Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır ancak daha doğal ve akıcı konuşma için dolgu sözcüklerini (uh, umm) azaltın, kısa bir açıklama ile nedenini netleştirin ve cümle yapısını düzeltin. Örneğin "No, there aren't many tall buildings near my home because Istanbul is prone to earthquakes" gibi daha düzgün bir yapı kullanın.

Ejemplo: No, there aren't many tall buildings near my home because Istanbul is prone to earthquakes, so people prefer lower, sturdier houses.

Sugerencia: Cümle yapısı hatalı ve dolgu sözcükleri fazla. Doğrudan yanıt verin, sonra sebeple destekleyin; bağlaç kullanın (because/if) ve daha doğru dilbilgisi kullanın. Örneğin "Yes, but only if the building has unique architecture" demeniz daha iyi olur.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do take photos of buildings, but only if they have unique architectural features because I enjoy capturing unusual designs.

Sugerencia: Cevap çok belirsiz ve tekrarlı. Hangi bina olduğunu, nerede olduğunu ve neden ziyaret etmek istediğinizi kısa ve net şekilde belirtin. Bağlaçlarla bilgiyi zenginleştirin ve dolgu kelimelerini çıkarın.

Ejemplo: Yes, there's a modern museum near my home that I would like to visit because its façade is very unusual and I want to see the interior design.

Sugerencia: Cümle yapısı karışık ve tekrarlı. Net bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından gerekçeyi açık, kısa bir cümleyle açıklayın. Dolgu sözcüklerini çıkarın ve grameri düzeltin (e.g. "I'm afraid of earthquakes" yerine).

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of earthquakes and I think lower buildings feel safer and are easier to evacuate.

× No, there's not. I'm living in Istanbul and Istanbul is a region, uh, with a lot of earthquakes.

✓ No, there aren't. I live in Istanbul, and Istanbul is a region with a lot of earthquakes.

'There is/are' must agree with the noun number: 'buildings' (plural) requires 'there aren't'. Also, 'I'm living' is unusual for permanent residence; use simple present 'I live'. Remove filler words and redundant commas for clarity.

× Yes, but is it has to be a very umm. Unique architectural things.

✓ Yes, but it has to be a very unique architectural feature.

The sentence had incorrect auxiliary 'is' and wrong noun form 'things'. Drop the extraneous 'is' and use 'has to be' for necessity. Use 'feature' or 'building' (singular) with 'a very unique'; 'unique' is not usually used with 'very' but it's acceptable colloquially; better: 'a unique architectural feature.'

× Yes, I see a very different building, uh, near my home. It's uh, looking very different.

✓ Yes, I have seen/There is a very unusual building near my home. It looks very different.

'I see' for a general statement about a building is awkward; use 'I have seen' or 'There is'. 'It's looking' (present continuous) is unnecessary for states—use simple present 'It looks'. Remove fillers and repetition.

× No, I don't 'cause, uh, I'm afraid of somewhere earthquakes and when earthquake, earthquake happens, I want to live in the building easily.

✓ No, I don't, because I'm afraid of earthquakes, and if an earthquake happens, I want to be able to leave the building easily.

'Cause' is informal; use 'because'. 'Somewhere earthquakes' is incorrect—use plural 'earthquakes'. 'When earthquake, earthquake happens' is ungrammatical; use 'if an earthquake happens'. 'I want to live in the building easily' is wrong meaning; likely intended 'be able to leave the building easily'—use modal phrase 'be able to' to express ability.