Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and fluent: give a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetitions, and use specific supporting detail with linking words. For example, say why looking out is relaxing and mention one concrete detail (e.g. passing trees, city views). Also correct small grammar: use past/present forms properly and avoid filler sounds.

Ejemplo: Yes — I usually look out the window when I travel by car or bus because it helps me relax. For instance, watching passing trees and people gives me a calm feeling after a busy day, and I often notice small details like shop signs or birds. Therefore, I prefer looking outside rather than using my phone.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific reason with one or two supporting details. Remove hesitations and complete your sentences. Use linking words like because and for example. Also correct grammar: say “I don't like taking photos” and finish the thought about why photos are insufficient.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't take photos of the scenery because I prefer to experience it directly. For example, the view often looks better in person than in a picture, and I find that looking carefully helps me remember the scene more vividly.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason with one supporting detail and a contrast using a linking word (e.g. because, whereas). Remove repetitions and correct grammar (e.g. ‘I prefer the sea because I can swim’). Keep it within 1–3 sentences for clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I can swim and relax on the beach, whereas hiking in the mountains requires more energy and effort. For example, a day by the sea feels restful, while mountain trips are more physically demanding.

× Yes, definitely. I I prefer to look out the windows.

✓ Yes, definitely. I prefer to look out the window.

The plural 'the windows' is unnatural when referring to looking out while traveling; use singular 'the window' to refer to the vehicle window in general. Also remove duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer to look out the window.' to be concise.

× Uh, I can, I think it's, uh, make me feel relaxed and streaming.

✓ I think it makes me feel relaxed and refreshed.

Original uses incorrect verb form and inappropriate adjective 'streaming'. Use third person singular verb 'makes' to agree with 'it' and choose a suitable adjective like 'refreshed' or 'relaxed'. Suggestion: 'I think it makes me feel relaxed and refreshed.'

× And and at the same time it it as a relaxed.

✓ And at the same time it is relaxing.

Remove duplicate words and use correct verb form: 'it is relaxing' or adjective 'relaxing' describes the effect. Original 'as a relaxed' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: 'And at the same time it is relaxing.'

× Honestly, I, I don't like take photos of the outside, uh, because I think it the pretty outside need need to, need to fill in by your eyes.

✓ Honestly, I don't like taking photos of the scenery outside because I think the beautiful view should be enjoyed with your eyes.

After 'don't like' use the gerund 'taking'. 'The outside' is vague; use 'the scenery' or 'the view'. 'Need to fill in by your eyes' is incorrect; express idea as 'should be enjoyed with your eyes.' Also remove duplicated 'I' and extra 'need'. Suggestion: 'Honestly, I don't like taking photos of the scenery outside because I think the beautiful view should be enjoyed with your eyes.'

× Uh, I I think photos doesn't.

✓ I think photos don't capture it.

Subject 'photos' is plural so use 'don't' rather than 'doesn't'. The sentence was incomplete; add an object like 'capture it' to complete the thought. Suggestion: 'I think photos don't capture it.'

× I prefer the sea because I think the sea I can I can go swimming in in the sea, but the tall, but the but the mountains I need to spend my energy.

✓ I prefer the sea because I can go swimming there, but in the mountains I would need to spend more energy.

Remove repeated words and use concise phrasing. 'Go swimming in in the sea' should be 'go swimming there' or 'in the sea'. Use modal 'would' to indicate conditional or contrast and 'need to spend my energy' is better as 'need to spend more energy.' Suggestion: 'I prefer the sea because I can go swimming there, but in the mountains I would need to spend more energy.'