Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar (article use, plural/singular, prepositions) and give one supporting detail. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a specific reason. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural village. Most houses here are low-rise, and the nearest city with skyscrapers is about an hour away by bus.

Sugerencia: Use clearer tense and smoother linking words. Begin with a direct yes/no or short statement, then give a specific example and purpose. Avoid filler words like 'basically' and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes take photos of interesting buildings when I visit a city. For example, I photographed a historic cathedral last month and shared the pictures with my friends on social media.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and avoid contradicting statements. If you want to mention a place you like, name it clearly and give one reason why you'd visit. Use correct sentence structure and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit an iconic building rather than a regular restaurant. For instance, I’d love to visit the Eiffel Tower because of its history and the great views of Paris from the top.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific reasons (comfort, view, facilities). Correct minor grammar (use commas, avoid redundancy). Keep it natural and within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building such as the Burj Khalifa because of the amazing views and modern facilities. Living there would be convenient and exciting, especially for the skyline and high-quality amenities.

× So there are no tall building in near my home because we live in a rural area like villages and there are no tall buildings.

✓ So there are no tall buildings near my home because we live in a rural area, like a village, and there are no tall buildings.

The noun 'building' should be plural ('buildings') to agree with 'there are'. 'in near' is incorrect preposition combination; use 'near'. 'a rural area like villages' is awkward: use 'a rural area, like a village' or 'like villages' with plural. Also remove the repeated clause or rephrase for clarity. Suggested improvement: ensure number agreement between subject and noun after 'there are' and use correct prepositions (near). Use 'a village' for a single example.

× So when I travel to city and basically there are some type of buildings that attract me I can take.

✓ So when I travel to the city and there are some types of buildings that attract me, I can take photos of them.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'city' when referring to a specific place ('the city'). 'some type of buildings' should be 'some types of buildings' or 'some type of building' depending on singular/plural. Also the verb 'take' needs a direct object; specify 'photos' and 'of them' for clarity. Improve sentence flow by adding commas. Suggested improvement: include articles with place names and make noun number consistent; include the object of 'take'.

× I will take their pictures and share to social media and my friends.

✓ I will take their pictures and share them on social media and with my friends.

Use 'share on social media' and 'share with my friends' — correct prepositions are 'on' and 'with'. Also include the pronoun 'them' as the object of 'share'. Suggested improvement: learn common verb + preposition collocations (share on, share with).

× Yes, basically there is no building that I like.

✓ Yes, basically there is no building that I like.

This sentence is grammatical but slightly odd in meaning; it uses singular 'building' to state none exist. It is acceptable; no change required. (No correction needed under list but included for completeness.)

× There is a restaurant with restaurant that I like that is Restaurant Cafe and now there I am sitting and drinking coffee.

✓ There is a restaurant that I like called Restaurant Cafe, and right now I am sitting there drinking coffee.

Original has repetition 'restaurant with restaurant' and incorrect word order. Use 'called' to name the place. 'now there I am sitting' should be 'right now I am sitting there'. Rearrange clauses for natural English and add commas for clarity. Suggested improvement: avoid repetition, use 'called' to introduce names, and place time expressions ('right now') before the verb phrase.

× Yeah, I wish to live in a tall building like Burj Khalifa that is located in Dubai and my dream is to live there.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building like the Burj Khalifa in Dubai; it is my dream to live there.

Use 'would like' or 'would love' rather than 'wish to' in spoken English for polite desire. Use the definite article 'the' with famous buildings ('the Burj Khalifa'). 'that is located in Dubai' can be shortened to 'in Dubai'. Combine clauses for natural flow. Suggested improvement: use 'would like' for desires and include 'the' before named landmark buildings.