Part 1
Examinador
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Candidato
Yes, I often do it, especially in my childhood because I always have the curiosities to looking the scenery and the scenery always kept my eyes I already have the more interesting for it.
Examinador
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Candidato
Differently, but if I looking some stranger building I will keep them because I think that's very interesting for me. But if the building is too common, I do not want to take photos.
Examinador
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Candidato
I prefer the sea. I think the sea can make me feel calm and watching the sea is my hobby for many years. I always love to just sit near the seas that make me feel pancreatic.
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答要更自然、语法正确并且直接回应问题。先用一句主题句表明习惯(例如:Yes, I often look out of the window),然后用1–2句具体细节支持,使用连接词(because, so, when)并注意动词和名词的正确形式。避免冗长或重复。
Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I especially enjoyed doing this as a child because I was curious about everything outside, and watching the changing scenery kept me entertained during long trips.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答要先直接肯定或否定,再用连贯理由支持。注意时态和动词形式(look → see/look at),以及词汇搭配(strange building, keep → take/keep photos)。可用连接词(however, but, so)使句子更自然,并给出具体例子。
Ejemplo: Not usually, but sometimes I do. If I see an unusual or historic building I will take a photo because I find it interesting and want to remember it; however, I rarely photograph ordinary buildings.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答要简洁并使用正确的表达方式。先给出偏好,然后用1–2句具体原因支持,注意常见搭配(feel calm, sit by the sea)和时态(for many years)。避免使用错误或不相关词汇(如 pancreatic)。
Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because it makes me feel calm and relaxed. I have enjoyed sitting by the sea for many years, listening to the waves, which helps me unwind after a busy day.
× Yes, I often do it, especially in my childhood because I always have the curiosities to looking the scenery and the scenery always kept my eyes I already have the more interesting for it.
✓ Yes, I often did, especially in my childhood, because I was always curious to look at the scenery and it always caught my eye; I found it very interesting.
问题类型:动词+ -ing 形式 以及 时态与表达不自然。原句中“to looking”是不正确的搭配,应使用不定式“to look”或动名词“looking”但要调整结构;同时句子时态与时间状语“in my childhood”不一致,应使用过去式(did / was)。另外句子结构混乱(“kept my eyes I already have the more interesting for it”无意义),需要重组为自然表达如“it always caught my eye; I found it very interesting”。建议:注意不定式和动名词的正确搭配,确保时态与时间状语一致,并使用简洁明了的句子结构。
× Differently, but if I looking some stranger building I will keep them because I think that's very interesting for me. But if the building is too common, I do not want to take photos.
✓ Not really, but if I see some unfamiliar buildings I will keep photos of them because I think they are interesting. If a building is too ordinary, I won't take photos.
问题类型:动词+ -ing 形式 及 主谓一致、代词使用。原句中“if I looking”应为“if I see”或“if I am looking at”;“some stranger building”用词错误,应为“some unfamiliar buildings”或“strange buildings”;代词“them”需指代复数“buildings”;此外时态与语气需一致(一般现在用于条件)。建议:学习动词短语“look at/see”,注意可数名词的单复数和代词一致性,保持句子时态一致。
× I prefer the sea. I think the sea can make me feel calm and watching the sea is my hobby for many years. I always love to just sit near the seas that make me feel pancreatic.
✓ I prefer the sea. I think the sea makes me feel calm, and watching the sea has been my hobby for many years. I have always loved to just sit near the sea because it makes me feel peaceful.
问题类型:现在时误用与词汇错误。句中“watching the sea is my hobby for many years”与时间状语“for many years”应使用现在完成时(has been)。“I always love”若指过去至今应为“I have always loved”。“seas”在此处应作不可数名词“sea”。“pancreatic”用词错误,应为“peaceful”。建议:注意现在完成时用于表示从过去持续到现在的动作或状态,区分可数与不可数名词,并检查词汇选择是否合适。