Part 1
Examinador
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Candidato
I'll say if I live in Korea there are a lot of tall building near my house, but in Australia Arabian suburbs and near my home there are only the low house and low buildings.
Examinador
Do you take photos of buildings?
Candidato
I do not take a photo of building. I'm not keen of the building and the architect. But if the building is like made by the wrong times call for the historical building, I do take a photo for my memory.
Examinador
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Candidato
Always talk about the Europe building. When I been the Italy and French, they were very the significant buildings like the theme park or the historical buildings. So it was really.
Examinador
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Candidato
I would like to say I don't want to ripen in the tour bedding. I used to live in apartment but in Korea because it's very common. But I've been living the house to since two years ago and it's very comfortable so I prefer living in the house.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: Keep your answer clear and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors (singular/plural, prepositions, word choice) and avoid unnecessary words. Aim for 2–4 sentences, e.g. state where you currently live and compare with Korea.
Ejemplo: Yes. In Korea there were many tall buildings near my house because I lived in a city, but where I live in Australia the suburbs around my home mostly have low houses and small buildings. For example, most homes here are single-storey and there are only a few two-storey blocks nearby.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give a brief reason and a specific example. Fix grammar (articles, prepositions) and improve vocabulary (architect, historic). Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to connect ideas. Keep sentences concise and natural.
Ejemplo: Not usually. I'm not very interested in architecture, so I rarely photograph buildings. However, I do take photos of historic buildings when I travel, for example the old cathedral I visited last year.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Begin with a clear statement naming a specific building or type of building you'd like to visit. Use past tense correctly and give one or two specific details or reasons. Avoid vague phrases and fix word order and article use. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to provide examples.
Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit historic buildings in Europe, especially in Italy and France. For example, I hope to see the Colosseum in Rome and Notre-Dame in Paris because I enjoy learning about their history and architecture.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Answer the question directly, using simple clear language. Correct vocabulary (e.g. 'live', 'apartment', 'town building' if meant) and sentence structure. Give one or two specific reasons for your preference and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.
Ejemplo: No, I don't want to live in a tall building. I used to live in an apartment in Korea, but for the past two years I've lived in a house and I find it more comfortable and private, so I prefer staying in a house.
× I'll say if I live in Korea there are a lot of tall building near my house, but in Australia Arabian suburbs and near my home there are only the low house and low buildings.
✓ If I live in Korea, there are a lot of tall buildings near my house, but in Australian suburbs near my home there are only low houses and low buildings.
Multiple errors: pluralization (building -> buildings, house -> houses) and article/word form issues. Grammar problem types: singular and plural issue (ID 1) and article errors (ID 22). Use plural nouns when referring to more than one item; use the adjective form 'Australian' not 'Arabian' if referring to Australia; remove unnecessary articles ('the low house' -> 'low houses'). Also add a comma after the subordinate clause for clarity.
× I do not take a photo of building. I'm not keen of the building and the architect.
✓ I do not take photos of buildings. I'm not keen on buildings or architecture.
Errors: singular/plural (photo of building -> photos of buildings) and incorrect preposition use (keen of -> keen on) and incorrect noun form (the architect -> architecture). Grammar problem types: singular and plural issue (ID 1), incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11), incorrect use of adjectives or nouns (ID 13). Use plural when speaking generally; use 'keen on' to express preference; use 'architecture' to refer to the field.
× But if the building is like made by the wrong times call for the historical building, I do take a photo for my memory.
✓ But if a building looks old or is a historic building, I do take a photo for my memories.
Errors: article use (the building -> a building), awkward phrasing ('like made by the wrong times call for the historical building') and noun form (memory -> memories). Grammar problem types: article errors (ID 22) and sentence structure errors (ID 26). Rephrase to 'looks old' or 'is a historic building' to convey intended meaning; use 'memories' or 'for my memory' depending on context—'memories' is natural here.
× Always talk about the Europe building.
✓ I always talk about European buildings.
Errors: missing subject/verb order and adjective form (the Europe building -> European buildings). Grammar problem types: sentence structure errors (ID 26) and incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13). Use 'I always talk about' and the adjective 'European' to modify 'buildings'.
× When I been the Italy and French, they were very the significant buildings like the theme park or the historical buildings.
✓ When I was in Italy and France, there were many significant buildings, such as theme parks and historic buildings.
Errors: past tense (been -> was), incorrect prepositions/articles (the Italy and French -> in Italy and France), pluralization and word order (they were very the significant buildings). Grammar problem types: past tense issue (ID 5), incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11), singular and plural issue (ID 1), and sentence structure errors (ID 26). Use 'was in' for past visits, plural nouns for multiple countries, and 'there were' to describe existence in the past.
× So it was really.
✓ So it was really impressive.
Error: sentence incomplete/unclear (sentence structure error ID 26) and missing adjective to complete thought. Add an adjective like 'impressive' to state reaction clearly.
× I would like to say I don't want to ripen in the tour bedding.
✓ I would like to say I don't want to live in a high-rise apartment.
Errors: wrong word choice (ripen, tour bedding), sentence structure. Grammar problem types: sentence structure errors (ID 26) and incorrect use of adjectives or nouns (ID 13). Replace with 'live in a high-rise apartment' to match intended meaning.
× I used to live in apartment but in Korea because it's very common.
✓ I used to live in an apartment in Korea because it's very common.
Errors: article missing (in apartment -> in an apartment) and word order. Grammar problem types: article errors (ID 22) and sentence structure errors (ID 26). Include the indefinite article 'an' and place 'in Korea' after 'apartment' for clarity.
× But I've been living the house to since two years ago and it's very comfortable so I prefer living in the house.
✓ But I've been living in a house for two years, and it's very comfortable, so I prefer living in a house.
Errors: preposition and article use (living the house to since two years ago), tense/time expression issues. Grammar problem types: incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11), article errors (ID 22), and sentence structure errors (ID 26). Use 'living in a house', 'for two years' to indicate duration, and include commas for clarity.