Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct, reduce fillers (like, yeah), correct grammar (use present simple and prepositions), and organize into 2–3 clear sentences: state where you live, mention current situation, and give one brief detail. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' for contrast.

Ejemplo: I usually live in the countryside, so there aren't many tall buildings near my home. However, at the moment I'm staying with my aunt in town, and there is a tall building near her house.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetitive phrases and conditional confusion. Use present simple for general habits and explain reason clearly with linking words (because, so). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and be specific about what you photograph.

Ejemplo: I don't usually take photos of buildings in general. But if I see an interesting house design, I take pictures to show my dad because we are planning to buy a home.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then add one supporting reason to make the response more engaging. Use clear phrasing (e.g. 'No, there isn't') and a linking word like 'because' or 'but' to expand briefly.

Ejemplo: No, there isn't a particular building I want to visit because I'm more interested in natural places than architecture. However, I might visit a famous building if someone recommended it.

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct tense; avoid filler words and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details (why you want it, what you imagine). Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall apartment. I imagine buying a flat for my family so we can enjoy views of the sunrise and sunset from high up.

× No, like I lived in rural, Yeah, like I live in countryside. But for now I'm living with my auntie. So in in nearby auntie home there is tall building.

✓ No, I used to live in a rural area. Now I live in the countryside, but at the moment I'm living with my aunt. There is a tall building near my aunt's house.

Errors: incorrect or missing prepositions and articles ('in rural' -> 'in a rural area'; 'in countryside' -> 'in the countryside'); repeated word 'in in'; incorrect possessive 'auntie home' -> 'aunt's house'). Suggestions: use 'in a rural area' or 'in the countryside' for locations, use possessive form 'aunt's house', and avoid repeating words. Use consistent present tense when stating current living situation. (Grammar problem type ID: 11).

× No I will not. I will not take photos of building but I will take like if I like some house designs then I will definitely take some photos to show my dad. Like we are planning to buy home so I'm taking some designs for my dad to show.

✓ No, I will not. I will not take photos of buildings, but if I like some house designs I will definitely take photos to show my dad. We are planning to buy a house, so I'm taking photos of designs to show him.

Errors: missing plural/article and awkward phrasing ('photos of building' -> 'photos of buildings' or 'a building'; 'buy home' -> 'buy a house'; repetition 'take some designs' -> 'take photos of designs'). Suggestions: use plural with general nouns ('buildings') or add articles for singular ('a building'); use 'a house' when referring to buying; simplify redundant phrases. (Grammar problem type ID: 22).

× No, there is not such kind of building I want to visit. Yeah, I don't have anything like to visit.

✓ No, there is no such building I want to visit. I don't have any building I want to visit.

Errors: incorrect negation and word order ('there is not such kind of building' -> 'there is no such building'); 'anything like to visit' is ungrammatical—use 'any building I want to visit'. Suggestions: use 'there is no' for general negation and place 'any' before the noun phrase; keep word order natural: 'I don't have any building I want to visit.' (Grammar problem type ID: 12).

× Yeah, of course I dream like I I lived in apartment like I want to buy a whole apartment for me, for my family and I want to live my life there by looking sunset, sunrise.

✓ Yes, of course I dream of living in an apartment. I want to buy an entire apartment for myself and my family, and I want to live there watching the sunrise and sunset.

Errors: incorrect tense and verb forms ('I dream like I I lived in apartment' mixes past and present—use 'dream of living'); missing articles ('in apartment' -> 'in an apartment'; 'a whole apartment' -> 'an entire apartment'); pronoun forms ('for me' -> 'for myself'); awkward phrase 'by looking sunset, sunrise' -> 'watching the sunrise and sunset'. Suggestions: use 'dream of' plus gerund for aspirations, include articles before singular countable nouns, use reflexive pronoun 'myself' when appropriate, and use 'watching' for observing events like sunrise/sunset. (Grammar problem type ID: 5).