Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần sửa ngữ pháp nhỏ (ví dụ: số ít/ số nhiều), ngắn gọn hơn và có câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Nên dùng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể và liên từ đơn giản để kết nối (ví dụ: “for example”, “also”). Tránh lặp ý và đảm bảo không quá 5 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes. I live in Ho Chi Minh City, which has many tall buildings. For example, District 1 is the central business area with numerous office towers and high-rise apartments. These skyscrapers are visible from many neighborhoods and shape the city skyline.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời tốt về nội dung nhưng cần rõ ràng hơn và sửa một số cấu trúc không tự nhiên (ví dụ "to dramatic images"). Hãy trình bày câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu một hoặc hai ví dụ cụ thể về phong cách chụp và mục đích sử dụng ảnh. Giữ tổng số câu dưới 5.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing buildings because I like architectural details and modern designs. For example, I often focus on unusual angles and strong contrasts to create dramatic photos for my online profile. Sometimes I also shoot at sunset to capture warm light on the facades.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời lặp ý so với câu trước và có lỗi số nhiều/số ít ("a famous architectural sites"). Nên nêu rõ tên địa điểm cụ thể, lý do thích và một hoạt động cụ thể bạn sẽ làm khi đến đó. Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để liên kết ý.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit the Ho Chi Minh Mausoleum because I admire its historical and architectural significance. I would spend time studying its design details and then relax in a nearby café while taking photos of the building and the surrounding square.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc (ví dụ "from about week", "Most living in a tall building my dream"). Cần một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích lý do thích, rồi nêu 1–2 bất tiện cụ thể với liên từ như "however" hoặc "but". Giữ ngắn gọn và mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy panoramic views and privacy. However, it can be inconvenient when elevators break down or when I need to go shopping frequently since shops may be far away. Despite these drawbacks, I still think living high up would suit my lifestyle.

× District 1, the central business district, have numerous office towers and commercial developments.

✓ District 1, the central business district, has numerous office towers and commercial developments.

The subject 'District 1' is singular, so the verb must be singular 'has' not 'have'. Use subject-verb agreement: singular subject requires singular verb form. Suggestion: Identify the grammatical subject and ensure the verb matches its number (singular/plural).

× For example, I often try to capture striking size, contrast and unusual angles to dramatic images for my photo profile.

✓ For example, I often try to capture striking shapes, contrasts and unusual angles to create dramatic images for my photo profile.

Several word form and usage issues: 'size' should be 'shapes' or 'sizes' in plural for variety; 'contrast' should be plural 'contrasts' to match list; 'to dramatic images' is incorrect — the infinitive 'to create' is needed to indicate purpose, and 'dramatic images' is the object. Suggestion: choose correct noun forms (singular/plural) and use an infinitive or gerund appropriately to show purpose.

× Yes, I would love to visit a famous architectural sites in Vietnam, for example the tourist mausoleum in the country.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit famous architectural sites in Vietnam, for example the tourist mausoleum in the country.

Using 'a' with plural 'sites' is incorrect. Either use 'a famous architectural site' (singular) or 'famous architectural sites' (no indefinite article). Suggestion: match article choice to whether the noun is singular or plural.

× I'm fascinated by architectural details and modern designs and I would enjoy sitting in a nearby cafe to admire the building and take photos.

✓ I'm fascinated by architectural details and modern designs, and I would enjoy sitting in a nearby cafe to admire the buildings and take photos.

The sentence refers generally to multiple structures, so 'the building' is inconsistent; use plural 'the buildings' to match 'architectural details and modern designs'. Suggestion: ensure noun number (singular/plural) is consistent with context.

× Yes I do, I enjoy the view from high up and watching the activities in the neighborhood from about week.

✓ Yes I do. I enjoy the view from high up and watching the activities in the neighborhood for about a week.

Run-on and time expression errors: two independent clauses should be separated by a period or conjunction. 'from about week' is incorrect; use 'for about a week' to indicate duration. Suggestion: separate clauses properly and use correct preposition and article for time durations.

× Most living in a tall building my dream.

✓ Most living in a tall building is my dream.

This sentence lacks a proper verb and has incorrect word order. It should use a gerund phrase 'Living in a tall building' or 'Most of all, living in a tall building is my dream.' The original 'Most living' is unclear. Suggestion: use a clear subject ('Living in a tall building') and the linking verb 'is' to complete the sentence.

× However, there are some inconveniences like having to go shopping often or relying on elevators which can be annoying sometimes.

✓ However, there are some inconveniences, such as having to go shopping often or relying on elevators, which can be annoying sometimes.

Use 'such as' rather than 'like' for examples in formal contexts and add commas to set off the nonrestrictive clause 'which can be annoying sometimes.' Suggestion: prefer 'such as' for examples and punctuate nonrestrictive clauses with commas.