Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve pronunciation ("scenery"), avoid fillers like "umm", and expand the answer into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (max 4–5 sentences). Use a linking phrase if you add reasons or examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out the window when travelling by car. I enjoy watching changing landscapes, especially fields and small towns, because it helps me relax and passes the time. For example, I like noticing seasonal changes, such as blossoming trees in spring.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar ("I take photos" not "I would like to takes"), remove filler "uh", and make the reason specific. Use a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so") to connect reason to action. Keep sentences short and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to keep memories of places I pass. For instance, I sometimes take pictures of unusual buildings or colorful landscapes to look back on later.

Sugerencia: Improve vocabulary and grammar ("green trees and grass", "the height of the mountains"), combine short repetitive sentences into a coherent response using linking words like "because" or "so". Add a specific detail or example to support preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and the green trees and grass. I also like the height and wide views from mountain tops, for example hiking to a peak and seeing the valleys below makes me feel relaxed.

× I look out the window at the screenery when traveling by car. Umm.

✓ I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by car.

The word 'screenery' is a misspelling; the correct noun is 'scenery'. Also remove the filler 'Umm' in a formal answer. Use consistent spelling for 'traveling' or 'travelling' depending on variety; the sentence structure is otherwise fine.

× Yes, I do take photos of the screenery outside the car window. I would like to takes uh a lot of photo for my memory that.

✓ Yes, I do take photos of the scenery outside the car window. I would like to take a lot of photos to keep as memories.

Correct 'screenery' to 'scenery'. Use the base form 'take' after 'would like to'. Use plural 'photos' and the phrase 'a lot of photos' not 'a lot of photo'. Use the prepositional phrase 'to keep as memories' instead of 'for my memory that'. Remove filler 'uh' and the extraneous word 'that'.

× I prefer the mountains. I love to see the green up tree and grass. I love the high of the mountain. I enjoy the view.

✓ I prefer the mountains. I love to see the green trees and grass. I love the height of the mountains. I enjoy the view.

Use plural 'trees' and place 'green' before the noun: 'green trees and grass'. Remove 'up' which is unnecessary. Use 'height of the mountains' rather than 'high' (an adjective) after 'love the'; 'height' is the noun that fits here. Keep plural 'mountains' for consistency.