Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g. “look at the windows” and “when travelling by bus or car” repeat the same idea). Use precise vocabulary (e.g. landmarks, roadside vegetation, or architecture).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I like to spot familiar landmarks and notice changes in architecture or roadside trees, which helps me learn about different neighborhoods.

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural: state whether you take photos, then give a concise reason and one specific detail. Avoid awkward phrases like “unknown trees under geographical areas.” Use linking words like “because” or “so” to explain motive.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes take photos from the car window because I want to capture interesting landmarks or unusual trees. For instance, I’ll photograph an old bridge or a line of trees that looks striking in the light.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference sentence, then support it with clear, relevant reasons. Use linking words like “because” or “so” and avoid vague phrases such as “observe how people are so many.” Keep to two or three short sentences and include specific activities you enjoy.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I enjoy the relaxed atmosphere and beach activities. For example, even though I can’t swim, I often go with friends to watch people, go horse riding along the shore, and watch seaside performances.

× Yes, I do look at the windows and I'm traveling by bus or car.

✓ Yes, I look out of the window when I travel by bus or by car.

The student's original uses 'do look' (unnecessary emphatic present) and present continuous 'I'm traveling' which sounds like a current ongoing action rather than a habitual one. The question asks about a habitual action, so simple present 'I look' and 'I travel' are appropriate. Also use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' and match singular/plural article: 'the window' (general reference). Suggestion: use simple present for routines: 'I look out of the window when I travel by bus or by car.'

× I pay attention to the landmarks, unknown trees, and other geographical features.

✓ I pay attention to landmarks, unfamiliar trees, and other geographical features.

'Unknown trees' is awkward: 'unfamiliar' is more natural. 'Pay attention to the landmarks' can omit the definite article when speaking generally: 'pay attention to landmarks.' Also ensure parallel adjective use. Suggestion: use 'unfamiliar' and drop unnecessary 'the' for general statements.

× Yes, I take pictures in the windows of the car and normally it's pictures of the landmarks, unknown trees under geographical areas.

✓ Yes, I take pictures through the car window, and they are usually of landmarks, unfamiliar trees, and other geographical features.

The original has preposition issues ('in the windows of the car' — better 'through the car window') and uses 'it's pictures' which is incorrect pronoun/number agreement; 'they are' matches plural 'pictures.' 'Unknown trees under geographical areas' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'unfamiliar trees and other geographical features' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'through the car window' and match plural pronoun with 'pictures.'

× I prefer the sea though.

✓ I prefer the sea, though.

This sentence is mostly correct but needs a comma before 'though' when used at the end or to add contrast; adding a comma improves written clarity. Suggestion: include comma for contrastive 'though.'

× I don't know how to swim, but I usually go on the beach with friends to observe how people are so many and I also enjoy the horse riding and the show.

✓ I don't know how to swim, but I usually go to the beach with friends to see many people, and I also enjoy horse riding and watching shows.

Multiple issues: use 'go to the beach' not 'go on the beach.' 'To observe how people are so many' is ungrammatical — express as 'to see many people' or 'to watch lots of people.' 'The horse riding' and 'the show' misuse articles; use 'horse riding' (general activity) and 'watching shows' or 'the show' if a specific show is meant. The verb forms should be parallel and in simple present for habitual actions. Suggestion: simplify and use natural collocations: 'go to the beach,' 'see many people,' 'enjoy horse riding,' 'watch shows.'