Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases (e.g. "I am really in Tunisia") and grammar mistakes like "look on to". Use linking words if adding details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel. For example, on long bus rides I enjoy watching changing landscapes such as olive groves and mountains, which helps me relax and pass the time.

Sugerencia: Remove fillers (umm, uh) and combine ideas into a clear short response: state whether you take photos, then give specific reasons or a brief example. Use correct collocations (e.g. "take photos" not "do click pictures") and correct phrasing about phone storage.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos from the car window. For instance, whether I am in a city or the countryside I take pictures of interesting buildings or fields, although sometimes my phone memory fills up quickly.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement of preference, then give a clear reason with correct grammar. Avoid awkward phrases ("Nepali's landlocked country", "haven't seen see"). Keep it within 1–3 sentences and use linking words if needed.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains. Growing up in landlocked Nepal, I have always been surrounded by hills and mountains, so I find their peacefulness and fresh air more appealing than the sea.

× I am really in Tunisia.

✓ I am really in Tunisia.

No correction needed: sentence is grammatical. It correctly uses present continuous to emphasize current location; keep as is.

× I really love scenery outside and whenever I am traveling I just keep my head outside of the bus or car and have a look on to the nature.

✓ I really love the scenery outside, and whenever I am traveling I just stick my head out of the bus or car and look at nature.

Problems: missing definite article before 'scenery' and awkward verbs/prepositions. Use 'the scenery' to refer to specific outside views. 'Keep my head outside' is unnatural; use 'stick my head out of' for putting head outside a vehicle. 'Have a look on to the nature' is incorrect preposition and article; use 'look at nature'. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× Yes, whenever I travel to any places umm, either it's umm uh, city area or the countryside, I do click a lot of pictures over my phone and I have like very little space in my phone still I love to click pictures.

✓ Yes, whenever I travel to any place, whether it's a city area or the countryside, I take a lot of pictures with my phone. Even though I have very little space left on my phone, I still love taking photos.

Problems: plural 'places' with 'any' is awkward; use 'any place' or 'any places' consistently. 'Either... or' with 'whether' works better here. 'Do click' is informal and redundant; use 'take' for photos. Preposition 'over my phone' is incorrect; use 'with my phone'. 'I have like very little space in my phone' has filler 'like' and wrong placement; use 'I have very little space left on my phone'. Use consistent verb forms: 'I still love taking photos.'

× I'm a mountain girl as well as Nepali's landlocked country I haven't seen see in my entire life and I know I will probably gonna see the sea but I will always prefer mountain oversea.

✓ I'm a mountain girl. Since Nepal is a landlocked country, I haven't seen the sea in my entire life. I know I will probably see the sea someday, but I will always prefer the mountains to the sea.

Multiple issues: sentence structure errors and incorrect possessive 'Nepali's landlocked country'—use 'Nepal is a landlocked country'. 'I haven't seen see' duplicates verb; use 'seen the sea'. 'Gonna' is informal and incorrect in writing; use 'probably see' or 'will probably see'. 'Prefer mountain oversea' has wrong noun forms and missing preposition: use 'prefer the mountains to the sea'. Splitting into three sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.