Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu tính mạch lạc và lặp từ. Học sinh nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, tránh lặp cấu trúc "tall buildings" và "near my home" hai lần; sau đó bổ sung 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: không gian xanh, tiếng ồn, giao thông). Sử dụng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" một cách hợp lý để tăng tính logic. Giữ độ dài không quá 4-5 câu.

Ejemplo: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I prefer living here because the area is quieter and less polluted, with more green space and lower traffic. As a result, it's easier to relax and sleep well at night.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời hơi lặp từ và có cụm từ không tự nhiên ("so attractive and breathtaking and well known"). Nên mở bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi nêu lý do cụ thể khi bạn chụp (kiến trúc độc đáo, lịch sử, ánh sáng). Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "when" để liên kết ý. Tránh dùng quá nhiều tính từ tương tự chồng chéo.

Ejemplo: I don't often photograph buildings, but I do when they catch my eye. For example, I'll take pictures of historic or unusually designed buildings because their architecture and lighting are especially impressive.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời ngắt quãng, có lỗi ngữ pháp ("it's service are"), và câu cuối bị unfinished. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu tên tòa nhà, sau đó giải thích rõ ràng với 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (dịch vụ, kiến trúc, vị trí), và kết thúc bằng ý hoàn chỉnh. Kiểm tra ngữ pháp và động từ chia đúng.

Ejemplo: Yes, I'd like to visit Burj Al Arab, which is often called a seven-star hotel. I want to see its unique sail-shaped design and enjoy the spectacular views from its restaurants because the interior and the service are reputed to be extraordinary.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý rõ ràng nhưng chứa lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ ("is is"), cấu trúc không mạch lạc ("I from my perspective"). Nên mở bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, đưa ra 2 lý do cụ thể (chi phí, tiện ích, tiếp cận), dùng liên từ "but" để đưa ra ngoại lệ. Câu cuối tốt nhưng nên diễn đạt gọn hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because it would probably be more expensive and less convenient for daily errands. However, I'd be open to trying it for a day to experience the views and facilities.

× To be honest, there aren't any tall buildings near my home, but I'd say I'd prefer to stay here because it's more peaceful and less polluted without tall buildings near my house.

✓ To be honest, there aren't any tall buildings near my home, but I'd say I prefer to stay here because it's is more peaceful and less polluted without tall buildings near my house.

The phrase 'I'd say I'd prefer' is repetitive; use one modal form. Replace 'I'd say I'd prefer to stay' with 'I'd say I prefer to stay' to express a general preference. Also ensure consistency with 'my home' and 'my house' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: 'To be honest, there aren't any tall buildings near my home, and I prefer to stay here because it is more peaceful and less polluted.' Note: This correction addresses article/redundancy and style to improve clarity.

× I would say I don't frequently take photos of buildings, I just take photos of them when they are so attractive and breathtaking and well known.

✓ I would say I don't frequently take photos of buildings; I only take photos of them when they are very attractive, breathtaking, or well known.

Use 'only' instead of 'just' for clarity and change 'so attractive' to 'very attractive' for standard usage. Use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses. Use commas and 'or' to list adjectives correctly. Suggestion: Keep the present simple to express habitual actions.

× Yes, I would like to visit Buju Arab which is considered a seven star hotel. The main reason is that I think it's service are excellent and its views are breathtaking. They are also.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Buju Arab, which is considered a seven-star hotel. The main reason is that I think its service is excellent and its views are breathtaking.

Use the possessive 'its' not 'it's' (which is a contraction of 'it is'). 'Service' is a singular noun here so it takes the singular verb 'is' not 'are'. Remove the incomplete sentence 'They are also.' and hyphenate 'seven-star'. Suggestion: Remember 'its' for possession and match singular nouns with singular verbs.

× I would say no because I from my perspective living in a tall building is is expensive and inconvenient to go down and up. But if I had a chance I would like to try living a day in the tall building.

✓ I would say no because, from my perspective, living in a tall building is expensive and inconvenient for going up and down. But if I had the chance, I would like to try living for a day in a tall building.

Insert commas around the phrase 'from my perspective'. Remove the duplicated 'is is'. Use the idiomatic order 'going up and down' rather than 'down and up'. Change 'if I had a chance' to 'if I had the chance' and 'living a day' to 'living for a day'. These changes fix word order, redundancy, and idiomatic expressions. Suggestion: Check for duplicate words and prefer common collocations like 'going up and down' and 'for a day'.