Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct word choice (e.g. “world” instead of “woman”), use present simple consistently, and add one short supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing the world around me. For example, I find watching neighborhoods and parks very relaxing, and it helps me pass the time.

Sugerencia: Use natural phrasing and correct tense. Begin with a direct answer, then add one or two concise supporting details linked logically (use linking words such as “and” or “so”). Avoid redundant words and fix collocations like “share on social media” and “be with my friend.”

Ejemplo: Sometimes I take pictures of the scenery outside the car window and share them on social media. I do this to show friends where I am, and it often starts a conversation about the place.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference and add specific, concise reasons. Use correct grammar and linking words such as “because” and “also.” Make details more precise (e.g. “waves” not “wave,” “sometimes” not “sometime”). Limit to 2–3 sentences to be natural and effective.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I enjoy watching the waves and the open horizon. Also, the coastline often has seabirds and colourful scenery, which I find calming and photogenic.

× Yes, I will look out to the windows because I love to see a woman all around and that is my relaxed time.

✓ Yes, I look out of the window because I love to see the scenery around me and that is my relaxed time.

The original sentence uses 'will' which creates an inappropriate future tense for a habitual action; use simple present for habits. 'Look out to the windows' is incorrect preposition and pluralization: use 'look out of the window' or 'look out of the windows'. 'A woman all around' is likely a meaning error; context suggests 'scenery around me'. Replace with 'the scenery around me'. Also change 'to the windows' -> 'out of the window' and remove 'will'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual actions ('I look out of the window'), use correct prepositions ('out of'), and choose precise nouns ('scenery' not 'a woman').

× Yes, some of the time I'll take the picture and share in the social media that with my friend.

✓ Yes, sometimes I take pictures and share them on social media with my friends.

Problems: 'Some of the time' is wordy—'sometimes' is natural. 'I'll take the picture' mixes future with habitual action; use present simple 'I take'. 'Share in the social media' uses wrong preposition and article: use 'share them on social media'. 'That with my friend' is ungrammatical and unclear; correct to 'with my friends'. Also pluralize 'picture' to 'pictures' when speaking generally. Suggestions: use 'sometimes', use present simple for habits, use 'on social media', and ensure pronoun agreement ('them').

× I think that is a good time to being with my friend too.

✓ I think that is a good time to be with my friends too.

The verb after 'to' should be the base form, not the -ing form. 'To being' is incorrect; use 'to be'. Also 'my friend' likely should be plural 'my friends' when speaking generally. Suggestions: after 'to' use base verb ('to be'), ensure number agreement ('friends').

× For me, I would prefer the sea because when you look at the sea you will see the wave that is going up and down and sometime there will be some bird and just like a beautiful photo.

✓ For me, I prefer the sea because when you look at the sea you can see waves going up and down, sometimes there are some birds, and it looks like a beautiful photo.

Problems: 'I would prefer' is conditional; simple present 'I prefer' is more natural for expressing preference. 'You will see the wave that is going up and down' mixes future and definite article; use 'you can see waves going up and down' for general observation. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'There will be some bird' uses singular and future; use plural 'there are some birds' or 'sometimes there are birds'. Sentence was long and needed parallel structure—use commas and consistent verb forms. Suggestions: use simple present for general statements, use plural nouns for general observations ('waves', 'birds'), use 'sometimes', and maintain parallel structure ('you can see..., sometimes there are..., and it looks...').