Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and grammar errors (article/noun agreement).

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. I don't like them much because I grew up in a village with wide open spaces and many trees, so the crowded, concrete environment feels noisy and cramped.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer first, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (article use, verb forms) and avoid contradicting phrases. Keep within 3–4 sentences and finish your thought.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of buildings because photography helps me remember special places. For example, I often photograph interesting facades or historical details, and later I look at the pictures when I relax to recall those moments.

Sugerencia: Give a focused answer: name one or two specific buildings/places and explain why using linking words. Avoid unclear openings and tense/grammar errors. Balance your answer if you mention other preferences (nature) by linking it clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai and the Taj Mahal in India because both are famous for their architecture and history. However, I also enjoy nature trips, so I try to combine city visits with some time by the sea or in the mountains.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give two clear reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (articles, pluralization) and avoid repetition. Use one concise concluding sentence to reinforce your preference.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I prefer a house in a village because I value open spaces, trees and animals, which make it easier for me to relax and enjoy nature.

× Unfortunately, yes, there are very tall buildings near my home, which I don't really, uh, enjoy it because I used to live in a places, uh, in a village actually, which they had very big spaces around and uh, surrounding these places.

✓ Unfortunately, yes, there are very tall buildings near my home, which I don't really enjoy because I used to live in a place, in a village actually, which had very big open spaces surrounding it.

Errors: unnecessary pronoun 'it' after 'enjoy' (avoid redundant object), article and singular/plural misuse ('a places' should be 'a place' or 'places'), incorrect pronoun 'they' referring to 'village' (use 'which' or remove). Suggestions: remove redundant 'it' after 'enjoy', change 'a places' to 'a place', use 'had' for the relative clause and 'surrounding it' to refer back to 'a place'. Keep tense consistent (past habit 'used to live').

× I know more enjoying taking photos of this buildings because I have learned to take uh pictures and save memories in my mind which I can enjoy when I'm relaxing and remembering this moment.

✓ I enjoy taking photos of these buildings because I have learned to take pictures and save memories in my mind which I can enjoy when I'm relaxing and remembering those moments.

Errors: 'this buildings' uses wrong demonstrative and article: should be 'these buildings'. 'I know more enjoying' is ungrammatical; use 'I enjoy'. 'uh pictures' extra filler removed. 'this moment' should be plural or 'those moments' to match 'memories'. Suggestions: use 'enjoy taking photos of these buildings', use plural demonstrative 'these', and match singular/plural in 'moments'.

× It's better to than snapping and taking photos Uh, also I.

✓ It is better than snapping photos. Also, I ...

Errors: awkward comparative structure 'better to than', redundant 'snapping and taking photos', sentence fragment 'Also I.' Suggestions: simplify to 'It is better than snapping photos' and complete the following thought if needed. Maintain clear subject-verb structure and avoid fragments.

× What's There are many buildings I would like to visit specially in Dubai and India.

✓ There are many buildings I would like to visit, especially in Dubai and India.

Errors: extra 'What's' creates ungrammatical clause, misspelling 'specially' should be 'especially' for emphasis. Suggestions: remove 'What's', use 'especially', and place a comma for clarity.

× I have seen many amazing buildings in India. I would like one day to visit them and enjoying them.

✓ I have seen many amazing buildings in India. I would like one day to visit them and enjoy them.

Error: 'to visit them and enjoying them' mixes infinitive 'to visit' with gerund 'enjoying'; parallel structure requires infinitive 'enjoy' or use gerund for both. Suggestion: use 'to visit them and enjoy them' or 'visiting and enjoying them'.

× But for me it's really important to go to nature, mountains and spending time by sea and swimming sometime.

✓ But for me it's really important to go to nature and the mountains, and to spend time by the sea and swim sometimes.

Errors: inconsistent verb forms 'to go' with 'spending' (use parallel infinitives), missing articles 'the sea' and 'the mountains', 'sometime' misused for 'sometimes'. Suggestions: use parallel structure 'to go... and to spend...', add definite articles where needed, and use 'sometimes' for frequency.

× No, that's not one of my dream to live in a building.

✓ No, that's not one of my dreams, to live in a building.

Errors: 'one of my dream' should be plural 'dreams' when using 'one of', and comma before infinitive clause improves clarity. Suggestion: use 'one of my dreams'.

× I prefer to live in houses in open spaces like a small village with some pets, animals around to enjoy more the view and nature.

✓ I prefer to live in a house in open spaces, like a small village, with some pets or animals around to enjoy the view and nature more.

Errors: 'live in houses' vs 'like a small village' mismatch; use singular 'a house' or plural consistently. 'some pets, animals' redundant; use 'pets or animals'. Word order 'enjoy more the view' is awkward; place 'more' after 'nature' or 'enjoy the view and nature more'. Suggestions: choose singular/plural consistently, remove redundancy, and adjust word order.

× Because I have been always lived in a places which are full of trees any.

✓ Because I have always lived in places which are full of trees.

Errors: 'have been always lived' mixes present perfect continuous with perfect; correct is 'have always lived'. 'a places' incorrect article and number; use 'places'. Trailing 'any' is incorrect. Suggestions: use 'have always lived' for life experience up to now, remove extra 'a' and 'any', and use plural 'places' or 'a place' consistently.