very huge, very dark, and very mesmerizing, and many people go there.

'Everyone goes there' may be exaggerated; 'many people' is more natural. Add comma before 'and' for clarity. Use consistent full forms 'it is' for clarity.

× They took photos or videos of them and post them online.

✓ They take photos or videos of it and post them online.

Pronoun reference: 'them' initially refers to people but is used for the building; use 'it' for the building (singular). Verb tense consistency: use 'take' and 'post' for habitual action.

× I'm completely astonished by how complicated the architecture of it.

✓ I'm completely astonished by how complicated its architecture is.

Word order and pronoun: 'the architecture of it' is awkward; use possessive 'its architecture'. Place the verb 'is' at the end to form a clear clause.

× It's about.

✓ It dates back to the Roman Empire.

Original fragment 'It's about.' is incomplete and lacks meaning. Context implies historical origin; use 'It dates back to the Roman Empire.' which is a complete sentence conveying intended idea.

× It goes back to Roman Empire and it's very, very.

✓ It goes back to the Roman Empire, and it's truly remarkable.

Missing article before 'Roman Empire' and incomplete trailing phrase 'very, very.' Replace with a complete adjective like 'truly remarkable' to complete thought.

× Living in a tall buildings has definitely its pros and cons.

✓ Living in a tall building definitely has its pros and cons.

Mismatch: 'a tall buildings' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'buildings'. Use singular 'a tall building' or plural without 'a'. Place 'definitely' before verb 'has' for natural order.

× The cons would be the difficulty in getting in or getting out of the building.

✓ The cons would be the difficulty of getting into or out of the building.

Use 'getting into' instead of 'getting in' for idiomatic English. 'Difficulty of' is more natural than 'difficulty in' here. 'The' before 'building' is acceptable if referring to that tall building contextually.

× It would take a lot of time.

✓ It can take a lot of time.

No major grammatical error; this change addresses modality and naturalness: use 'can' to indicate frequent possibility. If marking original as correct, note it's acceptable; here suggested improvement for clarity.

× Also when you order something it would be a hassle for the delivery man to deliver your package.

✓ Also, when you order something, it can be a hassle for the delivery person to deliver your package.

'Delivery man' is gendered; use 'delivery person' or 'delivery driver'. Use commas to set off subordinate clause. Use 'can be' for habitual possibility rather than 'would be'. Keep 'deliver your package' though repetition of 'deliver' is acceptable; could rephrase 'to bring your package'.

× But the the pros of it is definitely the view.

✓ But the pros of it are definitely the view.

Subject-verb agreement: 'pros' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. Also remove duplicated 'the the'. Alternatively, 'But the main pro is definitely the view.' is another option.

× The view from a tall building is mesmerizing.

✓ The view from a tall building is mesmerizing.

Sentence is correct. No grammatical change needed; included for completeness.

× The view of the whole city is definitely worth.

✓ The view of the whole city is definitely worth it.

Missing object 'it' after 'worth'. 'Worth' as an adjective requires an object or 'worth seeing/experiencing'. Add 'it' or rephrase 'definitely worth seeing'.