Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home.”). Avoid repetition and filler words (uh, um, repeated negatives). Then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (e.g. “because” or “so”) to explain why or describe your town. Keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small town, so most of the structures are low-rise houses and small shops, which gives the area a quiet, village-like atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Be specific about what you photograph and why, and avoid vague phrases. Use one linking word to connect your reason and add a short example of how you use the photos. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and remove hesitations.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph buildings because I love their architectural details and symmetry. For example, I take pictures of interesting facades and later organize them into a digital album to study different styles.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and then give a specific type of historical building you want to visit with reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words like “however” or “for example” to clarify your preference and add one concrete example to make the answer more convincing.

Ejemplo: I don’t have a single specific building in mind, but I would like to visit historical buildings. For example, I’m interested in old cathedrals and colonial-era government buildings because they reveal a lot about a city’s history and craftsmanship.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give one or two specific benefits of living in a tall building using linking words like “because” or “for example.” Remove repeated words and filler sounds. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and be specific about what you like about the view or lifestyle.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because higher floors offer panoramic views of the city. For example, I enjoy watching sunsets and seeing the lights at night, which makes living there feel more relaxing.

× No, there's no, not not many or no, though there's no, no tall buildings near my home because we kind of, we are.

✓ No, there are not many; there are no tall buildings near my home because we live in a small town.

The original sentence has redundant negatives, false contractions, and incomplete clauses. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26). Use 'there are' for plural countable nouns and simplify negatives: 'not many' or 'there are no' rather than combining them. Also replace 'we kind of, we are' with a clear clause 'we live in a small town.'

× I, I live in a kind of small town, so we only have those, uh, short and tiny buildings around.

✓ I live in a small town, so we only have short, small buildings around.

Using 'those' plus 'around' is awkward and 'tiny' and 'short' both adjectives describing plural 'buildings' is fine but word choice and article use were off. This is a singular/plural and article choice problem (ID 1 and 22). Remove filler words and use 'short, small buildings' for clarity.

× Don't have any tall and huge buildings near my home in that area.

✓ There aren't any tall or huge buildings near my home in that area.

This fragment lacks a subject and auxiliary verb; it's a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use 'There aren't any...' to form a complete negative sentence and choose 'tall or huge' to avoid redundancy.

× Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I really love the aesthetic and the beauty of the building.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I really love their aesthetics and beauty.

The pronoun 'the building' is singular while 'buildings' is plural; also 'aesthetic' should be plural or 'aesthetics' when speaking generally. This mixes present tense usage and pronoun agreement (ID 6 and 12). Use 'their' to match plural noun and 'aesthetics' for the general quality.

× So I want to capture all of them in my photos and tidy up them into a, uh, like a play, like a lease to see.

✓ So I want to capture them in my photos and organize them into a slideshow to view.

The original has incorrect object placement 'tidy up them' (pronoun order) and unclear phrase 'like a play, like a lease to see.' This is sentence structure and pronoun misuse (ID 26 and 12). Use 'organize them into a slideshow' for clear meaning and correct pronoun placement.

× Umm, I don't have any specific building that I would like to visit, uh, but I would like to visit the buildings that have very historical, historical, uh, speciality award to that very historical.

✓ I don't have a specific building I want to visit, but I would like to visit buildings that are very historical or have special historical significance.

'Any specific building' and repeated 'historical' plus 'speciality award' are incorrect quantifier and word choice uses (ID 14). Simplify to 'a specific building' and use 'special historical significance' to convey intended meaning.

× Yeah. So I want to visit the places, the building like.

✓ So I want to visit such places and buildings.

Fragmented and informal ending 'the building like' is a sentence structure problem (ID 26). Replace with concise phrase 'such places and buildings' to complete the thought.

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building because when I live in a tall building on the, the higher, the higher level, I get to see the whole view of the city or of the town.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because when I live on a higher floor, I get to see the whole view of the city or town.

Redundant articles and awkward comparative phrasing 'the higher, the higher level' are sentence structure and third-person singular concerns (ID 2 and 26). Use 'on a higher floor' and keep verb forms consistent; 'I get to see' is correct present tense for habitual desire.

× That's that's the favorite views, the favorite scenery that I like.

✓ Those are my favorite views and scenery.

'That's' with plural 'views' is incorrect; this is an adjective/pronoun agreement error (ID 13 and 12). Use plural demonstrative 'Those' and possessive 'my' for clarity and correct agreement.

× So I do want to live in a tall building. That's my favorite.

✓ So I do want to live in a tall building; it's my preference.

'That's my favorite' is informal and slightly ambiguous. This is a sentence structure/style issue (ID 26). Use 'it's my preference' or 'that's what I prefer' for clear, complete expression.