Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, correct article and number usage (e.g., “a nine‑storey building”), and avoid repeating the question. Add one short supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”). Keep answers to 1–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. I live in a nine‑storey building, and it is the tallest in my neighbourhood, so I can see the surrounding area from my windows.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, word choice and tense consistency. Give a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain why using specific vocabulary (e.g., "aesthetic", "architecture"). Use linking words like "because" and avoid past/present confusion. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I rarely photograph buildings because I don't find their architecture very aesthetic; instead, I usually take photos of nature, such as trees and rivers, which I find more inspiring.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct grammar and vocabulary. Use a clear topic sentence (“No, I would prefer…”) and then give one specific reason or example of a place you prefer. Avoid unclear phrases like “resonance areas”; choose precise words (e.g., "historic buildings" or "scenic parks"). Use a linking word such as "because" or "so".

Ejemplo: No, I would rather visit places with beautiful nature and scenery because I enjoy hiking and photographing landscapes; for example, I prefer national parks to modern skyscrapers.

Sugerencia: Make the conditional structure clear and correct article/noun forms. Start with a concise topic sentence (“I might, if…”) then give two specific features you would want, linked by "for example" or "such as". End with a short conclusion. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I might live in a tall building if it had convenient facilities, such as a gym on the ground floor and a supermarket nearby; otherwise, I prefer living in lower houses.

× Is there are tall buildings near my home?

✓ Are there tall buildings near my home?

The sentence incorrectly combines 'is' and 'are'. For plural 'tall buildings' use 'are' in the question form: 'Are there...?' Remove the extra 'is' to match the plural subject. Suggestion: Use 'Is there' for singular nouns and 'Are there' for plural nouns.

× In fact, my home is an nine floor tall building which is tallest in that area.

✓ In fact, my home is a nine-floor tall building which is the tallest in that area.

Errors: 'an' before 'nine' is incorrect because 'nine' begins with a consonant sound so use 'a'. 'Nine floor' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective: 'nine-floor'. 'Which is tallest' needs the definite article 'the' before 'tallest'. Suggestion: Use 'a' before words starting with consonant sounds, hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns, and use 'the' with superlatives.

× I do not take photos of buildings.

✓ I do not take photos of buildings.

This sentence is grammatically correct for general present habits. No change needed. Suggestion: None.

× I find it not that aesthetic enough for me to take a pictures.

✓ I find it not aesthetic enough for me to take pictures.

Errors: 'aesthetic' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'that' in this structure; 'not that aesthetic enough' is awkward—use 'not aesthetic enough'. 'A pictures' combines an indefinite article with a plural noun; use 'pictures' without 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'not adjective enough' and match articles to noun number.

× So I instead took photos of nature.

✓ So instead I take photos of nature.

The previous sentence describes a habitual preference in the present ('I do not take...'), so the next clause should match present habit: 'I take photos of nature.' Using past tense 'took' conflicts with the ongoing preference. Suggestion: Keep consistent tense for habitual actions (simple present). Use past only for specific past events.

× No, actually I rather visit someplace which have really nice nature and scenery.

✓ No, actually I would rather visit someplace which has really nice nature and scenery.

Errors: 'rather' usually pairs with 'would rather' to indicate preference. 'Have' must agree with singular 'someplace' so use 'has'. Suggestion: Use 'would rather' for preferences and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I now I think about it, I feel like there is a nice buildings like resonance areas.

✓ Now that I think about it, I feel like there are nice buildings in the surrounding areas.

Multiple issues: remove duplicate 'I now I'. For plural 'buildings' use 'are' (there are). 'Like resonance areas' is unclear; likely meant 'surrounding areas' or 'residential areas'. Ensure preposition 'in' for location. Keep present tense. Suggestion: Start with 'Now that I think about it,' use 'there are' for plural nouns, and choose the correct noun ('surrounding areas' or 'residential areas').

× If it has really nice building with lots of things that I need, for example has a gym in the first floor or have a supermarket in the base floor, then I would like to live in it, but I don't usually.

✓ If it is a really nice building with lots of things that I need, for example a gym on the first floor or a supermarket on the ground floor, then I would like to live in it, but I usually don't.

Errors: 'If it has really nice building' is ungrammatical; use 'is a really nice building'. Use articles with singular nouns ('a gym'). Prepositions for floors: 'on the first floor', 'on the ground floor' (or 'basement' if below ground). 'Have a supermarket' should be rephrased. Also 'I don't usually' at end is awkward—'I usually don't' is clearer. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms. Suggestion: Use 'is a' for describing a building, include appropriate articles, use 'on' for floors, and place adverbs like 'usually' before 'don't' or after auxiliary verb.