Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient des répétitions, quelques erreurs grammaticales et manque de précision. Améliorez en : 1) éviter les répétitions («a lot of tall buildings» répété), 2) corriger la grammaire (par ex. «there are a lot of tall buildings» puis «there are a lot of tall buildings, including my house» → reformuler), 3) donner un exemple concret (proximité d'un centre commercial, transport) et 4) utiliser un lien logique pour relier idées (par ex. «however», «so», «for example»).

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the city centre. For example, there is an office tower and several apartment blocks within a five-minute walk, which makes commuting easy. However, the density can feel a bit stressful at times because of the noise and crowds.

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est naturelle et claire mais pourrait être plus précise et utiliser un lien logique pour détailler méthodes ou préférences. Améliorez en : 1) préciser comment vous photographiez (angles, time of day), 2) donner un short example d’un bâtiment ou d’une technique, 3) garder réponses concises (max 4–5 phrases).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings. I often shoot at golden hour to capture warm light and focus on unique architectural details, such as the ornate windows of old churches. For instance, I recently photographed a colonial-era building nearby, emphasising its patterns with a low-angle shot.

Sugerencia: La réponse répond à la question mais contient des erreurs de vocabulaire et de grammaire («sold it in the photos» incorrect) et manque de précision sur pourquoi et quand. Améliorez en : 1) corriger l’expression (par ex. «seen it in photos»), 2) expliquer pourquoi en donnant des détails concrets (histoire, architecture, émotion), 3) ajouter une probabilité ou un plan pour la visite.

Ejemplo: If I had to choose, I would visit the Taj Mahal in India because I have seen it in many photos and read about its history. I want to admire its white marble, the carved inlay work and the surrounding gardens, and I hope to go there within the next few years when I can travel.

Sugerencia: Bonne réponse personnelle mais contient hésitations («uh») et quelques erreurs grammaticales («it is doesn't happen frequently»). Améliorez en : 1) supprimer les hésitations et reformuler les contradictions avec des connecteurs («although», «however»), 2) corriger la grammaire, 3) donner un exemple précis d’un avantage et d’un inconvénient et conclure brièvement.

Ejemplo: Yes, I live in a tall building and I enjoy the panoramic city views, especially during New Year's Eve when the fireworks are visible from my balcony. However, although earthquakes are rare, I sometimes worry about safety, so I make sure to follow building safety procedures and keep emergency supplies handy.

× Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my house because I live in a central city and there is a lot of tall building, including my house.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my house because I live in a central city and there are a lot of tall buildings, including mine.

The noun 'building' is countable and must agree in number with 'a lot of' when referring to multiple items. The original mixes plural and singular ('a lot of tall building') which is incorrect. Use plural 'buildings' and replace 'my house' with 'mine' to avoid repetition and improve naturalness. Suggestion: Check that nouns after quantifiers like 'a lot of' are plural when you mean more than one. Use possessive pronouns (mine) to avoid repeating nouns.

× When I sold it in the photos and magazines, I felt that the building was truly immense and magnificent with intricate details and I definitely have to visit it one day.

✓ When I saw it in photos and magazines, I felt that the building was truly immense and magnificent with intricate details and I definitely have to visit it one day.

The verb 'sold' is the past tense of 'sell' and is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'see', so the correct past tense/past participle is 'saw' for simple past. Use 'saw it in photos and magazines' to indicate viewing. Suggestion: Choose verbs that match the intended action (see, read, hear) and use correct past forms.

× Well, actually, I currently live in a tall building and I really enjoy because I can see the view of the city.

✓ Well, actually, I currently live in a tall building and I really enjoy it because I can see the view of the city.

The sentence is missing a direct object after 'enjoy' — 'enjoy' is transitive and needs an object ('it' referring to living there). Adding 'it' completes the sentence. Suggestion: After verbs like 'enjoy', include the object (noun, pronoun, or gerund) that names what you enjoy.

× Not only that, during New Year's Eve you can see fireworks throughout the city and it is breathtaking.

✓ Not only that, during New Year's Eve you can see fireworks throughout the city and they are breathtaking.

The pronoun 'it' refers to a singular subject, but 'fireworks' is plural. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' for agreement. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

× However, sometimes it could be, uh, scary because of the earthquake. Even it is doesn't happen frequently.

✓ However, sometimes it can be, uh, scary because of earthquakes, even though they don't happen frequently.

Several issues: 'could be' is less natural than 'can be' for general possibility; 'the earthquake' is too specific — use plural 'earthquakes' for the general phenomenon; 'Even it is doesn't happen frequently' is ungrammatical. Use 'even though they don't happen frequently' to express concession and correct subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: Use 'can be' for general truths/possibilities, match singular/plural for general phenomena, and use conjunctions like 'even though' to link contrasting clauses.