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Part 1

Examinador

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Candidato

Of course I live in a luxury city in the China, so many tall buildings around my home including hospital, hotel and some apartments.

Examinador

Do you take photos of buildings?

Candidato

Of course, I really enjoy because many designers work on my city, so some buildings in my city is really interesting and special. So when I go out, I will take photos to record this special pictures.

Examinador

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Candidato

I like to visit the palace. This is a traditional Chinese building in Beijing because it's have special factor like red wall and yellow roof. So I think I'm interested in it.

Examinador

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Candidato

I don't like live in tall building because I prefer to live in a house with a yard because I really like some plants like rose and so on and I have pet dog so I think yard is important for me.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Puntuación: 64.0

Sugerencia: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题,避免语法错误与多余词汇。应使用正确的冠词和介词(e.g. "in China" 而不是 "in the China"),并用一两句具体说明数量或类型,使用连接词使句子更流畅。控制在最多五句内。

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. I live in a major Chinese city where you can find high-rise apartments, hotels and hospitals close by. For example, there is a 30-storey residential tower two blocks from my apartment.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Puntuación: 58.0

Sugerencia: 回答应更简洁并注意语法一致性(主谓一致、时态),避免重复(例如不要同时说 "enjoy" 和多次 "special")。使用连接词如 "because" 或 "so" 来说明原因,并给出具体例子或频率。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because our city has many unique designs by talented architects. For instance, I like photographing a curved glass tower downtown, and I usually take pictures whenever I visit the city center.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Puntuación: 62.0

Sugerencia: 回答应先直接说出想去的建筑,然后用1–2句具体描述原因或特色。注意语法(例如 "it has" 而不是 "it's have"),并用连词使思路连贯。避免笼统词汇如 "special factor",改用具体描述如颜色、历史或建筑风格。

Ejemplo: I would like to visit the Forbidden City in Beijing. It is a historic palace complex famous for its red walls and yellow glazed roofs, and I want to see the traditional architecture and imperial artifacts in person.

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Puntuación: 66.0

Sugerencia: 回答要先明确表达观点,然后给出两三个具体原因,用连接词避免重复。注意语法(如 "I don't like living in" 和 "I prefer a house with a yard"),并用更自然的词组描述原因(e.g. "space for my dog")。

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I prefer a house with a yard because I enjoy gardening, especially growing roses, and my dog needs outdoor space to run and play.

Gramática

Article errors

× Of course I live in a luxury city in the China, so many tall buildings around my home including hospital, hotel and some apartments.

Of course. I live in a luxurious city in China, so there are many tall buildings around my home, including hospitals, hotels, and some apartments.

问题类型:22(冠词错误)和1(单复数)以及3(There be)组合。解释:句中不应使用冠词“the China”,国家名China通常不加冠词;“luxury”作为形容词应用“luxurious”;表达存在时应使用“There are”引出复数名词;列举的名词如hospital、hotel应使用复数形式以与“many”呼应。建议:使用“There are many...”结构,并把可数名词根据数量改为复数,China前不加the。

Verb in the present participle form

× Of course, I really enjoy because many designers work on my city, so some buildings in my city is really interesting and special. So when I go out, I will take photos to record this special pictures.

Of course. I really enjoy it because many designers work in my city, so some buildings in my city are really interesting and special. So when I go out, I take photos to record these special buildings.

问题类型:10(现在分词形式)/6(现在时)/1(单复数)/11(介词)。解释:动词enjoy后需要宾语(enjoy it / enjoy taking photos);介词应为“work in my city”而非“on”;主语是复数“some buildings”,谓语应为“are”;“record this special pictures”中指示代词与名词数不匹配,应为“these special buildings”;将“will take”改为一般现在或习惯性动作“take photos”。建议:注意动词后是否需要宾语,主谓一致,介词搭配以及代词与名词数一致。

There be issue

× I like to visit the palace. This is a traditional Chinese building in Beijing because it's have special factor like red wall and yellow roof. So I think I'm interested in it.

I like to visit the palace. It is a traditional Chinese building in Beijing because it has special features like red walls and yellow roofs. So I am interested in it.

问题类型:3(There be)/9(过去分词)/1(单复数)/27(主谓一致)。解释:句中“it's have”是错误的助动词与实义动词搭配,应改为“it has”;“special factor”表达不自然,改为“special features”;墙和屋顶应使用复数形式与泛指搭配。建议:注意主语+动词的正确形式,使用自然搭配(have features),并根据语境调整单复数。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I don't like live in tall building because I prefer to live in a house with a yard because I really like some plants like rose and so on and I have pet dog so I think yard is important for me.

I don't like living in a tall building because I prefer to live in a house with a yard. I really like plants such as roses, and I have a pet dog, so I think a yard is important for me.

问题类型:12(代词或形式使用错误)/8(动名词)/1(单复数)/22(冠词)。解释:动词短语“don't like live”应改为动名词形式“don't like living”;“tall building”需加不定冠词“a tall building”;列举植物时应使用复数“roses”或泛指“plants”;“pet dog”前可省或加不定冠词,但“yard”作为泛指需要不定冠词“a yard”;句子过长应拆分以提高可读性。建议:注意动词后的动名词形式、可数名词前的冠词使用、名词单复数一致,并把复杂句拆成短句。

Vocabulario

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
InterestingAbsorbing
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
TallIn height; Demanding
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