Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Сократите повторения, улучшите грамматику и структуру ответа. Начните с простой темы, затем добавьте одну-две конкретные детали, используя связывающие слова (например, "because", "for example"). Избегайте неправильных форм (например, "arrival" → "arrive", "did" → "have done") и словесных повторах ("I'm in love" используется дважды подряд).

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing new places. For example, after arriving at the airport I often watch the shuttle route to notice local buildings and people, which helps me learn about the area.

Sugerencia: Сфокусируйтесь на ясности и правильной грамматике: используйте простые фразы и конкретные детали. Избегайте неясных оборотов ("something like this") и ошибок согласования ("another persons human's happiness"). Добавьте связку причины ("because") и пример результата.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos through the window because I like to capture new landscapes and people. For example, when I travel abroad I photograph street scenes to remember how people live and to compare different cultures.

Sugerencia: Будьте более естественны и кратки: начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину одним-двумя предложениями. Улучшите грамматику ("prefer mountains to the sea", "I'm very afraid of water") и замените описания страха на более понятные формулировки без лишних образов.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I am afraid of deep water. For instance, I feel anxious when swimming and worry about being unable to touch the bottom, so I avoid the sea and enjoy hiking instead.

× Yes, I'm in love with the view inside of a window when we arrival from the airport and then get in the shuttle.

✓ Yes, I love the view from the window when we arrive from the airport and then get on the shuttle.

The preposition 'inside of a window' is incorrect; use 'from the window' to indicate where the view is seen. 'Arrival' is a noun but the sentence needs the verb 'arrive' (present plural 'we arrive') to match the context. Use 'get on' for boarding a shuttle rather than 'get in'. Suggestion: use 'from the window', 'arrive', and 'get on' to make the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× In the sitting shuttle, I'm in love with the view and I like to watch the scanner, see where people did something.

✓ While sitting in the shuttle, I love the view, and I like to watch around to see what people are doing.

'In the sitting shuttle' is an incorrect word order; use 'while sitting in the shuttle'. 'I'm in love with the view' can be simplified to 'I love the view'. 'Watch the scanner' is unclear and likely incorrect; replace with 'watch around' or 'watch people' depending on meaning. 'See where people did something' uses past tense and unnatural structure; use 'see what people are doing' for ongoing actions. Suggestion: use correct word order, simpler verbs, and present continuous for actions you observe.

× Yes, I'm making a lot of pictures outside the window because I see the new people, the new scenery or something like this, and I see how in other countries another persons human's happiness is living.

✓ Yes, I take a lot of pictures out of the window because I see new people and new scenery, and I can see how people in other countries live happily.

'I'm making a lot of pictures' is unnatural; use 'I take a lot of pictures' for habitual action. 'Outside the window' is better phrased 'out of the window' or 'through the window'. 'The new people' and 'the new scenery' should be 'new people' and 'new scenery' (no definite article). 'Another persons human's happiness is living' is ungrammatical: use 'I can see how people in other countries live happily' or 'how happiness exists in other countries'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, remove incorrect articles, and use correct clause for observing how people live.

× I prefer more mountains than the sea because I'm very scared of the water.

✓ I prefer the mountains to the sea because I'm very afraid of the water.

Use the pattern 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'prefer more X than Y'. 'Scared' is acceptable but 'afraid' is more natural in this context. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and 'afraid of' for natural comparison and emotion expression.

× When I'm swimming I'm very scared, like someone inside of the water catch me on my leg and gets me inside, so it's done.

✓ When I'm swimming, I'm very scared, as if someone in the water might grab my leg and pull me under.

The clause describes a hypothetical fear during swimming; use 'as if' and modal 'might' to express possibility. 'Someone inside of the water catch me on my leg and gets me inside' is ungrammatical: use 'someone in the water might grab my leg and pull me under'. 'So it's done' is unclear and unnecessary; omit it. Suggestion: use 'as if' + modal for hypothetical fears and correct verbs 'grab' and 'pull me under' for clarity.