Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ngắn gọn, trực tiếp hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp; tránh lặp từ và nói rõ tần suất. Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó đưa 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ phù hợp.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by car because I enjoy the changing landscape. For example, I often take photos of interesting views to post on Instagram, especially when the scenery is especially beautiful.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng, sửa từ vựng sai và tránh nói lan man; nêu rõ khi nào và vì sao bạn chụp ảnh. Dùng liên từ như "and" hoặc "so" để nối ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car because I like to share nice views on social media. Sometimes I upload them to Instagram and Facebook, and I also send my favorite shots to my best friend.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, sửa từ vựng không chính xác và tránh tiếng ừ, à; cung cấp 1–2 lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so that" để rõ ràng hơn. Viết mô tả chính xác về màu sắc và hoạt động bạn thích.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I love the beach atmosphere and the sound of the waves. The blue water and golden sand relax me, and I enjoy swimming and taking photos of the coastline.

× Absolutely yes, I always enjoy the breathtaking landscape out of the car because because it really like really worth taking charges and I always take a lot of picture to post it in my Instagram every day and yeah.

✓ Absolutely yes, I always enjoy the breathtaking landscape from the car because it is really worth it and I always take a lot of pictures to post on my Instagram every day.

The sentence has multiple adjective/adverb and article issues: 'out of the car' is unnatural here; use 'from the car'. 'because because' is duplicated. 'like really worth taking charges' is incorrect phrasing; use 'it is really worth it'. 'a lot of picture' needs plural 'pictures'. 'post it in my Instagram' should be 'post on my Instagram'. Suggestion: simplify clauses, remove duplication, use correct prepositions and plural nouns. ID:13

× Oh absolutely yes, I always take a lot of pictures about that and poses in my Instagram and Facebook sometime and I also flex it to my best friend about the century.

✓ Oh, absolutely yes, I always take a lot of pictures of it and post them on my Instagram and Facebook sometimes, and I also show them to my best friend about the scenery.

Errors include wrong preposition 'about that' (use 'of it' or 'of the scenery'), incorrect word 'poses' (should be 'post'), adverb placement 'sometime' should be 'sometimes', and wrong noun 'century' instead of 'scenery'. 'flex it to my best friend' is informal and awkward; use 'show them to my best friend'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions, plural pronouns for 'pictures' ('them'), correct vocabulary ('scenery'), and proper adverb form. ID:13

× Well, I'm a big fan of sea, so I will choose uh, the beach, umm, because I like the sea landscape with tacos color and yellow sand and enjoy the moment with land.

✓ Well, I'm a big fan of the sea, so I would choose the beach because I like the sea landscape with turquoise water and yellow sand and enjoy relaxing on the shore.

Errors: missing article before 'sea' (should be 'the sea'), use of 'will' in preference question is less natural than 'would', 'tacos color' is incorrect — likely 'turquoise color' or 'turquoise water', and 'enjoy the moment with land' is unclear — 'enjoy relaxing on the shore' is natural. Suggestion: include definite article for 'sea', use conditional 'would' for preferences, choose correct color adjective and clear phrasing for enjoying the beach. ID:13

× And you know, I love taking bitter sea.

✓ And you know, I love taking pictures of the sea.

'taking bitter sea' is ungrammatical: 'bitter' is wrong adjective and 'taking' needs an object — 'taking pictures of the sea' fits context. Likely intended 'taking pictures by the sea' or 'of the sea'. Suggestion: replace incorrect adjective with the noun phrase 'pictures of the sea' or 'photos by the sea'. ID:13