Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid repetition. For example, say you live in the city, mention the type of buildings and a clear reason why the area feels peaceful.

Ejemplo: Yes. I live in the city, so there are many tall apartment buildings near my home. For example, most are modern residential towers with balconies, and despite the height, the area feels peaceful because traffic is restricted and there are quiet courtyards.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, then give specific reasons and an example. Improve clarity and vocabulary (e.g., 'architecture' instead of 'agricultures' or 'building style'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make it coherent, and correct tense and article use.

Ejemplo: Sometimes. I especially take photos of buildings when I travel because I enjoy different types of architecture. For example, last year I photographed colonial facades in Penang to remember their unique details and colours.

Sugerencia: Be specific and organized: name the building if possible (or describe it clearly), explain why you want to visit, and give one concrete detail. Avoid vague phrases and fix grammar and word choice ('floors', 'located on the island in Jordan? Hong Kong'—clarify location). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit the building with over 100 floors in Hong Kong because it offers panoramic views of the skyline. For example, I want to go to the rooftop restaurant to see the city at night and take photos of the harbour.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give one or two clear reasons with correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace unclear words ('causage', 'postal code') with accurate terms like 'concierge', 'security system', or 'key-card entry'. Use linking words ('because', 'however') and avoid hesitations.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to live in a tall building because it generally has better security. For example, many towers have a concierge, CCTV and key-card entry to the lifts, which makes me feel safer than living in a house on the street.

× Yes, there are so many tall buildings near my home because my home is located in the city and there are so many different kind of apartment next to my home because it's a resident area and then it's created quite a peaceful and quiet community even though there are so many tall building.

✓ Yes, there are so many tall buildings near my home because my home is located in the city, and there are so many different kinds of apartments next to my home because it's a residential area, and it has created a quite peaceful and quiet community even though there are so many tall buildings.

The errors involve incorrect singular/plural forms: 'different kind' should be 'different kinds' when referring to multiple types; 'apartment' should be plural 'apartments'; 'resident area' is incorrect adjective use—use 'residential area'; 'it's created' is awkward but acceptable as 'it has created'; 'building' at the end should be plural 'buildings' to match 'so many'. Improve by making nouns agree with plurality and using correct adjective form.

× I sometimes take photos of buildings especially when I go for travelling because you know when you go to the travel to different countries, you can see so many different kind of agricultures, different kind of building style of the building in the countries.

✓ I sometimes take photos of buildings, especially when I travel, because when you travel to different countries you can see many different kinds of agriculture and different building styles in those countries.

Errors include incorrect prepositions and word choices: 'go for travelling' should be 'travel' or 'go traveling'; 'go to the travel to different countries' is incorrect—use 'travel to different countries'; 'different kind of agricultures' should be 'different kinds of agriculture' and 'different kind of building style of the building in the countries' should be 'different building styles in those countries'. Use correct prepositions and plural forms.

× So it's quite attractive and impressed me a lot.

✓ So it's quite attractive and impressed me a lot.

The sentence mixes adjective/adverb usage: 'impressed me a lot' is fine, but 'it's quite attractive and impressed me a lot' combines present description with past reaction awkwardly. Better: 'So it's quite attractive and it impressed me a lot' or 'So I find it quite attractive and it impresses me a lot.' Choose consistent tense and add a subject for the second clause. This fix keeps meaning and clarifies structure.

× So that's why I like to take a photo to help me to remember all.

✓ So that's why I like to take photos to help me remember everything.

'a photo' is acceptable but 'take photos' better matches general habit; 'to help me to remember all' is unidiomatic—use 'help me remember everything'. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help' and use plural for habitual action.

× Yes, I really want to visit a building. I forgot its names, but it's located on the element in Jordan of Hong Kong.

✓ Yes, I really want to visit a building. I forgot its name, but it's located on the Island in Jordan, Hong Kong.

Use singular 'name' for a single building not 'names'. 'element' is incorrect—likely meant 'Island'; 'in Jordan of Hong Kong' should be 'in Jordan, Hong Kong' or 'on the Island in Jordan' depending on intended meaning. Correct proper noun formatting and singular/plural.

× So it is a really tall building with like 101 floor and then you can having a buffet dinners orders and I will want to go on top of the building and look at the nice beautiful landscape well of.

✓ It is a really tall building with about 101 floors, and you can have buffet dinners there. I would like to go to the top of the building and look at the beautiful landscape.

Errors: '101 floor' should be plural '101 floors'; 'you can having' incorrect verb form—use 'you can have' or 'there are buffet dinners'; 'buffet dinners orders' is ungrammatical—use 'buffet dinners' or 'buffet restaurants'; 'I will want to go' is unnatural for desire—use 'I would like to go' or 'I want to go'; 'look at the nice beautiful landscape well of' is messy—use 'look at the beautiful landscape'. Fix subject-verb forms and plural nouns.

× I do want to live in a tall building because of the security problems, umm, in the past, I'd like to living in a house or town halls, but I find that it's, it would pretty feel unsafe in that area.

✓ I do want to live in a tall building because of security reasons. In the past, I liked living in a house or townhouse, but I found that it felt pretty unsafe in that area.

Tense and form errors: 'I'd like to living' should be 'I liked living' or 'I used to like living'; 'town halls' is incorrect—use 'townhouse' or 'townhouses'; 'it would pretty feel unsafe' is ungrammatical—use 'it felt pretty unsafe'. Use consistent past tense for past preferences and correct noun forms.

× But if you're living in a tall buildings because you have a causage, uh, and the ground floor of the buildings and all, always the people lead to enter the postal code, the code.

✓ But if you live in a tall building, you have a concierge, and at the ground floor there is usually a security system or an access code that people must enter.

Pronoun and noun agreement issues: 'you're living in a tall buildings' mixes singular/plural—use 'you live in a tall building'; 'causage' is incorrect—likely 'concierge'; 'the ground floor of the buildings and all' is awkward—use 'at the ground floor'; 'always the people lead to enter the postal code, the code' is unclear—use 'there is usually an access code that people must enter'. Clarify pronouns, correct word choice, and simplify sentence structure.