Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda agak membingungkan dan mengandung informasi yang tidak konsisten (Hawaii vs Bali). Gunakan satu lokasi yang jelas, mulai dengan kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab, lalu tambahkan satu atau dua detail spesifik. Hindari kalimat panjang yang tidak jelas dan perbaiki tata bahasa (mis. "there is no really tall building" → "there aren't really any tall buildings").

Ejemplo: There aren't really any tall buildings near my home. My neighborhood mostly consists of two-storey houses and coconut trees, because local regulations limit building heights. For example, the tallest building nearby is only two storeys high, so the skyline is quite low.

Sugerencia: Jawaban singkat dan tidak jelas; banyak kesalahan kosakata dan tata bahasa (mis. "interested of" → "interested in", "like a bait" tidak jelas). Berikan alasan yang jelas dan satu contoh konkret saat menjelaskan preferensi Anda. Gunakan linking words seperti "because" atau "so" untuk koherensi.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because I'm more interested in nature. I prefer taking pictures of trees, beaches and sunsets because they feel more relaxing to me. For instance, last weekend I took several photos of the coastline at sunrise.

Sugerencia: Jawaban tidak terorganisir dan mengandung kesalahan nama tempat serta tata bahasa. Pilih satu gedung yang jelas (mis. "London" bukan "Blonda"), mulai dengan kalimat topik yang menyatakan keinginan, lalu jelaskan mengapa dan sebutkan satu detail spesifik. Hindari informasi berulang.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit historical buildings in London, such as the Tower of London. I'm interested in its history and architecture, and I want to see the ancient walls and the crown jewels exhibit. Visiting there would help me learn more about British history.

Sugerencia: Jawaban mengandung frasa yang tidak jelas ("afraid of hate", "easier to us to read every room"). Jawab langsung, berikan alasan konkret (mis. kenyamanan, keamanan, ruang keluarga), dan gunakan satu atau dua kalimat tambahan untuk menjelaskan preferensi Anda secara spesifik.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I'm uncomfortable with heights. I prefer a small, simple house where my family and I can have more privacy and a garden. For example, a two-storey house with a yard would be ideal for us.

× So there is no really tall building near my home, maybe just second floor.

✓ So there are no really tall buildings near my home, maybe just a second floor.

'There is/there are' must agree with plural noun. 'Really tall building' refers to zero or more buildings, so use plural 'buildings' and 'there are'. Also add article 'a' before 'second floor' and make 'second floor' singular to match 'maybe just a second floor.' Suggestion: use 'there are' for plural and include articles where needed.

× No I don't because I'm not interested of buildings.

✓ No, I don't because I'm not interested in buildings.

The correct preposition with 'interested' is 'in', not 'of'. Also add a comma after 'No' for natural speech. Suggestion: memorize common adjective + preposition collocations such as 'interested in'.

× I prefer to take a photo of nature like a bait.

✓ I prefer to take photos of nature, like a beach.

The phrase 'photo of nature' is acceptable but plural 'photos' fits general preference. 'Like a bait' is incorrect word choice; likely 'beach' or 'bay' was intended. Also add comma before example. Suggestion: choose correct noun (beach/bay) and match singular/plural appropriately.

× It's feel more pressure and also buildings like kinda city and I don't like it.

✓ It feels more peaceful, and buildings feel like a city, which I don't like.

Subject-verb agreement: use 'feels' with singular 'it'. Original 'more pressure' is incorrect collocation; perhaps intended 'more peaceful' or 'more peaceful feeling'. 'Kinda' is informal; clarify meaning. Use relative clause 'which I don't like' to refer to the situation. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and choose appropriate adjectives.

× Yo there is I want to visit the historical building in Blonda that a big country I want to learn and I want to see the old building in London Hall it look like.

✓ Yes, there is. I want to visit the historical buildings in Barcelona and learn about that country, and I want to see old buildings in London, like the Royal Hall.

The original sentence contains many structure errors and unclear place names. Break into shorter sentences, correct place names (assumed Barcelona and London), use plural 'buildings' for general interest, and add verbs and articles ('learn about that country'). Suggestion: divide ideas into clear sentences, use correct place names, and ensure each clause has a subject and verb.

× I am typically of person that afraid of hate, so I don't want to live in a tall building.

✓ I am typically the type of person who is afraid of heights, so I don't want to live in a tall building.

Wrong pronoun and noun phrases: use 'the type of person who' and 'afraid of heights' (not 'hate'). Also ensure 'is' for relative clause 'who is afraid'. Suggestion: learn fixed expressions like 'the type of person who' and 'afraid of heights'.

× I prefer to live in a simple house with my family.

✓ I prefer to live in a simple house with my family.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Suggestion: keep as is.

× A small simple house because it's easier to us to read every room or everything.

✓ A small, simple house because it's easier for us to reach every room and manage everything.

Preposition and verb choice errors: use 'easier for us' not 'to us'. 'To read every room' is incorrect; likely 'to reach' or 'to access'. 'Or everything' is vague; use 'and manage everything'. Also add comma between adjectives. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and verbs that match intended meaning.