Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct article use and verb forms, and avoid repetition. Add a specific detail to enrich the answer and use a linking word for coherence.

Ejemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. However, if you want to see tall buildings, you can take a short boat trip to Oslo, where there are many modern high‑rises and office towers.

Sugerencia: Reduce repetition and fix vocabulary/phrasing errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words to explain conditions, and give a specific example of a ‘special’ building to make the answer more concrete.

Ejemplo: I sometimes photograph buildings, but only when they are special. For example, if a building has interesting murals or unique architecture, I will take pictures to capture the details; otherwise I don’t photograph ordinary buildings.

Sugerencia: Be clearer and correct names and facts. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the building, then add concise supporting details (why you want to visit, when you tried). Avoid hesitations and repetition; mention the correct name: Frida Kahlo Museum (La Casa Azul).

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit the Frida Kahlo Museum (La Casa Azul) in Mexico City because I admire her artwork and want to see her home and personal belongings. I actually tried to visit on my last trip, but the tickets were sold out.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and tighten phrasing. Use linking words to give reasons and a supporting detail that is specific (e.g., activities or features you enjoy in the countryside). Correct article use and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: No, I would not want to live in a tall building. I prefer living in the countryside because it is quieter and less crowded, and I enjoy outdoor activities like gardening and walking in nature.

× I live at a rural area so it's no tall buildings near my home.

✓ I live in a rural area, so there are no tall buildings near my home.

Use correct preposition with 'area' ('in a rural area') and the article 'a' before 'rural area'. Also use existential construction 'there are' for plural nouns instead of 'it's' and 'no' should follow to form 'there are no tall buildings'. This fixes article and 'there be' issues and subject-verb agreement.

× If you want to see some tall buildings you have to take the boat over to Oslo.

✓ If you want to see some tall buildings, you have to take a boat over to Oslo.

Use 'a boat' rather than 'the boat' unless a specific boat is meant. Also add a comma after the introductory clause. This corrects the article and clarifies the indefinite means of transport.

× There is a lot of tall buildings there.

✓ There are a lot of tall buildings there.

Use 'there are' with plural noun 'buildings'. 'There is' is singular; change to 'there are' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× Sometimes if it's a special building or they have some special art on it or some special creature from it, but I love to talk picture of it it.

✓ Sometimes if it's a special building or it has some special art on it or some special feature, I love to take pictures of it.

Replace plural/incorrect pronoun 'they' with 'it' to match 'building'. Use 'has' for possession. 'Creature' is wrong word here; 'feature' fits. Use 'take pictures' (correct verb phrase) instead of 'talk picture'. Remove extra 'it' and fix sentence structure.

× It depends on the building.

✓ It depends on the building.

This sentence is correct. No change needed.

× So I don't like to take pictures of every building I see, but if it's something special about them I I would love to take some photos of the building.

✓ So I don't like to take pictures of every building I see, but if there is something special about a building I would love to take some photos of it.

Use 'there is' for existence and 'a building' or 'it' for reference. Avoid repeating 'I'. Use 'it' to refer back to 'a building' rather than 'the building' unless a specific one has been identified.

× I don't know if it's if there's any building I would receive, but I I really want to visit the Frida.

✓ I don't know if there's any building I would recommend, but I really want to visit the Frida Kahlo Museum.

The original 'receive' is incorrect verb; likely 'recommend' or 'remember' was intended. Clarify by naming 'Frida Kahlo Museum'. Remove duplicate 'I'. Use correct verb to match meaning.

× She would have eyebrow Frida museum in Mexico Frida.

✓ She would have a Frida Kahlo museum in Mexico.

Sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and word order. Clarify that the museum is dedicated to Frida Kahlo and use the article 'a'. Avoid unnecessary pronoun 'she' when referring to the museum.

× I forgot her name, Frida phenomena, something like that.

✓ I forgot her full name—Frida Kahlo; something like that.

Provide the correct name and use clear structure. 'Phenomena' is incorrect; replace with the correct surname. Use punctuation to show hesitation.

× Her museum in in the big museum in Mexico.

✓ Her museum is in a big museum area in Mexico.

Add the verb 'is' and correct duplication 'in in'. Use 'a' to indicate one of possibly several large museum areas. Clarify the location with proper sentence structure.

× I, I was in Mexico last time, but I didn't get a ticket.

✓ I was in Mexico last time, but I didn't get a ticket.

Remove duplicate 'I'. Past tense 'was' and 'didn't get' are correct. The error was a repetition causing disfluency.

× It was full.

✓ It was full.

This sentence is correct as is; the past tense 'was' agrees with singular 'it'.

× And I would not necessarily want to live in a tall building.

✓ I would not necessarily want to live in a tall building.

Remove unnecessary conjunction 'And' at the start. The modal 'would' is acceptable for hypothetical preference.

× I prefer rural area with less people and on the countryside I prefer like places where it's very calm and not so much people and noises from the city.

✓ I prefer the rural areas with fewer people, and in the countryside I prefer places that are very calm with not so much noise from the city.

Use 'the rural areas' or 'rural areas' and 'fewer' for countable 'people' (not 'less'). Use 'in the countryside' not 'on'. Use 'noise' (uncountable) instead of 'noises' for general sound. Smooth sentence structure for clarity.