Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and repeated words. Use correct plural and article forms (e.g., "there are a lot of tall buildings").

Ejemplo: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home, and they make the city look modern. For example, several residential towers nearby house lots of people with different lifestyles, such as young professionals and families.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, then one or two specific details about when and why you take photos. Remove unclear phrases like "It's English social media time" and avoid repetition. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to show reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings when I pass by them. I usually photograph striking facades or city views because I like sharing them on Snapchat and Instagram to show friends what I see.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly and correct grammar ("there is a new building near my home"). Give specific features and avoid vague words like "so on." Use linking words such as "because" and "for example." Keep to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I'd like to visit a new building near my home because it has several attractive facilities. For example, I heard it includes a swimming pool and a public park, so I want to see the design and try the amenities when I get the chance.

Sugerencia: Give a clear yes/no and then specific reasons. Remove hesitations and fix grammar ("I dream of living in a tall building"). Use linking words like "because" and provide one concrete reason or example (views, convenience). Limit to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I dream of living in a tall building because I want to enjoy the panoramic views of the city. Also, high-rise apartments often offer convenient facilities such as gyms and shops, which would make daily life easier.

× Yes, uh, where I'm living, there is a lot of tall buildings which, which increase the beauty of my city and uh, I can also, uh, say that there is a lot of people who live there, uh, with the different lifestyle.

✓ Yes, where I'm living, there are a lot of tall buildings which increase the beauty of my city, and I can also say that there are a lot of people who live there with different lifestyles.

The sentence uses 'there is' with plural nouns ('a lot of tall buildings', 'a lot of people'). Use 'there are' for plural subjects (There be issue). Also remove redundant filler words and make 'different lifestyles' plural to match 'people'. Use commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× It's English social media time, uh, whenever I see and I'm, whenever I'm passing from the tall buildings or uh, whenever I see a beautiful view, I always take photos uh, to upload on my social media for Snapchat.

✓ Because of social media, whenever I pass by tall buildings or see a beautiful view, I always take photos to upload to my Snapchat.

Original mixes tenses and has awkward phrasing. Use simple present for habitual actions ('I pass by', 'I see', 'I always take'). Use correct preposition 'pass by' and 'upload to' (Present tense issue and preposition choice). Remove filler words and tighten phrasing.

× Yes, I have a dream to visit a building which is near to my home because it's it's a new building and there is a lot of features.

✓ Yes, I have a dream to visit a building near my home because it's a new building and there are a lot of features.

Use 'there are' with plural 'features' (There be issue). Also say 'near my home' rather than 'near to my home' for natural phrasing. Remove duplicate 'it's'.

× I listen that they they are including saving pool, park and so on.

✓ I heard that they include a swimming pool, a park, and so on.

'I listen that' is ungrammatical; use 'I heard that' or 'I was told that' for reported information. Use simple present 'they include' to state planned features. 'Saving pool' is incorrect; likely 'swimming pool'. Ensure articles before countable nouns ('a swimming pool, a park'). This fits Verb in the present participle/past participle misuse and sentence structure corrections.

× So I will whenever I get a chance, I will definitely visit there.

✓ So whenever I get a chance, I will definitely visit it.

Redundant use of 'will' and awkward word order. Place time clause 'whenever I get a chance' before main clause or remove extra 'will'. Use 'visit it' rather than 'visit there' (visit + object). This addresses future tense formation and sentence structure.

× Is it so my dream to live in a tall building because, uh, one cinema life.

✓ Yes, it is my dream to live in a tall building because I want to experience that lifestyle like in the movies.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Is it so my dream' should be 'it is my dream' (sentence structure). Provide a clear reason using proper verb forms. This corrects subject-verb order and phrasing; also clarifies intended meaning.

× I wanna, I wanna say that how people live in a tall buildings and what's the view from the tall buildings and what they feel when they're living?

✓ I want to say how people live in tall buildings, what the view is from them, and how they feel living there.

Use standard form 'I want' instead of 'wanna' in formal responses. Remove extra article: 'in a tall buildings' should be 'in tall buildings' (pronoun/article agreement). Reorder clauses for grammatical questions/statements and use appropriate pronouns ('them' for buildings). This addresses incorrect use of pronouns and article/number agreement.