Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and incorrect word forms (e.g., “sceneries”, “explore nature”). Use correct collocations like “look at the scenery” and “get some fresh air” or “enjoy nature.”

Ejemplo: Yes. I often look at the scenery when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing landscapes. For example, I like seeing farms and forests pass by, which helps me relax and feel refreshed.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tenses and vocabulary. Say whether you usually do it and explain why with a clear linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”). Avoid odd phrases like “put some snacks when snaps.” Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I take photos of the scenery because I want to remember the view. I also like to share a few pictures with my friends, and I usually save the best ones on my phone.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference or explain a balanced view with specific reasons. Use correct plural/singular forms and avoid repetition. Provide one example or brief reason to support your opinion using a linking word like “because” or “for example.”

Ejemplo: I enjoy both the mountains and the sea, but if I had to choose I would pick the coast because I love swimming and watching sunsets. For example, I visited a seaside town last year where the view and fresh air made the trip memorable.

× Yes, I love to see at the sceneries, uh, when I travel by bus or car because the explore nature is very beautiful idea to have some more freshness about the natural uh, climates and see beautiful, uh, sceneries outside.

✓ Yes, I love to see the scenery when I travel by bus or car because exploring nature is a very beautiful way to feel refreshed and enjoy the natural climate and the beautiful views outside.

Multiple errors: 'sceneries' is uncountable in this sense and should be 'scenery' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1: Singular and plural issue). 'see at the sceneries' is incorrect preposition usage; remove 'at' (ID 11). 'the explore nature' uses incorrect verb form and article; use gerund 'exploring nature' and 'a very beautiful way' (ID 8 and 22). 'have some more freshness about the natural climates' is awkward and uses incorrect noun and article; 'feel refreshed' and 'the natural climate' is clearer (ID 13 and 11). Suggestions: use 'scenery' as uncountable, remove unnecessary prepositions, use gerund after 'because', and simplify phrasing for clarity.

× Yeah, sometimes I took photos as well as I also prefer to put some snacks when snaps and share with my friends as well.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I take photos, and I also prefer to bring some snacks when I take snaps and share them with my friends.

Mix of past and present tense: 'took' conflicts with habitual 'sometimes' and 'prefer' (ID 5). Use present simple 'take' for habitual actions (ID 6). 'put some snacks when snaps' is incorrect verb and noun usage; use 'bring some snacks when I take photos' and 'share them' (ID 13 and 12). Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for habits and use correct verbs and pronouns for objects.

× It uh, in this way I uh, trying to keep the memories with me and save them in my phone.

✓ In this way, I try to keep the memories and save them on my phone.

Sentence lacks correct verb form: 'I uh, trying' should be 'I try' (ID 6 present tense issue and ID 26 sentence structure errors). 'keep the memories with me' is awkward; use 'keep the memories' or 'keep them with me'. Use 'save them on my phone' rather than 'in my phone' (ID 11 preposition). Suggestion: remove fillers, use present simple 'I try', and use correct preposition 'on' for saving files.

× Actually, I love to see both mountain and sea seas, but if so, the combination of mountains and seas is incredible.

✓ Actually, I love to see both mountains and the sea, but the combination of mountains and the sea is incredible.

Incorrect singular/plural and repetition: 'both mountain and sea seas' is wrong; use plural 'mountains' and singular 'the sea' or both plural 'mountains and seas' consistently (ID 1). Also use definite article 'the sea' when speaking generally about that environment (ID 17). Suggestion: choose consistent number and use 'the' when referring to a specific type of landscape.

× I love to see that and there are many mountains and seas I have visited in my life and keep the memories with me as well.

✓ I love to see them, and there are many mountains and seas I have visited in my life; I have kept the memories with me as well.

Pronoun reference: 'that' is vague; use 'them' to refer to mountains and sea (ID 12). Tense consistency: 'I have visited' is present perfect which is fine, but 'and keep the memories with me' mixes tenses and lacks auxiliary; use 'I have kept the memories with me' or 'and I keep the memories with me' (ID 6 and 5). Suggestion: use clear pronouns, maintain consistent tense, and add auxiliary verbs where needed.