Part 1
Examinador
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Candidato
No we don't have any hot tall buildings because I live in rural area so I think the most taller tallest building is the mansion in my area.
Examinador
Do you take photos of buildings?
Candidato
Not actually because I'm not interested in any buildings. So if I feel it's dispute is beautiful, I'm I will take photos so.
Examinador
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Candidato
I would like to visit to Tokyo Tower because I've never been to there and I want to see how big that building, so I wanna go to there.
Examinador
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Candidato
Yes I do. I want to see the beautiful views such as night and sunrising. So if I live in tall building I could see many beautiful views.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: 回答は質問に応じているが、文法ミス、語彙選択の誤り(hot tall, most taller tallest)、冗長表現や不自然な語順が目立ちます。具体的には冠詞(a/the)の欠如、比較級・最上級の誤用、複数の形容詞の並べ方に注意してください。改善には短く明確なトピック文を使い、その後に1〜2文で具体例(建物の種類や高さ)を付け加える練習をしてください。リンク詞は不要ですが、必要ならば because や so を正しく使いましょう。
Ejemplo: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. The tallest building nearby is a large mansion, but most houses are one or two stories high.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 意味は伝わるが、不自然な表現(Not actually, dispute is beautiful, I'm I will)や文のまとまりの欠如があります。短い肯定/否定の答えで始め、続けて理由や条件(when/if)を簡潔に述べるとよいです。語彙は 'interested in buildings' や 'especially when' を使い、文法(時制・主語の一致)を確認してください。
Ejemplo: Not really. I'm not very interested in buildings, but I sometimes take photos if I find a building especially beautiful or historic.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: 目的地を述べているが、前置詞の誤用(visit to, been to there, go to there)や不自然なフレーズ(see how big that building)があります。丁寧で自然な答えは、短い主文(I would like to visit Tokyo Tower)に続き、理由を1文で具体的に述べます。口語表現(wanna)は避け、because の後は完全な文にしてください。
Ejemplo: I would like to visit Tokyo Tower because I have never been there and I'm curious about its size and the view from the observation deck.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 肯定で始めていて内容も明確ですが、語彙と文法の改善余地があります。'sunrising' は誤用(sunrise)、冠詞や前置詞(in a tall building)、時制(could→would/might)に注意してください。1文目で答え、2文目で具体的にどんな景色が見たいかを述べ、必要なら頻度や感情を付け加えましょう。
Ejemplo: Yes, I would. Living in a tall building would allow me to enjoy beautiful views, such as city lights at night and the sunrise in the morning.
× No we don't have any hot tall buildings because I live in rural area so I think the most taller tallest building is the mansion in my area.
✓ No, we don't have any tall buildings because I live in a rural area, so I think the tallest building is a mansion in my area.
複数・単数の扱いや形容詞の順序、比較級・最上級の誤用に関する説明: 'any hot tall buildings' は不要な形容詞 'hot' が含まれ意味が不明確で、'tall buildings' の複数形は可だが文脈では一般的に 'any tall buildings' とするのが自然です. 地域を表すときは 'a rural area' と不定冠詞が必要です(単数名詞の前に冠詞が必要)。'most taller tallest' は重複した比較表現で誤りで、正しくは 'the tallest'(最上級)です。改善案: 不要な形容詞を削除し、冠詞を入れ、比較級ではなく最上級を使って簡潔に表現してください.
× Not actually because I'm not interested in any buildings. So if I feel it's dispute is beautiful, I'm I will take photos so.
✓ Not really, because I'm not interested in buildings. However, if I find a building beautiful, I will take photos.
時制と表現の自然さに関する説明: 'Not actually' は口語では不自然で 'Not really' がよく使われます。'any buildings' はここでは 'buildings' で十分です。'if I feel it's dispute is beautiful' は文法的に誤りで、'if I find a building beautiful' または 'if I think a building is beautiful' が正しい表現です。'I'm I will take photos so' は語順と不要な語の重複で誤りなので 'I will take photos' とします。改善案: 'find' や 'think' を使い、不要な語を省いて明確な条件節を作ってください.
× I would like to visit to Tokyo Tower because I've never been to there and I want to see how big that building, so I wanna go to there.
✓ I would like to visit Tokyo Tower because I've never been there and I want to see how big the building is, so I want to go there.
前置詞や語順の誤用に関する説明: 'visit to' は誤りで 'visit' の後に目的地の前置詞は不要です。'been to there' は重複で 'been there' が正しいです。'how big that building' は不完全な節で、述語が必要なので 'how big the building is' とします。'wanna' は口語表現でフォーマルには 'want to' を使います。改善案: 'visit' の使い方を覚え、'been there' や完全な間接疑問文(how + 形容詞 + 主語 + 動詞)を使ってください.
× Yes I do. I want to see the beautiful views such as night and sunrising. So if I live in tall building I could see many beautiful views.
✓ Yes, I do. I want to see beautiful views such as the night view and sunrises. So if I lived in a tall building, I could see many beautiful views.
時制と冠詞の誤用に関する説明: 'such as night and sunrising' は不自然で 'the night view' や 'sunrises' が適切です。条件節は現実の仮定を表すので 'If I lived in a tall building, I could...' のように仮定法過去を使うのが自然です。また 'in tall building' は可算名詞なので冠詞が必要: 'in a tall building'. 改善案: 冠詞を入れ、仮定の表現では過去形を用いて丁寧に表現してください.