Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a direct clear topic sentence and add one specific supporting detail. Use correct article and plural/singular forms, and avoid one-word answers. Keep it within about 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home; in fact, I live in one of them which has 18 floors. From my apartment window I can see other high-rises and the city skyline.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give specific examples and avoid unclear or incorrect words (e.g., 'blood' is wrong here). Use linking words (for example, however, because) to connect ideas and keep it to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really, I prefer photographing natural scenes. For example, I often take pictures of flowers, the sky at sunset and the sea because I enjoy the colours and atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer naming a specific building or type of building, then explain why with one or two concrete reasons. Use simple correct phrases (e.g., 'a cultural centre' or 'a communication centre') and linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid repetition and garbled phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the central cultural centre in my city because it hosts art exhibitions and concerts. I’m especially interested in the gallery there as I enjoy modern art and would love to see the collections.

Sugerencia: Answer politely and directly, then add one or two specific reasons or feelings about living in a tall building. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'however' to make your response coherent and avoid abrupt or rude phrasing.

Ejemplo: I already live in a tall building, and I like it because it offers good views and convenient access to shops. However, sometimes I prefer a quieter neighbourhood with more green space.

× I live in the tall building.

✓ I live in a tall building.

The student used the definite article 'the' with 'tall building' which implies a specific building previously mentioned; however the speaker means any tall building where they live. This is an article/number choice tied to singular/plural usage. Use the indefinite article 'a' with a singular, non-specific countable noun: 'a tall building'. Suggestion: Replace 'the' with 'a' when referring to one non-specific singular building.

× Not really. I like to take the photo like the nature of something natural or flowers and blood.

✓ Not really. I like to take photos of nature, flowers, and the sky.

The original sentence has several problems: incorrect collocations ('take the photo like the nature of something natural'), incorrect noun form ('photo' should be plural when talking about the hobby), and an unclear word 'blood' likely meant 'blue' or 'clouds' or 'sky'. This fits verb+noun collocation and noun number/choice; we correct to a clear parallel list. Suggestion: Use plural 'photos' for a habitual activity and list objects clearly: 'photos of nature, flowers, and the sky.'

× I like to take the photo like the nature of something natural or flowers and blood.

✓ Not really. I like to take photos of nature, flowers, and the sky.

The phrase 'take the photo like the nature of something natural' uses incorrect preposition and awkward phrasing. Use 'take photos of' followed by the object. Also replace unclear word 'blood' with 'sky' which fits context. Suggestion: Use 'take photos of' + object for clarity.

× Something like sky. I love the sea.

✓ I also like the sky. I love the sea.

'Something like sky' is a fragment and unclear. Combine into a full sentence: 'I also like the sky.' Maintain parallel simple sentences for clarity. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; write complete sentences with subject and verb.

× I think central some building is out would like to visit it like some communicated centres or communicated some some of it and all what nothing.

✓ I think the central buildings are interesting; I would like to visit places like community centres and other public buildings.

The original is ungrammatical and incoherent. It contains word order problems, incorrect word choices ('communicated' instead of 'community' or 'commercial'), and missing or wrong articles. This is a sentence structure issue. Suggestion: Identify the intended meaning and rewrite using correct word order, plural/singular agreement, and appropriate vocabulary: 'the central buildings', 'I would like to visit', 'community centres' or 'commercial centres'.

× I think central some building is out would like to visit it like some communicated centres or communicated some some of it and all what nothing.

✓ I think the central buildings are out there; I would like to visit places like community centres and shopping centres.

The original mixes tenses and persons and lacks agreement. 'Building is out' is incorrect; for plural subject use 'are'. Clarify meaning 'out there' and correct nouns: 'community centres' and 'shopping centres'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and choose correct nouns.

× I already live in a tall building, So what?

✓ I already live in a tall building. So what?

This sentence is mostly correct except for incorrect capitalization after a comma. 'So what?' is acceptable colloquial reply. The error is sentence punctuation/capitalization: after a complete sentence use a period, then 'So what?' with proper capitalization. Suggestion: End the first sentence with a period before writing the next sentence.