Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct tense, singular/plural forms, and clearer vocabulary. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words (for example, 'but' or 'and') to keep it coherent. Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: I didn't have tall buildings near my home when I lived in a small rural area. However, now that I live in Jakarta there are several high-rise buildings near my boarding house, such as office towers and a shopping mall, which make the neighborhood feel very busy and modern.

Sugerencia: Work on accuracy, coherent structure and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence ('Yes, I do' or 'No, I don't'), then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Use correct verb forms and choose appropriate words (e.g., 'architecture', 'interested in design', 'weekends'). Avoid unclear or invented words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially new ones or those with interesting architecture. I began photographing architecture after I moved to Jakarta because I was fascinated by the city's eclectic styles, and I usually take pictures while walking around on weekends.

Sugerencia: Clarify the specific building and correct factual errors (Palace of Brussels is in Belgium). Give a direct topic sentence and one or two supporting details explaining why you want to visit. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'Hall of Mirrors', 'royal history') and correct grammar.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the Palace of Versailles in France because I'm fascinated by its architecture and interior design. Seeing the Hall of Mirrors and the royal apartments would help me learn more about French history and royal culture.

Sugerencia: Make your opinion clear with a concise topic sentence, then provide reasons and a conditional statement if needed. Correct grammatical errors and choose precise words ('prefer more space and a garden', 'suitable housing', 'close to work and community'). Keep responses under five sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't really want to live in a tall building because I prefer having more space and a garden. However, if I had no choice in the future, I would move into an apartment to be closer to my workplace and the local community.

× I didn't have tall building near my home when I live in a small rural areas.

✓ I didn't have tall buildings near my home when I lived in a small rural area.

The sentence mixes past simple negative 'didn't have' with present tense 'live'; both verbs must be past tense. Also 'building' should be plural to match general meaning, and 'areas' should be singular 'area' with the article 'a'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense ('lived') and match noun number and article ('a small rural area').

× Now I live in Jakarta and there are several high areas near my boarding house including office tower and light shopping mall which make the neighborhood feel very busy and modern.

✓ Now I live in Jakarta and there are several tall buildings near my boarding house, including an office tower and a small shopping mall, which make the neighborhood feel very busy and modern.

Use 'tall buildings' instead of 'high areas' to refer to buildings. Add articles 'an' and 'a' before singular countable nouns 'office tower' and 'small shopping mall'. 'Light' is incorrect adjective for mall; 'small' fits context. Commas improve clarity. The verb 'make' correctly agrees with plural subject 'several tall buildings'.

× Yes, I usually take photo of of the new building, very often photographed architecture when I'm building acid or whose liking design.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of new buildings; I very often photograph architecture when I'm walking around or when I like a design.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' when speaking generally. Use 'take photos of' + plural noun. 'Photographed' is past form; use base verb 'photograph' for habitual action. 'I'm building acid' is nonsensical; likely 'I'm walking around'. Replace 'whose liking design' with 'when I like a design'. Maintain present simple/habitual structure.

× I started taking acetitural photos when I live in Jakarta because I became fascinated by the city fairy style and I would often take picture while walking A1 on weekend.

✓ I started taking architectural photos when I lived in Jakarta because I became fascinated by the city's fairytale style, and I would often take pictures while walking around on weekends.

Use past tense 'lived' to match 'started'. Correct spelling 'architectural'. 'City fairy style' likely means 'city's fairytale style' or 'fairy-tale style'—use 'city's fairytale style'. 'Take picture' should be plural 'take pictures'. 'Walking A1' is unclear; use 'walking around'. 'On weekend' -> 'on weekends'.

× Yes, I would love to visit the Palace of Brussels in France because I'm fascinated by its architecture and interior design, Saying the whole of Mirror and the Royal Department would help me learn more about friends, history and royal culture.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit the Palace of Versailles in France because I'm fascinated by its architecture and interior design; seeing the Hall of Mirrors and the royal apartments would help me learn more about French history and royal culture.

'Palace of Brussels' is incorrect; likely 'Palace of Versailles'. Use present continuous 'I'm fascinated' is fine. 'Saying the whole of Mirror' should be 'seeing the Hall of Mirrors'. 'Royal Department' should be 'royal apartments'. 'Friends' should be 'French'. Also use semicolon to separate clauses. Correct nouns and articles for proper names.

× I don't really like living a tall building because I prefer more space and garden, but there is a housing suited in the city.

✓ I don't really like living in a tall building because I prefer more space and a garden, but there is suitable housing in the city.

Use preposition 'in' with 'living in a tall building'. Add article 'a garden'. 'Housing suited' is awkward; use adjective 'suitable housing'. Ensure noun phrases are correctly ordered.

× If I have no choice in the future, I would live in an apartment building to be closer to work and unity.

✓ If I have no choice in the future, I will live in an apartment building to be closer to work and the community.

In a real future condition 'if I have no choice', the main clause should use 'will' not 'would'. Replace 'unity' with 'the community' to convey living near others; add article 'the'. This keeps conditional and future tense consistent.