Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct pronunciation and numbers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words. Also correct '14 store building' to '14-storey building' and clarify the number of nearby buildings.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. I live in a 14-storey building, and there are about ten similar apartment blocks nearby because this area is mainly residential.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence, reduce hesitation, and use linking words to explain exceptions. Replace vague phrases like 'regular view' with clearer language and correct collocations (e.g. 'take many photos').

Ejemplo: Usually I don't take photos of buildings because I grew up in the city and they are an everyday sight. However, if a building is unusual or architecturally striking, I will take a picture to remember it.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and reduce pauses and repetition. Use one or two specific descriptive details and a reason why you want to visit, using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit a building near my office that is almost entirely covered in glass. It looks especially impressive when the sun hits it, and I want to see its reflective façade up close because the architecture is modern and elegant.

Sugerencia: Speak more confidently and correct grammar (e.g. '14-storey' and 'a salon'). Start with a clear statement, then give specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid overuse of fillers and ensure noun-pronoun agreement.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do want to live in a tall building. I already live in a 14-storey block, and I like it because it offers convenient facilities, for example a small supermarket and a salon on the ground floor, which makes daily life easier.

× In fact the building I live in is a is a tall one because it's a 14 store building and around it also we have 11:50 similar buildings 'cause it is a housing.

✓ In fact the building I live in is a tall one because it's a 14-storey building and around it we have similar buildings because it is a housing complex.

Errors: incorrect plural/singular and number formatting and unnatural phrase. '14 store' is incorrect; use '14-storey' (compound adjective) or '14-storey building.' 'also we have 11:50 similar buildings' is unclear and uses wrong punctuation; replace with 'we have similar buildings.' 'housing' should be 'housing complex' to be natural. Suggestion: use hyphenated compound adjectives for building heights, avoid numerals with colon, and use plural 'buildings' appropriately. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Well usually I don't take photos of buildings because I grew up in a city and it's a regular view for me so I don't take that much photos of buildings.

✓ Well, usually I don't take photos of buildings because I grew up in a city and they are a common sight for me, so I don't take that many photos of buildings.

Errors: 'that much photos' is incorrect quantifier usage; 'photos' is countable, so use 'many' not 'much.' Also 'it's a regular view' is awkward; use 'they are a common sight.' Suggestion: choose 'many' with countable nouns and 'much' with uncountable nouns; adjust subject reference for plural 'buildings.' Grammar problem type ID:14

× Well if it is a unique one then yes why not.

✓ Well, if it is a unique one, then yes, why not.

Primary issue is punctuation and flow rather than verb form; sentence is acceptable but needs commas for clarity. No verb-form change required; keeping present simple 'is' matches context. Suggestion: add commas to separate clauses for natural speech-to-writing conversion. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Uh, yes, there is a building that I like, would like to visit, and it is actually near my office.

✓ Uh, yes, there is a building that I would like to visit, and it is actually near my office.

Redundant phrasing 'I like, would like to visit' mixes tenses and is wordy. Use 'I would like to visit' to express desire. 'There is' is used correctly to introduce existence. Suggestion: remove redundant 'I like' to keep sentence concise and grammatically consistent. Grammar problem type ID:3

× It is almost fully covered by glass, so it looks really good, uh, when, uh, the sun shines upon it.

✓ It is almost completely covered in glass, so it looks really good when the sun shines on it.

Use 'completely' rather than 'fully' for naturalness; both okay but 'completely covered in glass' is idiomatic. 'Shines upon it' is overly formal; use 'shines on it.' Also remove filler 'uh' and extra commas. Suggestion: prefer idiomatic prepositions with 'covered in' and 'shines on.' Grammar problem type ID:8

× Uh, yes, uh, I want to live in a tall building. In fact, uh, currently I'm living in a tall building because, uh, it is UH-14 storied high, so, umm, and it, it has good facilities, uh, like, uh, for an example, it has their own saloon, it has their own supermarket.

✓ Uh, yes, I want to live in a tall building. In fact, currently I live in a tall building because it is 14 storeys high, and it has good facilities, for example, it has its own salon and its own supermarket.

Multiple issues: 'currently I'm living' is acceptable but 'I live' is more natural for permanent residence. 'UH-14 storied high' is incorrect; use '14 storeys high' or '14-storey.' 'for an example' should be 'for example.' 'their own' is incorrect pronoun because subject is singular building; use 'its own.' 'saloon' (beauty shop) should be 'salon.' Suggestion: use correct ordinal/adjective forms for building height, match possessive pronoun to singular noun, and use standard phrases like 'for example.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× So I really love to do that.

✓ So I really like that.

'Love to do that' is vague and 'do that' lacks a clear referent; 'like that' fits context of enjoying living in the building. Pronoun/reference issue: the demonstrative 'that' is acceptable but simpler 'I really like it' or 'I really like living there' is clearer. Suggestion: replace vague verbs and pronouns with specific expressions: 'I really like living there' or 'I really enjoy it.' Grammar problem type ID:12}]}