Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has many grammatical errors, awkward word choices and redundancy. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and concise phrasing. Use linking words sparingly only if adding details. For example, say where you live, confirm presence of tall buildings, and give one specific detail (e.g., type or reason).

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in Dhaka, the capital of Bangladesh. For example, several new office towers and apartment blocks have appeared in my neighborhood in the past few years.

Sugerencia: The response is unclear and contains inappropriate expressions ("reduce my coldness") and repetition. Focus on a simple, natural answer: state your habit, give a clear reason, and one specific circumstance when you do take photos. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast.

Ejemplo: Not really — I usually don't take photos of buildings because I'm not very interested in architectural photography. However, when I travel with my family, I sometimes take photos with them in front of famous buildings as souvenirs.

Sugerencia: This answer is understandable and relevant but too informal ("wanna" repeated) and slightly redundant. Use more natural formal phrasing, name the building correctly and give a brief reason why you want to visit. Keep it concise and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and offers spectacular views of the city. I also hope to see other famous skyscrapers when I travel in the future.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows an idea but contains vocabulary errors (e.g., 'spatula landscape'), grammatical mistakes and repetition. Give a clear topic sentence, a correct reason, and one supporting detail. Use precise vocabulary like 'panoramic view' and avoid repeating phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would give me a panoramic view of the city. For instance, I could enjoy sunsets and see landmarks from my balcony.

× There are have a lot of tall buildings where I live because I live in the capital city of Bangladesh and my neighbors building all all are the topest around the region.

✓ There are a lot of tall buildings where I live because I live in the capital city of Bangladesh, and my neighbors' buildings are among the tallest in the region.

The original mixes 'there are' with 'have' (redundant verbs) and has possessive/plural errors ('neighbors building' should be 'neighbors' buildings'). 'Topest' is nonstandard; use 'tallest' or 'among the tallest'. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: remove redundant 'have', use plural possessive, and replace 'topest' with 'tallest' or 'among the tallest'.

× I don't like taking photos of buildings 'cause it is, it is reduce my coldness in front of friends.

✓ I don't like taking photos of buildings because it reduces my shyness in front of friends.

Use 'because' instead of colloquial ''cause', and the verb must agree: 'it reduces' (third person singular). 'Reduce my coldness' is unnatural; 'reduce my shyness' conveys intended meaning. Suggestion: use correct verb form and a natural noun.

× But sometimes when I go with my family, my family member asks me to take photo with this building and with them and, uh, sometimes.

✓ But sometimes when I go with my family, my family members ask me to take photos with them in front of the building.

Use plural 'family members' for multiple people, plural 'photos' if repeated, and a clearer prepositional phrase 'in front of the building'. The original is repetitive and incomplete; simplify to a complete clause.

× By or large, I'd say yes. I wanna see the tallest building around the world, which is Burj Khalifa, located in the Dubai and Middle East.

✓ By and large, I'd say yes. I want to see the tallest building in the world, the Burj Khalifa, which is located in Dubai in the Middle East.

Replace colloquial 'wanna' with 'want' for correct register. Use 'in the world' not 'around the world', and 'the Burj Khalifa' with correct article. 'Located in the Dubai' is incorrect; use 'in Dubai' and 'in the Middle East'. Also 'By or large' should be 'By and large'.

× And I wanna I wanna see some other tall buildings around the world in the future.

✓ And I want to see some other tall buildings around the world in the future.

Remove repeated 'I wanna I wanna' and use 'want' instead of colloquial 'wanna'. Ensure single clear verb phrase.

× I would say yes because I wanna see spatula landscape of the city so there are no other option to see this unless I live in a tall building and that's why I think I wanna leave the tall building. Live in a tall building.

✓ I would say yes because I want to see the spectacular city landscape, so there is no other option to see it unless I live in a tall building; that's why I think I want to live in a tall building.

Replace 'wanna' with 'want', correct 'spatula' (typo) to 'spectacular', and use 'there is no other option' (singular) and 'see it' for clarity. Remove incorrect 'leave' which contradicts meaning; use 'live'. Combine fragments into a complete sentence. Suggestion: proofread for typos and use correct articles and verb forms.